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Tomoyuki
An awesome zombie story, Mark is an amazing, down to earth character, and I look forward to seeing him survive this apocalypse! As well as making his mark on the world!
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Cruchymonster
Yes a self review of 5 stars by this author. I try to on my own pace and try to release atleast one chapter everyday. I like to increase or decrease the pace of the story depending on the moment of the characters. With a big background for the MC, he might be a bit confusing in the beginning but will get clearer as time goes on.
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abcdefgxyz123
END IS HERE...oh I like that... author improved his grammar compared to his previous novel...and grammar mistakes are little to none. Nice starting, so far good. It's a type of novel which action mixed with lite gore(I am not of fan of it though). So far story is normal and no plottwists or something make it say wow. but it's nice novel. World background is same as modern so there's nothing to say but author writing about surroundings is good. Character development is nice and like that MC don't become douche bag after apocalypse started like mc in god and devil world. Hope that he won't become douchebag. Nice work author.
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A_jennie_
well your title attracted me towards your art very well written,I like zombies so I'm going to read it....😩✨ 5 stars for the title.....[img=coins]
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bbugs61
Well I stopped at chapter 7 the rooftop. I just could not get into the MC wishy washiness. I guess we have the Mona girl with the katana coincidentally ( I read from one of the author's comment that there is a reason). But honestly if I know the end of the world is coming today I am not sending my kid to work. So I have no idea what that reason may be. But overall I don't know why I just can't get into the story. Maybe it is the excessive description of each actions or the physically perfect MC with some forced mental health issues but the novel isn't really for me. But good luck author anyway.
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Nicolas_Sherman
great book plenty of plot twists I love this book and cannot wait to see where it goes mark is a great character and unlike other books he doesn't just all of a sudden immediately have godlike powers out of nowhere and more detailed about food gathering and gathering ammo which makes it more realistic
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Scorpion_Wish
JusT because n he was blunt enouGh!!
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Shanique_Mahbeir_3863
Totally amazing story. The background is on point. Characters are relatable. The story is well developed. Barely any errors insight. Very recommended read.
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LiquidatedSteel
Meh Feels like its going to fast the progression but hey its my opinion and you can read to make your own so have a nice day. You probably:
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Sorin_Deishuu
A zombie apocalypse story. How awesome is that? I love how you made this book, keep it up! btw, when you got the time check on my story too.
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OnionRerouted
I'll give 4 stars on everything simply because you're an original author, and your book has potential, however, Mark's arrogant internal monologue just ended up giving me a headache, his character that didn't fit the descriptions you gave at the start made him even more annoying to the point where I had to give up at the end of the rooftop chapter, and just skim read ahead to at least give a reasonable review... the main things that led to my problems with Mark are that quite simply, nothing about him makes sense, he's unusually handsome yet apparently is massively depressed, self confidence is extremely important in making someone seem attractive... the man was seriously considering suicide, I get him wanting to live because the zombie apocalypse is fascinating, but if that's the case, he'd either entirely forget his desire to die, or spend some time coming to terms with it, not mention it every few minutes for you to seemingly, bolster your word count, which is honestly what the first chapters felt like... then, there's his arrogance that seems to shine through when speaking to the woman that saved his life because he stupidly said he wanted to fight some zombies, then decided to run around a sofa instead, while still acting like he's freaking action man, and seemingly, no-one even blinked an eye to it... the hints at him being a gamer in the first chapter seemed really important, then his actions didn't even slightly follow that trend, a gamer would come to terms with there being zombies fast, sure, but there are other important things they'd remember too, like if there's a corpse twitching on the ground, stab it in the head, they wouldn't just loot first, and let the zombie turn in the same room as them...
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this one is really promising....mc wanted to die then he started to give his all to survive.. character development is really good.so far one of the best apocalypse nd very few of zombie related novels out there. I just hope author don't drop this one it has really great potential. I love it
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PatrioticWeeb
My opinion doesn't mean much but personally I really like this book and I think others should give it a shot,I'm 60 something chapters in and it fails to dissapoint
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ThothFrog
Im sick if the name mark. Its nothing against you amd the novel is great. But, I’ve seen the name mark so many times in webnovel originals.
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TacoKun
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
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John_Miller_1080
i like this zombie book and i will definitely remember this once i get more coins and fast passes i look foward to reading your book and keep updating it.
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Ryan_Bruno
its very slow in 25 chapters. its so detailed that I'm just trying to skip all the useless parts.the detail is just to much. the main character try to suicide in the beginning but his friend calls and stopped it in time and ask for his files at work. he goes and then apocalypse came and got trapped in the building. then meets what looks like an early romance. then try to escape in the basement. their u go 25 chapters In a short paragraph
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kristall77
Just wanted to thank you for being honest in your description that the MC isnt an anti-social Loner. Spared me the time. Long time since i saw an author being so nice to warn me. Take a rather good review ^^
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Lia_1289
its been changed a lot, like many typo, fixing grammar here and there, adding more word to make sense, giving punctuation to help the reader read, please read it and compare it with your original or raw version
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