Chapter comments on the chapter Prologue! (Rewrite) of the book My Power is Upgrading Everything

Putra is very close to a bad word in my country. Soo i cant read this with a straight face lol

Good Job Mate!! I just want to give some advice about your prologue. It' s lack of clear description even though I think you don't want to waste too much in MC past life. Nice descriptions can rise the quality of your writing at the right place. I know it is to give a background to MC, but it makes the reader confused if you suddenly start changing POV in prologue. Well just some advice from strangerss :V :v :V.

No hate or criticism I just wanted to state my own opinion. I like it more when the MC is not reincarnated as an existing character in the story, I find better if a new character is inserted into that world because the interactions between him (MC) the main cast is interesting. That is also a problem I constantly face with story's of douluo dalu 2 even though I quite liked it. Well that was everything I wanted to say. Still good work author 👍

I'd wanna kill myself too if the only name that comes to mind is Putra

putra is a rubbish name when the mother is called Linda

well what do you guys would have done to that sperm doner of his if I were to be his place I would have give that kick back at a nice place and at nice time while leaving him in worst conidtions available

Putra? Why does that name sound so disgusting? Sorry, i can't read this.

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mc name is "Putra" ?!?!? this is chinese adaptation fanfic right ?!?!? your naming sense was...

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Never understood this death, not an equivalent exchange, he could continue to live and do good, but he saves an ordinary person.

nonsense.mc stupid.he started a successful company but naive and stupid.money can't fill his heart hahahaha.mc has no brains.no logic.the author must be a kid.

Is this story abandoned?

nice but... what is with the exclamation marks? exclamation marks should be used in exciting or shocking moments... but good stuff so far For example: Much to the policeman's surprise, his own partner shot him in the back! An example of what you're doing would be: "Hello," the man said! It was super friendly! They walked into the restaurant with each other! They ate lunch!

Penulisnya pasti orang indo

I wonder how this story turned out...

Asalnya dari mana lur?

thx for the chap

I hope he save the mom. The fact that she died from malnutrition when she’s the wife of a super rich family is just wrong. I’m sure she gave most of her food to yuhao, but even then he was scrawny at the start. How the white tiger family have fallen