Reviews of HP The Birth Of Darkness

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4.32

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Goku_Black_6081
There is no sense in the plot.............................................................................................................................
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Yuri_yuri
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gyal_san
truly brother writer I am disappointed ..... You are an indian and you people normally have such perfect grammer of English ( speaks with funny accent)... what went wrong with you?????
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Zeroz7
Bueno la historia esta bien, pero creo que se va volviendo bastante oscura la trama, bastante curioso considerando el nombre pero no me gusta mucho el ambiente empezando por un MC que termina en la mrd para caer en otra y una personalidad que aunque no está mal va bastante oscuro, honestamente no se que se espera de la historia va bien es solo como opinión personal no me gusta como se va tornando
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otakubr
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Achilles_Bahadur
okay here I intend to remove your bad views to this novel. Many readers disagree about the way Ministry punish wizard because 'accidentally' killing mugle. If you read half way yes you will irritate. But if you keep going, Author will explain to you in the story the reason. I will give you a hint : MC'S family. okay keep going Author
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DarthVegito
Yeah this story was just a disappointment and the only reason this story has a higher rating is because people rated this story multiple times at 5/5 lol
2mth
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Yuri_yuri
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Yuri_yuri
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jujubs
i like the novel but one thing that you have to do is stability of updates,if you dont do this the novel will be a failure.trust me i m in this site at leat 2 years and the novel that its famous is just the one that keep having chapter everyday
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fanficlover1998
Great chapter as always. Story is becoming interesting now. Cant wait to read more. Great chapter as always. Story is becoming interesting now. Cant wait to read more.
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fanficlover1998
Hmm nice. Good chapters. And good story. Really liking the story so far. I am excited to read more of this story.Hmm nice. Good chapters. And good story. Really liking the story so far. I am excited to read more of this story.
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RoseAmber
So far this doesn't seem like a bad read. It has an original take on the story so far and is definitely not a cut and paste job. The only thing I didn't like was sending a 2 year ago child to prison. I think it is too far fetched. But I am looking past that. Thanks.
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Puro_Show
The story is interesting at the moment, some things don't seem to make a lot of sense but the author said that as the story unfolds many things we will understand. So far I have not seen any novel by HP that talks about the beginnings of Voldemort and that the protagonist is his older brother, let's hope to see how the story unfolds.
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jmap
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jmap

I have seen lot of bad reviews for this novel. But i personaly think that its a really enjoyable work. The background is well explained and think its really original.
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AkiraLight
Story so far is easy to read with little grammatical mistakes. The writing quality is good. Im a sucker for dark depressing themes so my perspective is biased. I love the unique setting that builds up his character to be the darkness. I want to know how he faces tom riddle as they are brothers. Still him being a member of the pureblood family 'gaunts' should of given him some protection? But i ain't complaining. Thank you for the wonderful story Author~san.
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Jyggalag
Yeah..... Not bad, but not great either. The scene where the child whose the member of the gaunt family(Slytherin descendant) is being sentenced for the assault and death of the muggle is downright stupid and completely unrealistic. Firstly most people in those positions are probably purebloods who are either neutral and non-caring towards muggles or downright hateful. Therefore the whole scene where the child is sentenced is the most stupid thing I have ever read, no pureblood would try to execute a wizarding(pureblood) child over some damn muggle(there's billions of muggles and probably like million max wizards). Like lol? It's like in medieval times a noble being persecuted by other nobles for killing a random peasant whose also a useless criple. So is this some weird AU harry potter world where muggle-borns are in the place of power and are part of muggle government or something....overwise there's no logic in my opinion.
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madrad
I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes because I like it so far. Keep up the good work author!!
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Imperial_Fox
Very disappointing, truly disappointed. Gaunts was a respected family, even more amongst the purebloods. Author makes it seem like it is no big deal for people to sentence 3 yr old child to death over eyes of a muggle. I know it is authors way of developing the story, but the story isn't moving forward at all, more than a dozen chapters and still in the first week. No character development, no powerups, nothing. Only some adults trying to bully a 3 yr old. Chapters are so short, and it becomes annoying as it goes on, waste of time.
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Liquidbeast
Terrifying place full of dark wizards from whom he can learn better than at home that's surprising and I think good years await him, if not kill him
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n740
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n740

other than some minor grammar errors this book is not only very realistic (not everything go his way ) but very unique and first of it's kind i don't remember reading a novel where the mc is (minor spoiler) Voldemort elder pureblood brother
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fanficlover1998
Was so excited to read another chapter. Well will read when you upload one. Liking this story so far. Cant wait to read more. Was so excited to read another chapter. Well will read when you upload one. Liking this story so far. Cant wait to read more.
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fanficlover1998
Nice. Good well written story. With good background. Cant wait to read more. Nice. Good well written story. With good background. Cant wait to read more.
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