Reviews of The Last Primal by Shaele - Webnovel

Dear Visitor/Hoping-to-be-future-reader! Below you can find my own review of this story. I hesitated to do one myself, as it feels cheap (you obviously won’t rate your own story below 5-stars, however, probably currently I’m the only one who can give you the deepest insight into what this story is going to be about. Please take your time to read it through and then make your own judgment about if you would be giving it a try. **** Important: STORY: The story is about who, -in very mysterious circumstances- dies, and gets another chance from a being known as Ioris, before his soul would be cast into the Wheel of Reincarnation. The reason this almighty-being took a liking to our poor protagonist is because his soul was different from the others, something unique, something that this being hasn’t seen since countless millennia. Giving it another chance at life, he blesses our hero, giving him a helper, another higher existence, along with a System, that will aid him on his quest as the Last of his kind, the Last Primal. As a primal, he first has to understands the limits and purpose of his existence, than reclaim what was taken from him, and reclaim his rightful place in the world. CHARACTERS: Most characters have their own personality, their desires, their wants, their needs. There are countless races across the world, almost everything you can imagine in a fantasy world have their presence here. The pacing is slow at the beginning, but that is deliberate, every epic story needs a good start, this is the same here. To understand his future choices and actions, you also need to understand Aiden’s past, his ‘childhood’, the ups- and downs of his life in it’s full spectrum. Writing Quality: There might be some grammar errors, and an occasional slip-up with the genderswap. I try to make sure this doesn’t happen, and I do 2 rounds of checkups (+ I’m using Grammarly as well). Stability of Updates: 1 new chapter between 1500-1700 is something I promised to myself at the start of this journey. One thing I can safely say: This story will not be dropped, no matter what. Unless something happens to me, this story will receive it’s finish at some point in the future. World Background: There are countless hours already invested in this story, among with years of writing and playtime testing in the world you are going to experience. There are literally hundreds of pages of lore that I (and my friends during our RPG nights) created in the past. I did refresh the world and the main story when I decided to go public.

about zenith the last revenant I was reading and just now I saw that it's been almost a year since they released new chapters, I even got a little upset, I stopped at chapter 85 to wait to see if new chapters will be released

Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me

When will you release Zenith the last revenant again? It's been almost a year without releasing new chapters?..........................................

the story was getting good until few chapter comes up, but there still loop holes in the story

I read till chapter 250, I hope the AUTHOR reads my comment and give some answer on why he behaves like this so other who read also understand and decide to read There will be some spoilers but that might make you understand about the story a little bit I mostly read any novel upto 100 chapters or first volume before I decide to tell my opinion, I just feel like this story has great potential and I don't want to see it goes to waste most of it was good the only problem I had was the Mc and female characters like the Amazones,purple hair,little elf, Foe the MC it feels like the author is trying to force humanity on him, he is not even a human and the memories of it is erased so it will be better if he treats every race the same as he is a monster (kind of) himself but sometimes it also feels like he is showing so much mercy, and most importantly he is always carrying baggage like those useless adventure around ch 180 and those two girls around ch 230, he could have solved the problem easily if he goes alone but no he just has to always keep the two girls with him,he could have just told them to go back instead of showing his secrets. And eventime ge faces a problem there was always someone with him who goes like I will be fighting with you too ( like it feels stupid what can they do when they are weaklings themselves at situation likes this it destroys my mood to continue reading, I have to take some time to do something else to forget this stupidity) And the MC acts towards every girls like he jet met with some longtime friend, he could just talk and behave like a normal person but he doesn't. sometimes when the characters converses it feels like watching useless ads they talk too much, worry too much so sometimes feels like watching a Disney movie. And I want to tell the author just because he kills some people doesn't make him a bad guy and just because he saves someone doesn't make him a good guy

Uhh, I feel weird about the cover. When I first saw this, I’d usually look at the cover and desc. When I looked at the cover, I was a middle aged man. Like- why would Aiden be a middle aged man in his new life?! I’ve also read some of the first paragraphs and I’ve gotta say, they might be good. I know, don’t judge a book by it’s cover, but I usually want to find out how the MC looks like since some novels don’t usually define how the MC looks in the later chapters since I skim the chapters. I also don’t know why I’m giving this 5 stars since I’ve only read the first paragraphs. Also, if you feel offended, I’m sorry. But why put wrinkles on his face if you don’t want him to look like a middle aged man?!

the story is really good, but the character's lack of attitude is very frustrating, in more than 400 chapters he only did what other people asked, I'll try to keep reading but I'm almost giving up ....

Awesome Work, Please don't drop the novel. I beg of you

It is a good novel so far its rather slow but not in the bad way alot things happen in the time frame Alot of the time the humans are the real monsters like you know in the other novels few things i dont get: - the mc missed alot of monsters to get stronger even when the system told him to absorb them (i dont mean the pocket world monsters) - 90% of the time the author swaps his/her like he dont knows if its male or female witch is kinda sad and confusing - The long hair why :( dont like the style but i like it and i will continue to read it

lot of honey,sugerand some spice mix in this story . Sorry but this is not my cup of tea.I can't be able to see most powerful specie's last survival to behave like a good and clingy boy (yuk)and this story for 10-12 year ages kids.

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this Book was a waste of Time.i'm just seeing another fan of japonese novel trying to write about a good Guy in as dark World what a waste of a good concept

The Last Primal is a story about Aiden, someone who died and was allowed to reincarnate into a new world because of his unique soul. He has a system to help him survive. Not exactly the most unique idea, but I usually like these kinds of novels. Unfortunately, this novel has quite a few problems. Writing quality is slightly below average. No obvious mistakes, but there's several run-on sentences here and there, along with some excessive descriptions. However, compared to other novels, this can be considered average. (3/5 stars) The story development is partially what made me drop this novel. There isn't a terrible amount of consistency, and I am unsure if other things are plot holes because I haven't read that far. However, I'll just mention a few things. Main character is a slime in a new world. Upon awakening, his system tells him to kill and absorb some bugs. Thus, he does. Later, he ends up killing a snake, and when he is hungry, he decides to go kill some bugs. However, for whatever reason, now that he is a snake, he has empathy? For some reason he constantly hesitates and feels guilty for killing them for whatever reason. Ignoring the fact that he killed these same bugs less than ten chapters ago. Furthermore, the main character had a blessing from God, which allows him to forcibly absorb something in case he is in danger. After being swallowed by a snake, he is in his slime form. For whatever reason, the main character decides it would be a good idea to waste this blessing (he can only use it twice) on the snake. He claims to have analytical abilities, but that isn't the case whatsoever. He could've absorb whatever the snake ate, thus starving it, or simply suffocated it by squirming out of it's stomach. Once the main character gets out of the cave, the story seems even more forced. (2/5 stars) Onto the character design. Alright, main character claims at some point he was good at analytical thinking. This is not the case. He constantly asks stupid questions to the system, completely relying on it. I can't really judge the main character, as his personality is completely inconsistent. However, from other reviews I can tell he's going to stay as your average beta main character. Last point, the system has a conscious, so it is technically a real person. This is rather annoying, because this seems like a poor excuse to advance the plot in various scenarios. Also, what was the point of allowing the main character to keep some memories from his previous life if your just going to erase them in the first ten chapters? Last point, a granny and little girl find a dragon egg, and for some reason they stay and approach it despite saying it was dangerous? (1/5 stars) World background is average. I haven't read too far for various reasons. Seems like a typical fantasy with dragons and elves. Not a whole lot seems unique. Not a whole lot to review about this point either. (3/5 stars) Overall, this novel needs a proofreader and better planning. Story is rather inconsistent, and a talking system was unneeded, especially since it limited any form of character development. I give this novel 2.8 stars out of 5.

A good idea for a story, with some decent potential for long term writing but it is filled with too many holes, and the characters could use some more substance..

Slow Story... I just read all free chapter and the story didnt make me hook up to pay the paid chapter.. maybe someone will read and endure the slow story

it actually pained me that I only read the reviews on the page without checking the rest because if I did I would have avoided this 🤦🏽😐.trash mc, trash system that behaves like his mother and hides all info from him while making all decisions for him, horrible side characters and conversations, it's like reading a Disney bedtime story only that it's now super long and slow

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I think the story is pretty good and sort of interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.

Had great potential but had to get a system that acts like a mother and the mc protects a little girl just because they saw him in a egg and his mental age went backwards and started to act like a chimp and the mc cant kill a fly

Uma história interessante, o tempo passa de forma meio caótica e as evoluções não são gradativas e o personagem e muito infantil em 80% das vezes, as coisas acontecem de forma estranha, mas isso deixa a história interessante tbm

The english itself is pretty good except for all the he/she his/her mistakes, and the story just develops finne i guess, one think i was so upset about and wanted to quir the novel was when he was about to evolve. Given 3 choices, being a draconian, goblin lord, or a big blue human wit insane power, where all the drawbacks are literally negated by his existence... i obviously would choose the GOBLIN LORD!!!! Even before, the choice between a feral goblin, hobgoblin or feral orc... again, feral goblin and feral orc wohld basically have no drawbacks... bur he favores the hobgoblin. Can u get this shit out of my face? Nobody wants such poor decisionmaking and especially a goblin as a main char, if the orher options would be an insanly strong blue human or a Draconian! Seems so dumb and forced i dont get it.

At the time of review i am at chapter 68 The primal thing is really interesting, the ability to constantly evolve is nice, tapping in different powers and potentials. The guiding spirit is really nice, honestly she's much better than mc himself, if you ask me. But, mc's personality is too much for me.. He has a tendency for a hero, has some things that some would put him in the category of a cliche hero of an anime that rages and goes blank( there were few moments). He's quite the fool and doesn't really think things through. Well, yes he lost his memories and i don't know how much will he improve when he gets them back. FL character is a loud, quite obnoxious girl that screams all the time " I' the big sis, i need to stand proud by my brother's side" and been super pampered , well, seems now it's a little better. There's slow romance between them. (they're not blood related) . Initially when i saw this title i thought - oh, there'll be a nice calm, calculating mc -- badass . Not so much, at this moment especially. In my opinion, Writing Quality 3.5 Story development 3 Character design 2 : Like i said, These designs are not my cup of tea and i find them often quite flawed. So far, Enya is the best character. World Background - 3.5 Can't really say much , because there wasn't a lot of information but let's go I really liked the idea of Primals, but unfortunately the development shown .. not my cup of tea You can give it a try , and tell me your take on the characters !

This is a masterwork novel and there's only a few like it in my opinion. The start of the novel is normal and maybe can be considered as boring but for those who decide to continue they will find the hidden treasure here...The MC is very powerful but he has something like existential crisis for some reason (will be mentioned in the novel) he forget an important section of his memories but he start to collect himself because his mother-like system who almost take care of everything for him in the frist few days for him (you know like a mother) his relationship with other important characters is warmer the more he grow he feel indifferent toward humanity in general because of their nature and he is over protective of his big sister. the other important characters is not some stepping stones for the MC but actually have a a depth to them and have their different ideal and ambition ... the growth of the younger generation has a always a relationship with the growth of the MC. The harem or the romantic part of this novel is far in the 300-400 chapters and even then the MC is still young and the most he do until know is a kiss ... Will most of his life simply consist of training with his master and big sister and the first time he go solo without the protection of his master and grandmother he actually and unknowingly charmed three women and get his first kiss, and he actually even make his sister a bro-con while they trained together ... So he is a natural love magnet and this when he is still young kid. The world is complicated and the author don't explain much of it so it's still a mystery.

I know it isn't good to write a bad review because of the hard work you put into it and I appreciate you for it, it's not right to judge it with those famous books but I am just venting out my frustrations. First: I don't like character development. Characters are too naive, and Aiden, wtf is wrong with him? He is plain stupid, always getting manipulated and getting in troubles and thanking for that. And all that powers coming from the system, what is the need for all that? Show off? Fk, it is like --> angry 😤(I am gonna kill all those bastards)> then comes Master/ Granny, "no dearie, you should be patient and let them fk you and you should let them go because we need to be benevolent"-->then, " Yes yes granny/master, you are right", he nods his head like an obedient dipst. Fk, happening every time. 2nd Lily: I don't understand what naivety has to do with cuteness, sure some naiveness is good but not to the point of being stupid. And 3 Number: the heck is she, she is such a manipulative b. Always getting away with every wrong decision she makes in the name of good. The heck? There is a saying " An intelligent enemy is better than a stupid friend". It makes perfect sense. I don't know if it will improve if I read further on, just hoping that it doesn't disappoint me. I am just giving a review, sure I would care only about myself, because it's me that I am trying to entertain, so I should have been selfish in giving the review, but I just couldn't control my frustration.

The only thing keeping this from being a rare 5 star novel is the constant pronoun mistakes. They are constantly wrong and it hurts the experience a bit and requires extra thought to follow because of it.