Reviews of The Impossible Fate That Leads To A God Of A New World by LuciferVermillion - Webnovel

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Honestly among all of the Original novel there is hardly anything good in them. But this novel is truly good, not only the story that is great, the character design is very good. Even spelling and grammar also nearly perfect and we can very very few mistakes in these two areas. The worldbuilding is also on point Novel is nearly as good as translated novels. Story has great potential and if Author put time on it it'll become one of the best Novels. So our good fellow brothers and sisters, read this novel and support the author.

The Prologue was pretty epic and the author researched a bit on Bermuda triangle. The MC was OP and I like it! He was very likable and has pretty high standards when he was neglecting their recruitment. Anyone who reads this review! Please read this book and give it a chance! BTW I've made my review and I hope you made yours. Waking up in undead world was my new book with a slow but enjoyable start. See yah later!

A good read for me, catchy start. It really made me think. LOL. Anyway, I find big potential here. I'll lurk and strike when more chappies are out. may the author write more, edit more, and enjoy more.

I have read about 10 chaps which made me write this review.. I really like ML Lucifer, and the author described his character.. So far the story is really good and highly recommended

Amazing story with nice characters and world. The grammer is great and the pacing is also good, so sofar amazing. It has a really great potential, so I can easily recommend this to anyone.

Alright, when an author tries to portray a genius MC who suffered a lot. The type of intellectuals I dislike the most are the ones who are constantly bored; it often makes it hard for me to root for an apathetic person. So I hoped that he's not one of them. As far as I've read, there is a young man who somehow has a more special body compared to others. So maybe the author meant his fighting skills as I questioned his intellect a few times. *Spoilers below, read at your own risk!* - He said that a bust of a D cup girl measures to 70cm. (I laughed so hard at this one as he was stone-cold serious about it, and the girl with D cups was baffled at his geniusness.👌😂) - He started school against his will, but didn't have a need to do some research on its people? Isn't it like stepping into an enemy's territory? (The person he hates the most is the person who gave him the backdoor, the principal, the one with the highest authority.) A problem with a first-person narrative is that we can read his thoughts. (They make him sound like a nice, ****age boy that treats women with respect. Which is a plus, but I could barely notice any calculativness, wittiness, etc.)The council president, he knows nothing about him. The vice president, he knows nothing about her. But he says that he is good at reading other's body language. So let us see. This horny girl (Vice President) started to approach him out of nowhere. What girl approach you sexually unless she is thirsty for some D or she wants something? What we all know is, it's never something good. But he only saw her as a spoiled princess that comes from a high ranked family. He had a very shallow view of her. (But what came to me was, high ranking family = schemes, schemes, schemes= danger, danger.) He wasn't locked up in a cave without any human interaction, so I was a bit disappointed when after an hour of knowing each other, he bowed down before her in respect. (He really meant it; he was in constant mindblown and shock whenever she spoke a sentence. If you read his thoughts, you'd know what I mean.) -> He started to see her as a part of his closest people almost immediately. Like what? 🤯 - He compares himself to the FL, who is regarded as a monster. Though she still has many men going after her due to her beauty. (The FL is hella op, cheat like existence, according to him.) Sometimes he even sees herself in her, saying how she had to go through great suffering and torture to end up like that. (It has to do something with his dark past, I guess.) I dunno, I see them as two exact opposites who maybe share some past together. - His name is Lucifer, such a big name for a gullible guy like MC. Maybe the author is preparing some major character development. But yeah, he has a long way to go to match a man like Lucifer. - I had a huge problem with info dumbs right in the middle of combat! Like no, don't slap me with a half of a chapter of history when I'm trying to get invested in a fight. Please, next time, place info dumbs before a fight or after it. Thanks. 👌 - His fight with holograms to evaluate his rank didn't impress me. It was so anticlimactic that my hype was destroyed in a matter of seconds. (I'm not spoiling his rank. It's just the way he gained that rank, only second to FL...sight... So many possibilities, but he stuck to one exhausting tactic even after one thousand tries (mind me, he even copied some FL's moves. It was nothing innovative or brilliant (I'm sure other readers could come up with better ideas) he didn't even try to come up with something more efficient, less time consuming, or cool, or to make others cough blood from anger.) 😭 - FL's personality... she's like those ice-cold male leads in romance novels. 🤭Don't touch them, don't look at them, don't speak to them, unless you're the MC. - Female side characters: They are here; each has her unique personality. Too unique and quirky for my taste. I wanted the MC to punch the vice president a few times for showing him no basic human respect. 😂 My final thoughts: So far (ch.7), the MC is a type that goes with the flow; he doesn't want to show his full strength or attention. Instead of his reactions to girls, I'd appreciate seeing him doing something more meaningful as I had yet to know his goals, aspirations, opinions, likes, dislikes, hobbies, etc.

Amazing start that keeps the readers intrigued and excited about happens next. The story has few to none grammar mistakes allowing the reader to enjoy a smooth story. I like the use of the first person point of view but you should work better at describing the surroundings. I also liked to ask, even though you clearly are passionate about your story, there is a clear lag in chapter releases, why is that?

The concept or the plot of this story is very interesting if you take the time to actually dissect it. I must say that the flow of the story is a bit bumpy, but it's still smooth enough to understand what's going on. The characters in the story are very interesting and I would like to know more about them as the story continues. Now, this story involves much attention to detail and causes you to put tabs on things, so if you're not the type of person who has the patience to deal with things like that, then this story isn't for you. Okay, this section is for you author. Hopefully I won't offend you, this is just what I think would make your story better. * There are some grammatical errors here and there which makes the story even more confusing than it should be. * I suggest you try to simplify your sentences or try to show the thought process of the MC more so that the story could flow more smoothly. Despite those problems, your story is interesting and I would like to get more of it. Perhaps I missed an announcement you made, but do you have an updating schedule? When I was looking at the chapter dates and when they were released, I've noticed how it's not particularly in a pattern. If you could, please make a schedule, it would be helpful to the readers and myself, thanks fam!

I have read about 10 chaps which made me write this review.. I really like ML Lucifer, and the author described his character.. So far the story is really good and highly recommended

Very well, this story is good, but it didn't get me hooked. The characters are good and well writen you can easly destinguish them from one other, the pacing is also very well done. There were also a few mistakes(grammar type) here and there but it didn't bother me as i have read stuff that was way worse. Although while reading i got a feeling of reading a visual novel rather than a novel, it's not a bad thing at least it gives the feel that you are the MC, and thats good, it's difrent. But my opinion dosen't matter, if your reading this review just go and read it yourself, as this didn't appeal to me but can appeal to you future reader, as the story, concept and world are good and interesting.

I have read half the chapters and I was really hooked. The author's explanation is superbly clear. It was as if I was ML myself. Lucifer's (ML) character is really really good. Though the FL is a bit headstrong 😜 the novel is quite good

The story so far has been very entertaining and over the top with quite a bit of funny snark in places. It's well written with good pacing and is very anime.