Reviews of "Peaceful" Life in a Different World by D_EIRIC - Webnovel

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Well, to best describe this story would be to simply call it shallow. Story development nosense. Stop in first chp. Isekay for children. Max 3 stars.

MC feel like player in a game and other character feel and interact with MC like NPC m

I think that this novel is a very good one. The history in itself is an easy going and don't hold outragerous ideas, she is not the best one that i saw, but i like her.

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Writing quality: 4/5 Good enough. Grammatical errors here and there but otherwise, not bad. Update stability: 5/5 Story developement: 3/5 Wish fulfilment novel. Nothing else to say. Character development/design: 1/5 OP from the start. Acting like a “innocent kid” who hasnt seen the opposite *** in his entire life. Since this is a wish fulfilment novel, the character is rather bland and 1 dimensional. No emotions whatsoever. Just handles any situation pretty quickly and boringly because he is OP. World background: 4/5 Havent read much so i don’t know about the future development but i cannot continue reading because the MC is distasteful. I will give the benefit of doubt and rate 4/5 for this section.

it's amamaizng i cant beleivee its this good I almost cried at the end honestly the best thing i have ever read the chatcaters are amoooozijg .

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Frankly, i like the idea of the novel, but it requires a lot of gramar fixes to improve the flow of it as well as the story needing to be fleshed out more

This novel reminds me of "The time I got reincarnated as a slime". I love this kind of concept. No bullshit and bloodlust MC. No erotic and harem. Just a typical MC who wants to unite certain lands in for peace. I love the fact that he is magnanimous and monogamy (not so sure but still currently reading it). Having a fairy wife is awesome tho. An MC with great leadership, who think of the common good and portrays equality. Reading this kind of novel is relaxing.

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Your book is really interesting the characters the ability special powers just so fantastic man i was really hoping to improve like you those words were difficult for me to remember im not even living in america tho COOL :D p

The story goes fast but nothing much happens.most of what happened seemed forced and unnatural. ,...........................................

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Its a good story so far... hope it wont disappoint me at the end... The story character of tge story is okey... i kean its good... Its not boring after all... you'll find it funny sometimes and ypu cant help but laugh...

The story has a simplicity that was endearing at first. The story structure, MC internal monologue and thought patterns are done well. Scenes are shown instead of told which gives it a nice quality touch. Sadly the story failed absolutely in the dialogues. It's all: "blah blah blah?" he/she asked. "blah blah blah." he said. No descriptive lines how the question or sentence was presented. Or worst: "blah blah blah." "blah blah blah." "blah blah blah." "blah blah blah." (two people talking here with no identification or distinctions). The conversations themselves feel like 2 people who just learned the English language. Extremely short and simple/banal. If the author would just read up on how to write a dialogue or a Beta Reader then I would easily bump this story up a star and a half. Wish the author and translator best of luck.

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Giving an initial review after just reading 2 chapters: The writing is very robotic. It has very bad flow and its difficult to really get immersed into the story. It isn’t something I can easily sit down with and read a lot all at once. The characters have seemingly pretty 1-dimensional thinking, and are very straightforward. As this is only after 2 chapters this review is not incredibly reliable for the novel, but an indicator to my progress. I will add more reviews as I go, though it might be slow progress.

Well, to best describe this story would be to simply call it shallow. The writing quality is ok, no horrible grammar, although the writing is rather simple. Updates are ok. Character Design could not possibly be any more simple and shallow and gets a big minus.World backround is also not well done. Story development is where it gets really strange, things just kinda jum ahead of themselves. There is no natural flow. Something is mentioned and boom it happens, not giving a shit about logic. Why this story has such a high rating I cant possibly fathom. It is by far not the worst and has decent enough gramar but characters are shallow and the story develops in weird jumpy ways. I am rating this work as below 3.

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