Reviews of Twins of the Sea by Monkey_Godking - Webnovel

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Honestly this book is one of my favorite it really good and the story has developed nicely and the mc is a good mc and the love interests is good

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It could of been something great but was just a disappointing.........................................................................................

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I really enjoy reading this at first, but some it gets irritating to read. Then mc is just fooling around.😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😮😮😮😮😮

hmmm, its a good story no doubt.. BUT he is a reincarnator who knows the anime... yet the dude have not even tried to train haki seriously at all only the basic of the basic ... he told a crewmate about his past life "always wonder why they even bother " i have some trouble with his personality, its always changing"he is an overdramatic fool with a bad case of clown" so be prepared to always feel cringy he is DRAMATIC.COM and i feel like author don't have a clear picture of him and where to put him in the crew... he just steals everything for the crew their "moments" like zoro´s badass moments and fails hard, he often steal the lines of a "captain" of the crew acting like he is in charge and luffy is like just there in the background, i know he is not the mc but HE IS the captain of the crew

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This is one of the best fan fics I have come across I don’t know why I see all the hate people are too quick to judge I think that everything that happens is really good so far he is a little weak rem currently chapter 27 but I’m sure he will get stronger but this one piece fan fic is my favorite that I have come across and he only told the person he is in love with that he reincarnated besides merry who knows everything. One thing I could say is more merry because those interactions are funny. But honestly don’t see why people hate it I don’t see a problem with an mc struggling every once in awhile.

A good read. The author left most of his paragraph's in huge blocks of text which are a little unpleasant to read. Also, the most annoying thing about the story, the main character mouths off to everyone around him dropping loads of hints about how things are going to go and all of the characters act in exactly the same way they do in canon; which just doesn't make sense, but oh well. The nice thing about the story is the original jokes that would fit right in with the One Piece flavor which are often laugh out loud funny. GJ

I really enjoyed this book it's funny, unique, and the romance it's pretty good. I also feel like the way you portrayed the characters is pretty accurate and also how they develop through the story. Overall I think your story is really good. Don't take the other bad comments to heart theirs always haters, and won't be able to please everyone. Your story is good as it is so far(made it to ch27), and I'm not the only one who thinks that base on your power ranking.

What should I say? The story started good, until the skypiea arc. It goes from good to extremely bad. I know the author try too much to make the MC develop but the result of it became extremely bad. Also...also...also... There was too much BS when the skypiea arc and after that...Sorry author, you really started good but then sigh~, buy everyone try to read and if it fits to your taste try it.

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The heck with this story....... It's like author is waiting anything he wants. First our MC's hight is too short and he tells future to garp from the beginning and he believes, it like hell he would and our mc planning to live marine and garp is like ok use as much resources you like get strong and betray marine.

I really like this book, it's pretty funny and interesting. MC interaction is hilarious. While the storyline is almost the same (as of this day) it doesn't feel like copy paste from original and refreshing.

The only problems I can think of are; the grammar, and how things like excitement aren't expressed very well. Other than that it's a really good story, I just hope the author won't stop writing it, because I remember reading a naruto fanfic that updated twice a day but it stopped after like 150 chapters.

very good fanfiction but it would take a rewrite to make it more pleasant to read and clearer...........................................................

I have read until chapter 22 and i gotta say this is one if not the best one piece fan fiction i have read. Its original and the pace in it is very good normally you would have to read 100+ chapters to get past the first arc. Keep up the good work author!

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