Chapter comments on the chapter The Day the Earth changed (Part-2) of the book A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world

The story is too hard to read.

So, it may be a silly thing to get hung up on in this kind of novel, but the nail gun thing really bothers me. For one, they are specifically made so that you can not shoot nails through the air like a real gun, unless you disable the safety feature somehow. Then, say you do manage to make it shoot nails, they would be very short range, very slow, very inaccurate, and you’d be lucky if they even left a scratch if they hit a person from across the room. It always bothers me seeing them used as weapons.

I know the author is 80 chaps in already. but I really hope the spacing between lines gets improved. the whole story seems chunky and is made of run on sentences. it isn't too bad, but with the improper English, and repeating lines. it gets annoying and difficult to read.

Harem harem harem

This story is so hard to read. It is just a bunch of run-on sentences, out of order words, improperly punctuated thoughts, bad english, and mussed together transitions from one person's perspective to the next.I like the story so far, at least the parts I can decipher.I just hope the writing issues improve with time.

Aside grammatical errors, it's a superb read.(⌐■-■)

Exp

XD

so far so good

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

the transition from one person to the next is very harsh. cant just have the next paragraph start from a different perspective. break it up somehow

omg, please, please get an editor - this is such a chore to read through.

so far it is quite good but i get the feeling that it was somewhat rush..good job author

😁😁😁😁

Niice