Reviews of A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world by SagelyDaoist - Webnovel

basically the first story I read so I can just say it was interesting 🙃

I don't use to read books before or be a bibliophile for novels but this started my journey of reading and increasing my imagination capabilities it's a lovely book and I even downloaded the app because of it oh and at the time of writing this I'm in chapter 150 😁

I'm kind of impressed, thos was the first thing I have ever read that has made me not want to read it based on the first sentence. ................................................................

It's a good story. it has great potential. It needs an editor to point out grammar errors and typos.

bruh this is migraine inducing. it needs serious editing , and is loaded with meandering run on sentences. from what I gathered in 12 chapters it's a decent ish story, but seriously in its current state it's going to give someone a stroke. also mp seems excessively childish for someone who is so talented.

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Author has no clue what actually represents as a peice of technology, lol. Just from the summary itself, I am already quite disappointed.

As of chapter 27 mc is a 3D printer with integration no technomancy to be seen. mc the 15 y/o "genius" "self-raised" emancipated "adult" the acts and gets treated like he's eight y/o Which could be explained by coddling if he wasn't practically abused and talked down to every second chapter but hey you know the apocalypse is rough everyone's high strung and order needs to be kept... i suppose.

The grammar is bad, really bad, one of the worst ive seen on here. Not to mention theres no real flow to this “novel” and its all over the place.

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Synopsis was excellent clearly explains enough to catch readers interest. Chapter 1 which I dropped at ruins entirety of it Sentence structure is almost non existent I find it hard to believe that their is a family like that, horrible siblings and parents sure but to not even notice son isn't living with them Is difficult to believe. Another thing difficult to believe is them being so oblivious that they don't notice mc success in things

it's a good story idea and the cheat the mc has is cool but that's all I have. the mc is an idiot and acts like he is 10 he is supposed to be a super genius accepted to MIT at 15 but he is an idiot and has no maturity at all. the people around him coddle him and treat him like he is 10 also. I mean he totally fabricated base and a water/sewer system from nothing and then builds a vehicle from scratch and has killed people but they still talk to him like hes a toddler and he takes it. I really cant get into the aunt and the freak women because that whole thing is terrible.. the dialogue is terrible and needs and editor in the worst way. the best chapter of the story was the first one and then it went to crap.

Great idea, but bad writing quality in the early chapters. Also the events are not that clear...............................................

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Author i love this novel and i never found a problem with your grammar i just ignore it because the story is so amazing dont listen to the bad reviews ok

Unreadable. I really hope this novel is just an unfortunate google translate experiment. But deep in my soul I know that the author wrote all those terrible english sentences all on his own. Atrociously bad grammar and sentences structure.

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The story is good but the author writes very slowly. It should not be that difficult to write the events that will happen.At least the connected chapter should release together.

LAB you guys... I love this story so far and its very interesting since I like reading apocalypse stories... If you guys have other apocalypse recommendations plss tell me, Im in need of Something to read😘😂😂🥰😩😎

I only read the first couple of chapters, but I already liked the plot and the character, but the writing quality was really too bad for me to continue reading. Sorry. If you don't mind horrid writing quality, then I recommend.

Listen if you want your story to ebcome better you have to fix it yourself and read everyone’s comment. I might sugar coat this, but many people would not and have no reason to because you chose to put this novel up unless you figure out how it fails it will keep failing. just a comment hope you can understand

It's a good story, but the grammar keeps on throwing me off. Fix this and it will be amazing. 👍👍👍👍👍 Hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha HA!

I only got two episodes in, but the grammer and a few things that were said (not bad things just could have worded it better to suit the story) just put me off of the story. the concept is good but it was approached badily. the later chapters could be better but i just cant bring myself to continue reading it.

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This novel is overall terrible sorry for being harsh but i have several ofher novels like this in my library and i decided to read them today and all i found was a waste of my time its like you all perfect your first ch and synopsis afterward it goes down the drain and many have other novels that are the exact same state its sad

i see wall of text, hard to read, hard to visualize, hard to imagine, hurts my eyes and imagination, I don't know why people recommend this.

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