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Sloth_King21
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Starcat777
This story is great. All the new ideas and pokemons is just great. I like to know what happens but author stop writing. If this story continuos is my one of my favourites.
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herzogs
Although this story was discontinued, it was an amazing story. Loved it and would recommend to anyone with a couple hours to kill and loves some bugs.
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Tokawoka1
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MasterX13
This is awesome keep writing bro and fast. Wishing you all the best in your future endeavour. And may you improve and polish your skills even better
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Touya_Satou
Great story pretty fast pace and also a unique way to show the PokΓ©mon world I recommend to you to read it, but how come there's still no update?
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Touya_Satou
Great story, good character development but the grammar is horrible and could use some work with it and it would also be good if the mc got a vespiquen
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Enrique_Garcia_5868
Me encanta, actualiza pronto. ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Nefari
Fun book with cool concept only the grammar is bad sometimes. Other than that itβs pretty good. Hehehhdhdiowndbd bdje d banquet d he d do d. Fun ejd did be dbdnd Chen CNNβs dnjdn d find for nfjjd s nnxnf banks. D
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KUROTSUCHI
Honestly, this fanfic is very good. The plot was well thought out. The main character and his pokemons' development are amazing. The explanations about the pokemons' mutation are reasonable and interesting. This is the best fanfic about pokemon i've ever read. No harem, op mc within reason and good plot development.
This is actually my third time posting a review and actually my longest one.
This fanfic is really enjoyable and interesting. More chapters pa po!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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HungryGhost
Interesting premise, celebrating and exploring an underutilized aspect of the Pokemon world. Good job so far......................................................................
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PUJIT_FADTE_9415
NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯ AND ALSO REQUEST THE AUTHOR NOT TO DROP IT COZ ITS REALLY GOODπ₯π₯π₯π₯π₯
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dabbler101
This book is amazing, itβs really interesting to see how mc explored the bug type, Very refreshing. Keep it up author. the English translation could be a bit better and the chapters longer other then that great work.
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Tom_TheBrave
This a great story which only problem is itβs Translation other than that itβs a great read if you can get over this I believe as long as you donβt come in with high expectations of the translations you will be fine
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Ray77der
Awesome story . Very detailed and informative. I loved the concept of introducing new variants for existing PokΓ©mon and also bringing out the maximum potential of each PokΓ©mon before its evolution . It is something that I felt that the anime and comics of PokΓ©mon lacked. After you're done with this novel I request that you either do another novel focusing on a different type or maybe something similar.
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Fahad2505
πππππPlease keep updating and don't drop this fan fic..... I will vote u daily with power stones................I have read many fan fic with good story but their authors can't take in a little bit of criticism from haters and eventually drop or try rewrite their novel and ruining the essence of their stories....
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HulkBrain
I read wrong. I think it's incest trainerπ
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But overall it's good
Bbok. Is. Great.
But. Not. So.
Much
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lunna
I like the story. While it's readable, the language could be better. I want to say that some part of the story does not logically make sense, but in the end, it is a story about pokemon. As long as a story is entertaining, it is good enough.
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Maxinonor
The story has a lot of promise but the author made him powerful to fast and for no solid reason , because the mc started at 7 he should have trained for the 3 years to reach the level he was at chapter 12 and build up from there because he know now what to do and has his pokemon to help him.
I know that bug type grow faster but he could have use the time to develop the bond of the mc and his pokemon instead of make so he hatch them they are 100 loyal also we dont know anything about them apart they can take on a dragonite and are more powerful than normal for the short time he trained them .
And he keeps finding pokemon that are stronger than average and shinys, he could have good luck and find/hatch a shiny but dont exaggerate it, even Ash the only good quality he has is godly luck only caught one shiny.
The writing is done by google translation , a way to better put it is to make less walls of text when he explaining things to improve and maybe also put smaller sentences in the translator to make it feel more natural.
He updates regularly so thats nice i dont know how long it will last but if he can make a updates every 2-3 days it will be a nice.
And for the world because of the the way he puts the writing it can feel to much at times if you dont very well pokemon but he has a somewhat nice systems to become trainer.
I hope this helps in improving your writing and the story.
When i wrote this i read till chapter 13 i may comeback to edit
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Imperial_Fox
The author has done a great deal of effort in writing this. This story is very good. A full on 5 star βββββ story, keep up the good work author, and release more
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banini
I love this novel. Made it feel like you are something more. Hope for more chaps.
The grammar needs more work but over all it was one of the best read Pokemon novel in qidian.
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Helel
The MC got too strong too fast, He's elite level at 7 years old with 3 Gen 1 bug types and his pokemon develop these bull**** traits that sound really stupid and unnecessary.
The english reads like a bad google translation.
Some of the 5 star reviews tell the author to not listen to negative review but I don't see any so I can only assume that the author deletes those, there is no possible reason this story only has 4 and 5 star reviews.
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GDFTHR23
This is an awesome story...where he focuses on the pokemon better then others...i hope you keep it up...and if there are negative people dont let it get to you
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GridX
cool novel .............................................................................................................................................
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SupremeEdzzz
Good novel
Worth reading
A smart mc
Makes weak Pokemons for example bug type into freaking monsters
Read it when your reading this review
Hidden gem
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KoroSensei14
This story is really good i like the new training ideas he developed when raising his pokemon. He should try to become a certified breeder and researcher in his off time for the league to post his findings to get even more money to be used for training and raising his PokΓ©mon plus it also would give him more influence in the PokΓ©mon world.
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ONGFRFR
yo why is no one giving power stones this is a really good story and i don't even like bug types. author-san can you make a psychic version of this when you are finished with this one i would really like to see where you take thatπ₯°
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