Pretty decent story so far. Fast paced - not much character or world building but I am interested to see how it progresses. Just starting to get interesting.
I just read this novel and so far I like . The MC is not some sentimental fool and deeply loves his family . Although he is back and seems like he lost all his former power but he is still strong . Let's read more , shall we ??
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A great book I feal like the chapters are short but it's probably becouse I enjoyed it so much.
A cliché story but for some reason it is a very enjoyable read. MC is very 'unique' in a good way
The story is good. The reason of my low rating is some chapters has grammatical and wrong word spelling problem. The story progresses too quickly at the beginning chapters.Author didn't mention how MC survived in HELL dimension.If he had a system or other ability to survive in hell.The levels in this novel is bad.Author gave them basr attributes at 50.Which really doesn't have that much power.And another flaw is that MC gets hurt many times but they are not mentined later.And doesn't even says how he handled them.
Some suggestion
1)Improve attribute power.Not number but the power they hold with the number.
2)Get a proof reader. Some grammatical mistakes are annoying.I saw you reuploaded some chapter from their update dates but there are still plenty of chapters that needs to be fixed.
3)The OP MC is good but his leveling is too fast.Even though the levels doesn't hold the power they do in other novel.But still you could try to improve them.
dwarfgiant