Awesome story!!💜✨ Really creative and original, I was able to imagine every bit of the interaction, it was like I was watching a movie in my head😂, I love it!!. And I really want to know what happens between the love birds...Great job author, you're awesome!✨
Btw, it's in my library already 💜
When initially reading this story, it reminds me of the novel, 'A Slight Smile is Very Alluring.' It is fantastic and overtime, it separates itself from the novel I mentioned and shows it's own charm. I really like the writing style. It is smooth and easy to read. The details put are also outstanding as I could clearly picture each character in my head. The characters are also very fun, especially Xixi. She reminds me of Er Xi. Additionally, there is also definite chemistry between the main characters and the romance doesn't seem forced. The interaction and conversations Mo Hua and her friends (and any character really) are also natural which is very very good. hahah
This novel is great! I recommend any romance fans to give this one a try! :)
5/5 from my side.
Romance, Friendship, and Comedy are at its best. A very well written plot.
Auther had described those brief moments of love and friendship with great care.
The addition of the MMORPG inside a romantic genre adds an exclusive contrast to the story that will attract many readers. A good job must say.
The author's way of writing and describing character's personalities and traits adds the final blow to the hearts of readers and romance lovers.
Do give this one a try. The Author and the story will not disappoint you.
Well, actually this was really surprising, but the first twenty chapters were really good. The characters were cliche at first, but both of them got fleshed out pretty soon and the romance wasn't bad.
If we talk about the writing style and the description, then they were really well written and the character motivations and thoughts were according to theirs characteristics.
The pace was slow but it's common in female lead novels. I would want to see more of the game but the novel explores the relationship more and it's fine as it's an MMORPG romance.
It's not an genre that's been explored much, so I hope this novel can reach note people.
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Awesome, is the only one word I can use to describe my feelings.
Heck, I don't like romance novels, but the game plot got me hooked to the entire chapter, and then forcing me to read beyond.
The vivid description of the scenes and characters are so good, one can imagine the entire story.
Everything is great, and check it out.
Damn, it's a gold
This story is so well written. The characters are well described even in the early chapters making it interesting for the reader. The Quality of the writing is really good as well. Keep up the good work :)
In reading the first 5 chapters, this is my observations:
1. Good language use, easy to understand and descriptive. Very enjoyable to read and clear. All I can say is good quality of writing.
2. I have no say in the rate of chapters being released. Since your novel has around 56 chapters you are doing well in updating your story.
3. Story development also in the past 5 chapters is good, also is the progression and all. Nothing feels rushed and everything can be understood easily. I can understand the slower pace since these parts is where you are to introduce your readers to the story and the characters.
4. Character design too is vibrant, I can sense their personalities and all. They do not feel flat or 2D I can sense more character development as the story progress.
5. I decided to put world background as flat 5 for the reason of consistency with the name of the characters, description of the setting and etc.
Additional Note: Your chapters are quite long so it is good. It provides with enough information which we readers need and are entertaining too in the process. Keep up the good work, this novel is quite good. Depending on the availability of my time I will probably read more about your story and may write another review.
All I can say is that I love the story. I was giggling and swooning like a teenager while reading it that I almost forgot I need to leave a review. There are minimal grammatical errors that I think can be easily corrected. And I just want to say that I really love the action scene in the opening chapter. It was really well-written. Good job Author!
The synopsis instantly stole me away, it was well written and described. This book just shows that the author is a talented individual. I've read a lot and I mean A LOT of romance books, but this one was like a different eye opener. It's truly a great book.
This story is really good. It has so much creativity and imagination. It has a lot of potential. I really enjoyed reading this novel. Keep up with the good work. And also I'm putting this in my library:)
Aside from the eye-catching synopsis, the first chapter gripped me making me read further. I thought it was a historical romance with the description and all until I got to know she was playing a video game. To be honest, it really deserves five stars because of the way you build your characters, your descriptions are detailed making readers imagined them properly and your grammars to are good.
Hey, lovely synopsis, as one of the reviews said, that it reminds of slight smile is very alluring, but don't misunderstand guys, story really separates itself from itz it is different, and unique... Really enjoyed it... And writing quality is good too, [img=update]
Your story is really good, funny, going at a good pace, and nice flowing writing style. I personally do not like romance, so this story isn’t for me, but for anyone who enjoys, I say it is a good read. I also like how you not only tell the girls part of the story, but also the guys. I like the world you created, it is good.
Keep up the good work!
This story is Amazinggg~. The plot is well-done and the story itself is very unique. I would love to read more chapters in the future. I binged reading this all day and night, 10/10. I highly recommend this novel. You won't regret reading this!
Games are not my cup of tea, but this sure is! The first few chapters gives you the general idea of the author's capabilities in terms of writing and behold! She's a master.
Everything's perfect, even the flow of the story and also the interactions. The character and plot advancements are also well made, I hope to see more
I’m hooked. No need to say anymore. I love game novels where the protagonist is a good gamer. But it has always been male leads. But now a FL gamer?! I’m willing to pour my time to read this...And no one is stopping me
The synopsis excites intrigue and the concept itself is interesting. Character design as well as their interactions are very compelling. A fascinating world-building and captivating descriptive. Good work!
Gives me King's Avatar and Wotakoi vibes and it's so awesome! It makes you want to fall in love while playing games lol ahaha.
Seriously a good read! And your descriptions... I have a lot to learn as an author heuheu. Your descriptions are very mellow and transitional smooth. I prefer descriptive novels actually... but this is on a new level since it's a very modern kind of description. If ever you write a fantasy or sci-fi novel, I'd probably read it from cover to cover. That's how good you're writings are.
Keep up the good work! You're almost there ^ ^
Overall, a pretty nice story! Mind you, I've only read around four chapters, because I'm not really a fan of purely romance-driven stories, but here's my review:
Points to improve on:
-Grammar: It's actually really good compared to most originals here, but there are quite a few silly mistakes here and there (small things, like usage of plural or singular nouns, so they do stand out IMO).
-Flow of Story: It's great, and I can immediately imagine the scenes in my mind. However, the pacing can get too fast in some areas and slow down in the next paragraphs. Be careful of that.
-General Storytelling: I like how the side character, Xixi, was written and she really helps out in making the readers like the FL more. However, there are some characterization points that can be too rushed. For example, I did like how the Archaeology professor was actually the ML's mother, but giving out too much information about the ML and his past all at once was a bit too rushed for me. If it really needs to be shown in that specific chapter, then it would have been better, perhaps, if these were "shown" and not "told".
-There are too much great points to list down, really! Generally, it's a great romance story, and the characters are likable.
To conclude, It's a great story! Romance-driven plots are not really my thing, but this story is quite interesting from the first page onwards. Give it a try and read it yourself!
Good job, author, and keep it up!
Excellent story with a perfect plot, totally original and creative, I enjoyed every interaction throughout the story.
Truth to be told, this story has the potential to be one of the famous books.keep on writing and keep up the excellent work. Good luck, author, and fighting!