This is a good story the characters are fleshed out the main character has a life goal and is activelY working towards it not only that But the world makes Sense
holy sh*t that was dark......and i love it, kinda ironic since i work at a hospital and we'd never wanna see these kinds of cases in our "house". Doesnt change anything though, just love to imagine myself venting out on mc's like this. Like them doing something i'd never do( because its not me and thats obviously batshit crazy)
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A ruthless OP MC with good story and dedication. He has business empire and is determined. He has power, money, mind . So, should I pack it.
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The main character has no action for the things he is obsessed with, these obsessions are only created to provide reasons for the actions he takes.
He acts callous but actually acts quite childish for someone who has been reincarnated.
I think this martha(lover) thing is quite annoying and not worth waiting for.
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Crazy, the story is really good I swear!! The best Marvel fanfic I've ever read is here, and the one I like the most doesn't have any romance, but why is it rarely updated? The last time I saw him was 3 months ago, Please don't stop in the middle of an exciting story, author. Fighting!
One of...If not the best marvel fanfic out there it got everything you can ask for cool powers, kingdom building, character development... It's AMAZINGLY GOOD!!!!
One of the only mutant fics that doesnt rely on naivete, postive feelings for the future, non realistic idealisms. Kinda edgy,but understandable I mean cmon look at his username. This could be like the start of like that fanfic with SO MUCH CHARISMA BUT ALMOST NO ACTION( Rise of the saiyan empire).
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As I understand it (I certainly didn't bother too much). our opening is the fact that their children, whose parents see them as demons, actually turn out to be demons and torture them. I think that would be the most accurate explanation. If you let someone else experience what you are experiencing, you automatically become that person.
One of the worst storys on webnovel. Making a villian for a villians sake. The MC is the worst. No redeeming qualities just a childish pyscho on a journey to a terribly disgusting and sad future. there's no good ending for a freak like this. No structure, no reason, just evil for evils sake in the end. im stunned someone would want to read such garbage, even more stunned someone would want to write it. If the author is feeling down in life just know it'll get better.
Quite intriguing and interesting especially with the OC/MC having dedication to his race of Elysians or mutants , having a business empire and the intelligence to bring the technology and everything else up and rise it to new heights, the love and care for his people , the ruthlessness to deal with enemies or a show of power overall I have enjoyed reading all of this book look forward to reading more as well for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
This sucks, Grammar is horrible and story has an idiotic idea of killing for fun. As if the whole plot is harming others for the sake of fun. The MC is ruthless Iβll tell you that, but itβs stupid because his ideals are killing mutant haters. The idea is nice, but executed poorly.
One of the meat MCU fics I have read. Great original content, great storyline, great character and doesnt follow other generic Marvel fics. This is truly a. Amazing story with a Mc that shows growth.
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One of the great marvel fanfiction that I have read so far, it is great. Don't let that "dark theme" stop you from reading this book...if anything I'll say that its not even dark at all. The MC react as how regularly human would have react if given the power to do so.
There are a few writing issues but it is not a problem, a solid 4/5.
Stability, from what I have read, author has alot of stuff to do besides writing, solid 4/5.
I like the story and character, 5/5.
World? It is marvel, it has its own universe, author does not need to explain! (This is a fanfic so 4/5. :P)
Keep up the good work!
(Ps. I read all the capters currently released in 2-3 days.)
The truth is that I love this story, it is the best I have read and whenever you upload new chapters I finish reading them very quickly and I end up wanting more chapters, it does not matter if the main character is dark or the story becomes dark , I think that is what you need to become incredible, so please continue like this and upload more chapters as long as you can but please do not delay !!!!
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Read this without any expectations and an open mind this is a fanfic not a novel reading is great when it's used for you're enjoyment so don't ruin the fun with your negative reviews who want too many things.
This is what I do when reading a story that leans more in the dark and edgy side and I end up enjoying it sometimes they can get a bit too much but just skip it No one's forcing you to read it.
story not bad ........................................................................................................But you need to seek help, you got issues man.
Bad very bad and boring
Grammar is bad.
Extreme unnecessary violence. It makes it feel like a wuxia or xianxia. Kill him and his family etc etc.
It also feels poorly planned.
Most people just rate it high because it dark nothing else.
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