Reviews of Second Journey (Highschool DXD Fanfic) by AoiLuna - Webnovel

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Teraten
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Teraten

Loving the story so much some hick ups with gramer but this is a fan-fic get over it as long as you get the overall story this is great hope for more chapters and more background stories on the main character \(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥
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StarWriting
I'm giving an honest review here, this story isn't readable in it's current form. There's a grammar error almost every sentence that just makes this not worth the effort to read. Also you having an OC just follow along with the general dxd plot and change nothing is pretty much the absolute lowest form of fanfiction there is. It's like reading one of those aweful naruto fanfictions where someone will add a forth member to team 7. No one wants to read that...That's what you're doing here.
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