absolutely love this book. every update is long and very detailed. I'm happy the author can take comments that are good or bad. It shows no matter the comments the author will carry on writing. That is committed to the story and fans. That to me as a fan and someone who will hopefully be buying books from this author in the future I can get behind and support.
The best DARK ROMANCE book I read so far!
The story is fast-paced .you will know within the first chapter. It feels cliche but it defo isn't.
The Authors note is EVERYTHING I started to read because of it more than the synopsis, .As she doesn't promise a cliche story and putting up with abuse.. especially FL reflects the promise of the note(don't want to spoil much).
Characters
Alexis- She is intelligent and accepts the circumstances she is in and once recognizes the power she eventually learns to use it to her advantage some cool 'power plays' . Don't expect FL to forgive everything in a heartbeat and gives excuses for abuse and put up with it. Yes, there is attraction and she accepts and enjoys it as is pinned down with no way out anyways. You can see her thoughts are never of love and she isn't ok with his behaviour and bad blood between them. Our girl considers big bad mafioso as her 'plaything'!๐
Angelo- First 3 chapters his intention is clear. He is a mafia head he is not one who changes overnight and is all soft with FL nor are his methods to win her. There is more realistic character development with both characters.
The story is focused more on the main leads and their journey in a relationship and how they are adapting. There are other characters, not much is shared about them apart from necessary info for building on main characters. Maybe because this is a short novel but the main characters make up for it but hopefully the sequel will cover it!
Writing style -It's very engaging and dynamic also the story isn't stretched. As promised it has surprising elements from both characters and their past. Keeps you intrigued by a secret only some characters know. Some dark tactics you totally don't expect from both leads..you won't know what hit you like yellow fellow ๐
Author Inara - I appreciate that she can be sporty and take critical feedback and she addresses the reader's comments and complaints. Also open to readers' opinions and suggestions isn't as pushy with rank/votes but it should totally have a much higher rank! โฅ๏ธ
I completely enjoyed it, definitely recommend it! Totally worth every coin spent
Compelling, and interesting! Realistic development both internal and external.
Finally a Dark Romance thatโs actually Dark. If your definition of Dark Romance is falling for a mysterious guy whoโs strangly kind to the FL then Iโm sorry but thats not dark. Thatโs 75% of all romance stories. This is not a bad boy/good girl story. This has complex people, in a complex world, its realistic, and believable.
Not for the faint of heart. Thereโs abuse and violence. If its not your cup of tea, dont drink, and find a different story. Please dont bash the author just bc you cant handle what they write. There are many stories on this app that can fit your specific needs as a reader. Go find them. Its difficult enough for the writers to come up with content. Everyone is allowed to express their creativity in their own way. No need to break others down. If you want a certain type of story but cant find it, thereโs an option to write your own books.
I just finished this novel and thought of leaving a review. honestly i dont know ehat to feel about the ending but the story is like really dark so if you are reading you need to have patience every human being has faults but it our responsibility to correct then there is character development so you need to have patience the story is not stretched. the female lead is a strong one but reading about her past makes me utterly sad and just think of how strong she is to go on and not give up you will have inspiration from her but time again she gets tormented and she overcomes it. how? read the novel to find out.
thanks for reading my review.
This is not your usual ML or even FL. The story is dark and oftentimes disturbing but absolutely enthralling. I really liked how believable the narrative is and it definitely doesn't romanticise being the love interest of a mafiano as lots of other stories do. Well done author for creating this piece. I only wish the writing was better because there were way too many spelling errors or even whole sentences just didn't make sense and I was confused. The book needs heavy editing, otherwise it's a fantastic read.
Wow and ๐ฒ...this book was amazing!! I have been a fan of dark romance for years now and I can say I have read many stories. This book is comparable to any on the NY bestsellers list. I highly recommend this to all persons that love dark romance like me. Now I'm onto the next dark romance sequel from the same author ๐คฉ๐โค๏ธ
The character development in this book is just so real! You can feel it happening right infront of you. Great story. Well written. Kept One hooked Up For months. The Frequency of updates Too was frequent and hence kept the curiosity at peek. Loved this book. I am sure the That the sequel is going to be even better.
i dont really lnow what to say but oh mt god i got so wrapped info rhe story as it progressed it felt like i was watching a trainwrecl in front of my eues, anxiously waiting for alexis to make the most of her power
This was hard to read at first because of the abuse that goes on. It's really not glamorizing abuse at all but showing what it does to people. It is pretty dark but it really sucked me in. It's not a love story. Itโs like, you hate the ML but then start to kind of be ok with him only to hate him again. The author keeps you on your toes. The book is updated regularly too. This is the first one in my library I read when I see that update. This is a really good read. I look forward to the second book. Keep up the good work author ๐ ๐
I hope I'm not too late to the party. this is the author's second book I've read. the first was a werewolf based book. please check it out on her profile. that book is awesome. now coming to this one, it's a cut above other Mafia books I've read. guys.... READ HER BOOKS!
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This is seriously My new favorite book. It is dark with turns snd it is a refresher to not know what is going to happen next in a book. seriously good job
Love it. I Highly recommend you to read this. I give it five stars for writing quality, five stars for stability of updates, five stars for story development, five stars for character design, and five stars for world background. [img=recommend]
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Author l very much agree to your ideology
l myself feel that if they commit a crime
punishment should be similar what they done to victim.
I am not talking against law but such monsters do not deserve any kind of forgiveness.It's more like insult to monster to call them bcoz they are worse than a monster
I just started reading this but Iโm not going to lie, its definitely dark. Not for the faint of heart. With that being said, so far I love it! Im nervous and scared and intrigued.
Aaaahhhhhggh, i want to read more but i don't have any coins left of anything else. Its suck so much when i just begun reading this novel. Dont find it anywhere else either. ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
I was hesitate to continue reading after a few chapter because..wow. However, it sucked me in. Can't get enough! You won't be disappointed by reading this story. Maria Romance's are my jam!
What is she planning against these two. She should have not gone in the strip club. shes too good for that. im surprised angelo let her. too funny he was tackled to the ground
Allesandro us the devil how can he say he loves her when he is so cruel to her. she didnt ask for this. he took her away frim her life. hate how they portray women as property
this book is beautifully written, the authors choice of words are amazing. keep it up author. from the first line to the last it's perfection, keep it up!
Cannot wait to read, I am doing a before and after, so yeah here is me before not Knowing anything. Ill just rate this based on the imformation told before you read. -Im very excited because this is going to be one of first books im reading on this app. Cant really say much lol
loved this story. it's amazing and exciting. everyone one should read it and support it. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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