Chapter comments on the chapter Meeting The Lorca of the book Fire Emblem: A Champion’s Journey

Warrior tribe, yes, but they aren’t spartans. 5yo, author, 5yo. That’s the earliest you can start with the basics, with a non-reincarnated child. Also, I hope that 2yo child doesn’t have the vocabulary of a 5-7yo. The story started with a certain amount seriousness, and half a chapter of meaningless chatter with the imaginary friend was off-putting.

Thanks for the chapter

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