Shameless Author here to say that this Novel will incorporate many different Anime all into one Multiverse, and while most worlds like Bleach, DxD, Naruto, Food Wars, and the Earth side of Dragon ball will be centered around Earth, places like SDS, One Piece, all the other planets and Universes of Dragon ball, and a few other Anime based on different geographical structure will be other planets in the Multiverse that Soren will go to. Thanks for reading this long review
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I rated 1'5 star because I think there is too much going on. In my opinion, there are too many worlds mixed and I think that the global PL isn't as it should be. I have to say that I stopped reading it because in the final chapters it started getting boring. Good luck and see ya.
Stop being an asshole giving 1 star review? Go write your novel then. Remember author is writing for fun. Some may donate but it was there will your free to read or donate if you like the novel
Your free to give advice. But don't act like a bitch that know it all. Try to think if you write your own novel and someone just give it 1 star without reading it. What will you feel? Problem author spamming his own review on his. Novel? Whats wrong? Is it wrong to advertise your own novel? Bloody idiots.
**. Sorry for my English as its not my native language.
So the Mc dies young, he was 16-17 years old. God tells him it was his time to die and was not killed by mistake by god, but god reads his mind and thought the anime worlds were cool so he decided to put them all together in this massive universe filled with strong beings, then sent the Mc to that world after giving him a system and allowing him to pick his race. He of course, picked to be born as a Saiyin.
It starts of relatively okay, he was born on earth. He has a mom and a dad. His saiyin mom is actually his mom from the Mc's past life that died and was reborn in to the multiverse. There's a huge time skip till he is 17 years old with a battle power of 25,000. The first people he interacts in this world are the people from HDxD. There are people that spy on him and Mc has no fucking clue which did annoy me.
The author does kill off his mother, probably to motivate the MC for what ever reason even though he's a reincarnated person with a second chance that is also a saiyin that love to fight and get stronger. So i don't know why he would need something to motivate him to get stronger. He does bringer her back to life using the Dragon balls.
So a great way to make him waste a wish by killing off his mother and forcing him to wish her back. But it was a Bs chapter because it felt super forced to have the Mc witness his mothers death. Felt like those super cliche scenes in movies when the kids witnesses one of there parents death. He's gonna fu*king turn in to batman now.
But hey nothing really changes when it comes to him being a real saiyin. Since he does get married, But only uses her as a way to get his dik wet. Then he runs off to train only to do it all over again.
So the universe and earth are filled with tons of strong people from different anime's. Even though some of them don't make sense why they are there since there world are in different timelines then a modern earth, one of them being Naruto. Like it would make sense if the author made it so that only some of the anime characters from the Naruto world came over. And he had the Hidden Villages be some sort of secret organization of ninjas, since it would fit more then bringing everyone in the Naruto world in, but he does not.
The Naruto world is not small at all. So i don't know how you can keep there same plot going in the modern world. For gods sake, Narutos village is only 3 hours away from Kuoh Town. I have no idea how it's still hidden with so many strong people around. But as you read you end up realizing that it was sort of a forced placement by the author since he wanted to use narutos clone jutsu.
Now If you are coming in to this novel expecting the Battle power to be the same as the DBZ universe, don't. You will only become confused and annoyed by trying to wonder why someone low ranking devil from the dxd world has a high amount of Bp. I don't know why the author decided to change the Bp. I wish he would have used the DBZ Bp as a base to show how strong people are, but instead he changes the Bp to be something that's super fking confusing to understand because it seems to change depending on the race.
It's like going to math class after studding for along time thinking you know all the answers. But you get a 0 because the teacher decided that 2+2 does not =4 anymore, and he made it so 2+2 now =222. So don't read while using common sense cuz you will have a bad time.
I think every race has a different Bp? other then Saiyins, since it seems like his Bp is similar to the DBZ anime. I'm telling you this Battle power **** is allover the place in this story. For example The Mc helps Naruto when the war happens and he helps take out Madara. At the time the Mc has about 3.4mill Bp, when Madara has about 3Mill. And at the same time I believe Naruto is around the same or close to the same as Madara.
Since Neji used his byakugan to see The Mc's strength, and mentions that he gives off the same filling Naruto gives off power wise.
So don't know how even Madara or Naruto are still close to his strength but whatever. I tried to stop thinking about the Bp or even his stats and how his % on his saiyin blood line worked cuz it would make my head hurt thinking about it.
After the war ends and he helps defeat trihexa he goes to the One piece world, that's in a different planet on another galaxy. As soon as this arc starts The story takes an even more boring path. I was already struggling to read the story before this, but now it was a no go so i skimmed threw it.
He arrived in the one piece world 8 years before the cannon started he ends up getting another wife, mean while his other wife back on earth has spent 8 years thinking her loved one is dead, and so do his friends. But in reality he is having a good time banging some other girl he made his wife.
This novel has allot of issues, but even so i was enjoying it when i turned by brain off and just mindlessly read. Till the one piece part cuz he decided to just crew up with the straw hat gang and follow the cannon. Mean while his wife back on earth still thinks he's dead.
Now where should I start?
Well lets first talk about the PL/BP.
In the start of the Saiyan Saga, Piccolo blew up the moon. Now I don't know about u but back then I pretty sure he had a PL of around 1000 give or take. Now in CH 2 of this novel we had a look at the MC's stats and his PL which was 25k. Pretty high right? Well when he asked his system about how strong he is compare to everyone else the system put him on a lvl of Rizer/Riser!!! Bull**** Vegeta at the Saiyan Saga had a PL of 18k!!
2nd Reason is that there is too many worlds combined that it's basically ****ed. Why? Because GOH and DXD does not work together unless a character from one of the 2, transfer to the other. Think about this Odin from DXD and Odin from GOH are so different. Odin in GOH looked like a cartoon devil. While Odin from DXD looked like an old man. Also 666 in GOH is the devil as in Satan while in DXD there are 4 Satans. Also in GOH there is a supreme Being who is believed to be Buddha. Also in GOH Beelzebub much crueler than it's DXD counter part.
3rd and final reason(I have more but I don't have time so wait, I will add more when I have time) I saw the arthour reply a comment about the MC being weaker than the red head sis con Satan and he replied that it's because in this 'world' there is more gods. Now in Dragon Ball there are also Gods who are way stronger call the Kais. These beings are Gods in the DB world. There are also Angels of DB who I mind you that are stronger than Gods of Destruction. The Angels in DXD are weak beings beside the Angels eho have more than 10 wings. Also what about Zeno?
Some might complain that this story contains way too much crossovers, I agree but i think the author has actually done a great job integrating them.....some might complain about the power rankings or those things but what'd some of you expect from a novel that has tons of crossovers, did you expect them to have the same exact power levels as the originald atleast the author has a sense of how butterfly effect is.....
The story is good but the power level is kinda ****ed up, please don't take this as an insult but their are to many crossovers if it's one or two it would have been fine but more than that it won't make any sense it's. I think it's better to write a multiverse story.
Love your work by the way thank you for your time and effort
The storys structure, etc is dope
Why low rating.....author has merged many worlds together, and MC is neutered as ****.
SAO, food wars, DBZ, DXD, bleach,etc....so many worlds with different time and lore and powerlevels all merged together...its stupid cause they'll all clash.
Then theres MC is a who is saiyan, [a person from planet vegata, cause DBZ exists here] Saiyan a race from an anime which probably has the strongest characters in all of anime, so mixing em with some weak shits is stupid......like MC has a BP of over 30000 and yet he is only as strong as a low tier high class devil...its kinda retarded considering vegeta in the being of DBZ only had about 18000 BP and he could already destroy planets.....point is author neuters MC so much and eventually all the different lore and powerlevels will all clash and mess up.............so yah...like theres even 7 deadly sins and one piece here, worlds with different concepts and time [era's]......so yah...IDK,
[Also if MC is so weak how come no one noticed some random aliens coming to earth? what happened, I mean since u neuter the saiyans so much u, cant say they were undetectable considering they [ MC parents ] only had 3000 or so BP?, like they are cannon forder...so yah, if it was cannon saiyan they'd be undetectable, but here since they are neutered ,nah...pretty sure anyone would be interested in aliens, and intruders]..
GL to u author, but its messed up u neuter ****, but still GL, u gonna need it