Reviews of Fate Ruler Of Death by Xshamee - Webnovel

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This is a personal opinion, and I can’t tell others not to read this novel, others can enjoy this novel but I hated every chapter, could not get past chapter 10. These are the cons of this story: -The protagonist isn’t Ainz, just a rip-off character that is a beta pathetic MC. Ainz is 1 of my top 5 protagonists, and I have read Overlord LN’s three times, the manga, and watched the anime several times. This character is not Ainz, his undead trait is not there, some readers, and author says they don’t want a character that has no emotions but Ainz has emotions, it’s just his emotions are negated after a certain degree, and if you can’t write Ainz like how he is, then don’t write him! This Ainz is also so judgemental that he judges others so quick, he calls someone master, he kneels, he has unfounded not acting arrogance, is not cautious (Ainz is 1 of the most cautious protagonists ever!), is a complete hypocrite (He is a hypocrite but not in the same way this author makes him), makes vows easily, and is an idiot but if course everyone including author says he’s smart because thats what the author wants! Character assassination. -There are many contradictions. -So fast paced, and so convenient for the protagonist. Sakura accepts Ainz as her family in a few paragraphs/minutes perhaps seconds, and in less than 2 chapters will fight in the 4th holy grail war to ‘save’ Ainz. (Make it so Ainz does not leave this her.) -Characters believe Ainz so easily, they can’t think he’s lying, and so many characters aren’t properly portrayed, not just Ainz! -Kills other servants so easily, no drama, no restriction of power, just a op yet beta kind MC pretty much. -There is much more in just 10 chapters but yeah, it’s mostly about the protagonist, he is not Ainz! The other characters are also not completely portrayed well, and everything goes to easily, to conventions, and to fast.

This isnt ainz ........................................................... ...................... .................................................. ......

Character butchering at its finest... Character butchering at its finest... Character butchering at its finest... Character butchering at its finest... Character butchering at its finest

This would have been a good fic if you would have just wrote it as a SI, bc that is not Ainz bruh........................................................

5 Stars!!! It's a awesome story, defiantly worth reading. Although it hasn't been updated in 3 months and was kinda left of on a cliffhanger. It's still a amazing story and is definitely on of my favorite fics on the site.

The story is a mess, I don't understand what kind of episodic sequence you tried to pull of but it didn't go well. Every two chapters there's an ending? But it's not an ending?

Reviewed as of latest chp(51) What a very pleasant surprise! After reading other reviews, I was hesitant as I dislike beta MCs but I thought why not give it a try before laying down judgement. And I am glad I did. But I must confess the first few chps aren't great, in fact it's a bit bland and the MC is not exactly how most would expect Ainz to be. But my oh my, the improvement in the mid and later portions is great as the story and MC becomes much much more palatable and even intriguing. Trust me on one point the MC might seem like a beta at first but he is anything but. He's the Ainz that true supporters of Nazarick would love(the rest of u that read it all and do not agree must visit the happy farm to seek clarity) :P Thanks for the story author!

Firstly, I only made it to chapter 5. I Must say that you did well on writing this fic, but. It wasn't for me, for starter's, it was Very very uncharacteristic for Ainz to do most of the things he did on the chapters that I have seen so far. And as far as I know Ainz is a Very Very cautious person bordering paranoia. So yeah that's that. Secondly, the way he thinks and interact. that's what bothers me the most, as you have said in the early chapter that he has "Conquered" the new world. But he Acts as if he hadn't Conquered anything before, like he doesn't show the Overlord like ruler he is. instead he has this disconnect with his Overlord self, and from what I have read on the LN of Overlord, he has Fully accepted his Overlord self. And mind you he hasn't even completed his Conquest in the new world, but he already accepted his human self and his Overlord self. but in this fic it's a mess when you compare it to the current Ainz of the LN and this fic Ainz. thirdly, I just genuinely dislike the way you're portraying him as a Subservient of sort in this Fic. I just don't ever see Ainz going that low. btw I think I've seen this fic before in Fanfiction. don't know why I get the feeling like I've read it before, anyways it was a good run for me, sadly it's just not for me. I hope this Review doesn't offend you in any way, if it do I apologise. have a nice day ^^/

ok imma be truthfull i wabted to give .a one star review because you totally destroyed everything ainz is and that is something i dont really tolerate anyway but i cant because youre grammar is good updating stability decent and world background acceptable anyway you now know my real opinion about this book

This is interesting. A crossovers of Fate x Overlord x DxD (that is what I got from the available chapter). Although Ainz is out of his own character but it is good change and his fate seems to can't be separated by zealots followers. Ainz love interest in here is Artoria (Blue Saber) from Fate/Zero, Sakura (Low chance), and Goddess of Bible from DxD (Yes, he is a she and the chance for this to happen is quite high). The crossovers are actually quite messed up if you think about it because Fate x DxD part. But overall its just the start, the author can make them more smooth later. Some mistakes on author writing can be seen occasionally but overall this fanfiction is a good one to read.

Well, first of all, I really liked this ff from the moment you posted the first chap so I can't say much so... here is my little review: good things: - first, the way you write goes very well with the time the story is located. - the interaction between the characters feels good and not that plain at all - the story always show you what is happening in the world and not what the mc and his people are doing - grammar is good and the dialogues goes well with their characters - and last, this don't go and follow an already created history like fate/stay night and creates something new that includes ainz pretty good Bad things: -Ainz character doesn't evolve to much, I mean he lived in a kingdom and don't changes his way of thinking, he still having his generic way of thinking after conquering his world and now seeing others way of reining -the way you are describing his church his like you are creating nazarick 2.0, it isn't bad but when they act with Ainz like they don't want to disturb him or like crazy fanatics his a little annoying -and last, when doing a time skip you don't put something like "days passed" or "(3 days later)" and that made it a little problematic to the point I got lost in what was happening while reading but above all that it is a really good ff 👍

Okay so this novel for me isn't great as I love overlord and this isn't that. Everyone saying oh but he was human and if you take away nazarick etc then he was a nice guy. Yes, he may be... however, we at least I didn't watch the show because he was a nice guy. I watched it because he was a badass, he had nazarick, his servants etc. Basically, if you like cannon Ainz you won't like this story. He is a beta good guy... completely breaking his character tbh.

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Not sure if I rated this yet, but it is pretty good. Like I have said before, this site needs more Overlord fanfic.

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It's decent fanfic and you should definitely try it out for yourself. However, I myself am not really up for this as the author makes Ainz out to actually care about strangers' feelings when he is undead and should be apathetic to them.

Dang, this **** is really good!! Now there's some who understands me!!! after all those years of searching some fate series that's actually good, now here it is!!! A GODDAMN GOOD FANFIC!!! AAHAHAHA!!!! But to be honest, though, I would like to see Ainz and Shirou fights. fighting for Sakura. Will the hero wannabe ****er I going to win? Or is it the Overwhelmingly Overpowered God of Death? .. .. Well, even if you don't do that, THIS SHIT IS STILL MOTHER FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!

Author nothing offensive but it really is difficult to read, it feels weird but I can't quite point it out. there are quite some unnecessary things, and the structure is, well, sorry to be blunt 'meh', It feels like google translated but with little Grammarly. If you read ncode stories, then you'll understand what I mean, Rough structure. Your content is interesting but hard to understand. But your writing style and structure did improve exponentially since the beginning. But don't worry about it much, it will come with experience. Keep up the good works, and hopefully, you will take it positively to improve!

Sasuga ainz-sama.can get here ................ .................... .................. . . . . .. . .. . . .. . . . . .. .c..c.c.c. . . . . ..c.c.c.c.cmc.

I'm enjoying reading this novel so far. So author please don't drop this novel yet. The writing is not bad. I'm not good at giving opinion or review so don't mind me hehe. Good luck author!!!

You made the alignment of ain’t neutral evil but instead of acting evil he is beta / good. Totally breaks the character for me...

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I enjoy this very much so please consider continuing with this story I will support you with stones just dont drop this is my only entertainment rn

Splendid work with the start. Good luck Good Good luck good luck Good luck Good luck Good luck Good luck Good luck Good luck Good luck Good luck Good luck Good luck Good luck Good luck Good luck Good luck

Story is good, grammar could use some work. Not enough Overlord fanfiction. Thanks for writing one.