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Neil_Ads
Caution! I've made a mistake and there is a lot of info dump in the early chapters. Although I cannot guarantee it, I am doing my best not to repeat this in the future. This story revolves on the Main Character Nile who transmigrated in the world full of zombie. I will focus on him and his development. As a newbie author, I know I will make a lot mistakes during this journey. I apologize in advance for that. I am open for critics(no harsh words please), that way I know where I am lacking and what should I improve more. If you have any suggestions and tips to improve my writing, please do tell me about it.
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Neil_Ads
Please Guys. Don't review this novel without reading at all. Saying something like, I love your novel blah blah. You have a good plot blah blah blah. And then posting your novel's link at the end of the review asking for a review as well. That's not a review at all. That's promoting. Please, guys, there is a forum to promote your novel. My novel is not the forum. I know I'm not a good author, but I just don't want to shoo away potential readers just because of your false and flowery review. Again, it's bad for my novel. And I don't think you would love something like that to happen to you, as well. I would immediately delete review like that so don't bother at all, you'll just waste your time. Thanks.
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Baulpen
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Baulpen

I actually bypassed this before as I thought it will be a book where people simply try to survive a zombie apocalypse. Having had the chance to read it now made me realize that this actually is a gem. I was surprised when the author used terms from our local dialect. It is refreshing! I can also relate to the humor the author used as these are common in our country (sabihin mo salamat shafefe πŸ˜‚). Will look forward to more chapters and fantastic ideas. Great job! Keep it up!
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Ye_Jin
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Ye_Jin

Counselor this and counselor that. Honestly, the words used to describe stuff is confusing and the grammar is still bad. I got to the last free chapter and although the grammar did improve, the correction of some grammar doesnt make me want to stay. I couldn't connect with the MC and it's another heavy system reliance story. Not reading this anymore.
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timeawayfromstress
It has everything you would expect from an MTL novel. The brainless MC, the MC who acts with his emotions, the MC who acts like a hero, the MC who gets stronger thanks to the system. If the MC didn't have the system, he couldn't survive even a week.
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infinitiworlds
I have read those story on light reader before, I am not sure if I ended it but I hope to confirm. But overall, the story isπŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯
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Demon_Noah07
It's a pretty good story and a proper though out the MC has a good system but doesn't make him OP in an instant only gives him a multitude of options to choose from, The MC doesn't get everything served in a platter but has to work for it, The plot is properly thought out and we'll developed with even proper world development and character design, the only problem being the update as I personally requested the author to write it on discord but he still didn't I wish he did but I guess he lost interest in the story, I will be honest it was the only good apocalypse novel I read after reading multiple of trash or Chinese xenophobic or stereotypical novels and I read it till the latest chapters, the story was well throughout and explored which made me interested in the story but sadly the author lost interest, I personally wouldn't mind being spoiled if the author in future plans to drop it, I will be more than grateful if you tell me the future development and plot and everything you were planning 'incase' you are going to drop it, That's all I wanted to say thank you
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Erat0
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Erat0

I'm only half way through at the moment but I’m quite impressed. It is not the typical trash zombie novel where all the characters feel generic af, what actually interested me as I read was that when he went somewhere the mc didn't do every single thing there eg if the place doesn't feel right simply move on...like a normal human. This only happened a couple times but doesn't really happen in other books, particularly the beautifully added foreshadowing of a brief call back to one of said locations with the old man which wasn't mentioned again for quite a while but just short enough that you still remember and are actually interested in the character appearing. In conclusion not the mona lisa in novel terms but a good novel none the less, would recommend![img=update][img=recommend]
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DaoisttG3KuY
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Shujinko_Josei
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
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Blazing
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Blazing

Dropped [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] After the Chapter warm feelings i lost all my feelings . curse you
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Markszo
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Markszo

I've read upto chapter 118 and I can say that its different from my normal reads, im dropping this novel because I feel that the way the story is developing doesn't feel enjoyable anymore, his distrust in other survivors although makes sense, just seems forced and doesent make to much sense, not only has he not been betrayed by anyone to scar him to the point that upon first meeting, he would instantly distrust someone to the degree he does, the writer also forces a side character he created as a sacrificial lamb to further the point no one can be trusted by making her go back to an enemy that wants her dead just so she can screw the main character that she interacted with for less than a minute and was saved by, just to push his point that survivors can't be trusted. the world building and other aspects of this novel are brilliant but I just feel the novel is going to be that all survivors are greedy and dangerous and that the only things he can trust are the current two and any more pets he might tame I future chapters. other than that the writing quality was great, although I'm not great at English myself (my first and only language) I didnt notice any flaws and it was an enjoyable read, but I cant promise an English major will say the same.
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Avadonia
This is not gonna be one of those story you follow for month, clearly written by an amateur the story really need an editor, sadly I'd say half of what is written could be removed without the story losing quality.
2yr
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BigNovelBigDream
This book is amazing, keep going!Β Β Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
2yr
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Zarrah
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Zarrah

Nice story. I had been bypassing the story over and over until I read the first few chapters its amazing. I couldn't help but review it. The flow is superb. I would recommend the book for someone who wants a refreshing book with different story.
2yr
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Eka_Muliawan
the story is amazing, i quite like the developement of the mc and its underling but the slow update is killing it, well.. no matter there are plenty of other novels to read anyway
2yr
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Ekajekmail
the story is nice and refreshing but the slow update is killing the mood, already 3months and no more update? where is the author? why are you dissapear?
2yr
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Lord_Bell
A great author! Besides the info dumps, it's a great story!. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
2yr
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RobotPotatoMan
I enjoy this a lot the mc is somewhat simple, smart, and has a lot of potential for growth. I look forward to see how this world expands. Tho I'm sad about the new update on webnovel I finally had first place for voting power stones and now its gone πŸ˜”πŸ˜­
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aglow
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aglow

it's a good novel to pass the time. At first when I saw the word "WILL" I was thinking that it will be something like that "ah my arm is broken but no problem I have will and I can continue to hit with my arm even with greater strength" and this is like 2 pages for some novels (instant drop from me ) Good for me it's not like that even when he heal his wounds there is logic, and I am not left with the impression that the author did not think up the scene and he just add something to patch the situation. All in all it's not the best but it's ok. (I have read more than 100 novels with 200 + pages)
2yr
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sllmt_86101119
I was pleasantly surprised by this novel, I have read many zombie novels and while this one does take some ideas from others of the genre it puts a nice twist on it. The main character is likeable and thankfully not another righteous idiot but actually thinks and comes across as a normal person making reasonable choices. The system elements of the novel are well done and quite creative I'm only 70 chapters in but on what I've seen so far I highly recommend having a read. Big thank you to the author great work.
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borqueh
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borqueh

After reading 200 chapters, this is my opinion. The background to the story is good. I like the virus and how closely related the government of the continent is. I will not talk much about the characters since there are not many ... I will only say that it is somewhat annoying that the MC is sometimes cruel and sometimes kind. The grammar. Obviously it is not the best, but I do not have such strict requirements, if you can understand it is enough. The development of the story is meh. There is a lot of filler, every certain chapters he meets people who try to rob him, murder him, kill his pets, etc. Also, the author seems to run out of ideas since he almost always mentions the same information that has been said in previous chapters. I have even seems that the same author gets confused about this and modifies them. Well that. I have nothing else to say. It is a good novel, you can read it if you are bored but nothing more. It's not like you eagerly await chapters every day. PS: Author, I recommend that you avoid using words and jokes from your country. On this page most of the people use English and are native to there. When he tells jokes I don't understand anything since I am from Chile. And that, luck.
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NaranjaBlack
I personally prefer comics over novels so it anoys me that novels usually have a better storyline then comics, like this is an amazing novel I can't lie about that and I hope someone makes this into a comic. Those who disagree sorry but that's my opinion.
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Mr_Ryu
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Mr_Ryu

Ganda niti pre hanip. Recommend ko to sa mga hindi pa naka basa nito. Sa filipino makaka relate kato agad hahaha. Add niyo to sa library ninyo at maaaliw kaayo sa pag basa. Yun lang salamat
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Fideis
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Fideis

Typical reincarnation system novel except with zombies and evolutions instead of cultivation. Overall, the writing has tons of mistakes even 70 chapters in and constantly distracts you from the story. Next, Im assuming the author isnt a native english speaker so they use different terms for cities, towns, etc. and gets very confusing. The author also repeats a lot of info and sometimes incorrectly which can lead to confusion also. So if you like it, read it if you want but i put my piece here.
2yr
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Amit_Efraim
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Baqua
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Baqua

5 star since it's rare to find a fellow filipino's story around here. If you need help fixing grammar I can help you since english is like second language for me. But i can't guarantee that it will be always 100% correct. But anyways I'll read your story after finishing my modules.
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xhdjhsjsjsjs
i found the concept of the story interesting. it isnt like those cliche Apocalypse novel where mc returns back to past and eats the crystal found inside the head of a zombie( which people are totally fine to eat something that is inside the brain of a rotting, gross zombie. no hesitation at all for cannibalism) to get stronger. the one major problem for this novel is grammar. along with several gramatical errors, the author used many words without even knowing the meaning of it which makes the whole sentence sound totally weird. i'd say just use simple words to write your story. correct and simple sentences are worth far more than sentences with fancy words that doesnt make any sense. and i would like to suggest that you edit your starting chapters. if your starting is bad then many people wont bother reading your novel and search for another one. i suggest using grammarly for solving gramatical errors. overall id say the story is interesting but bad grammar puts it off. dropping it now( as of ch 6) but maybe will pick it up in future if the author polishes the starting chapters
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N0B0DY3
By the time the mc met up with his first ally β€œsissa” i already gave up trying to read. The whole event was forced and i’m just blown away from how stupid the main character is. Then when he ranked up to 1 he lost most of his brain mass. There is no fix to the story since it’s already done. Since author you like this type of story go for it but since you made it like this don’t expect anyone to cheer you on...
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AbysmalYandere
This is not a review, it is a doubt. I go through chapter 54 and I wonder if the MC meets again with Sissa or gets partners, come on, I don't want to see just an MC farming zombies or avoiding human bases too often, does the MC interact with people or get trusted partners? I do not think so.
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