Reviews of Serendipity - A wink from the fate by Readoholic - Webnovel

Excellent story with a perfect plot, totally original and creative, I enjoyed every interaction throughout the story. Truth to be told, this story has the potential to be one of the famous books.keep on writing and keep up the excellent work. Good luck, author, and fighting!

As a part of my new honest review policy, I will not hold back. Okay so the novel starts with a ferocious roar. No seriously. It start with lightening and thunder and a fresh serving of ACTION. The MC is Mo Hua, a university student who has developed a bit of an addiction for an online game. Immediately in chapter 2 we're meeting the male lead, also a gamer. He is described as a person who doesn't have much interest in girls but he has actually been interested in Mo Hua. If romance novels in a gaming setting are what you're interested in, it is a good idea to check this novel out. As for me, I feel like the first chapter was very well-paced but the moment the FL accidentally bumped into the ML and we switched to his POV the story started rushing. Maybe that's just me though. I will say that there are a few cliches in there, as in the female lead is too perfect. Even the male lead is described to be extremely amazing. This is usually the case with romance novels and I don't like it at all. I'd be okay if the FL was attractive and good at gaming, or if she was attractive and good at studies. But to be good at gaming and studies and attractive is a trio that is just too unrealistic for me. See she isn't just attractive in the sense that she's pretty, she's literally described as the beauty queen of her university which means she's top of the top in even attractive people. As for the grammar, there aren't any major issues. There are a bunch of errors here and there and I'd recommend for the author to proof read all the chapters once or twice to fix them.

Hey author, I love your book and the explanation is quite good and brief.. I can feel the interaction between mal and female characters..well done author I really liked you style of writing

This is a very good story. The romance between the ml and the fl was something to look forward to. I have no complaints about grammar, writing style, and flow since everything was superb. Thank you very much for giving me a truly wonderful story and I would love to continue reading more chapters :)

Very well written, I like how from one particular setting you can easily change the whole scenario- the time when it started I thought it will be fantasy, but later on, it turns out she was in a game. I loved that. It was impressive. You have done a fantastic job. I also love the character introduction and how well you can describe the farcical expression of the characters.

Such a cute love story. It feels like the Chinese drama "Love O2O" and it is one of my favorites and so does this book. I'm totally into this. I can't stop reading. Author, keep updating!!!!!!

An adorable plotline with adorable characters. This book really made me squeal with happiness and made me giggle soo much. The FL is not your everyday girl, you can see she has goals, but I'd like her to be less self-deprecating, tho I guess that's a part of her charm too. The friends, both female and male, are not one dimensional and you can enjoy their interactions. Our Mr ML is a good boy that gets too excited when his little girlfriend is involved. I'm recommending this 3000+!

A*** LITERALLY SO CUTE:) I really like the book so far and I'll be sure to read the rest of it. You're a really talented author and I hope you get recognized even further<3

Skies, this was great! I read more than I had to!! I checked the contents and saw that the leads were going to kiss and I just had to read it! Author, you are awesome. This was a nice light read. So refreshing and so relatable! I hope you continue making this story great! I was at the edge of my seat thinking when they would talk and then that kissed happened! 😍✨ I loved it, every second. Thank you for offering to swap with me! The actual review: This book was easy to read and there were no visible errors. The writer surely did take the time to edit her piece. The emotions that this builds up within you is real!!! You'll find yourself rooting for the leads!!

Your synopsis is great,like really great!I absolutely loved this book! I’m looking forward to reading more from the author. Highly recommended! -ur background of the story is well described. -The characters very detailed.

I love this story . And also love the concept of love story between two computer science graduates. It's a full pack of romance and friendship. Good work and nice story keep going. Wait for more.

Nice book . I really recommend mend it to everyone 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰😍😍🥰🥰🥰😍😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍😍🥰😍🥰🥰🥰

Interesting plot. Personally, I'm not a huge fan of contemporary romance, but this book really pulled me in. The two leads are both so cute with their relationship, and the author's use of descriptive language only makes it even better. Slight grammar mistakes here and there, but completely readable. No worries about that. Keep up the good work, author!

The writing quality is detailed and immersive, the characters arent cut board cut outs and have actual personalities. The flow of the romance is well rewarding and not cheap. It was good.

A fabulous story. The synopsis caught my attention and I just went reading it on totally forgetting about the time. Well, I feel that it's a worth reading story and the two main characters are too cute 😍. Hope that author get's more positive responses.

Hey, i read a few chapters from your work, though still ongoing I can see it’s potential and it was really fun to read. Hope you see it to the end and keep up the good work! Also if you could perhaps read the novel i’m currently writing and leave a review it would certainly be appreciated it’s called Dimensional Monarch. Thanks in advance:)

These reviews don't really make sense because the story is not yet finished, but this is my initial rate for the author to show my support. Hoping you could spare some time too, and drop one for my work. WAR GROUNDS (all caps please, as the original version got bugged).

Just from the initial chapters itself, I'm totally hooked with how the story goes. The descriptions were extremely detailed and the characters were beyond amazing. I happened to love the concept about woman, as the MC who had courageous and compassionate features of most male-leads from most stories... and its really intriguing on my part. The love story between the two is really on my taste... since they'd remind me of someone in particular... I would love to see much more interaction throughout and to journey more through the development of the story. Keep up the good work.

You won't and shouldn't ignore the writing quality. The character's description will hook you even more. For anyone of you who loves beautiful expresion.. (is that the correct way to put it?) you must read this. The stories will satisfy your thirst of romance and human interaction

I just have one thing to say, the description and world building is soo good, damn, I write also and I’m really impressed by what I just read. Keep us steadily updated.

I love how you clearly show what is happening in every chapter... I mean how you make the readers visualize every scene. I wish I could write like u do lol. Anyway, I just read the first chapter and I must say... it definitely catch my eye. I will look forward to the next chapters author 👍🏻

The Plot of the novel is interesting contemporary romance novel between two young computer science graduates and computer games. The writing quality is very good, So is the stability of updates.. The story is developing well. The character design and the world background is equally good. Definitely the novel is a good read and I would recommend to everyone. All the best, Author!

A must-read. This is soo good! I remember watching a movie alike to this novel, but I cannot quite recall the title of it. But considering everything, this is an interesting story, and I had so much fun with it. I couldn't stop reading when I started the first chapter! Their interactions are cute and really natural. Keep up the great work!

I'm reading it right now and this is good stuff! I really like your way of writing. Excellent! Count me as a fan cuz I'm totally hooked up! Really looking forward to it!

Absolutely loved reading this! Love the characters, the plot, and the whole storyline overall! Fabulously written! Can't wait for more from this author!

The story plot is intriguing. It has a great start. This is a light romance novel.... I love the interaction of the characters. Both MCs are amazing, can't help but fall in love with them. The author did a good job for writing this story very well... definitely a good read and would recommend to everyone. Read the story guys .... see for your self how amazing this story is! This is worth of your time. Keep it up dear author... thumbs up for this excellent creation!😉🙌

I love that your writing style is so descriptive and detailed; it almost gives a cinematic experience to the readers. The smooth and steady flow of the dialogues, the characters' emotions and interactions and not to mention the natural balance of comedy and romance--EVERYTHING, is perfect. Definitely looking forward for more!

I love romance novels and this one is an amazing read, it had good writing, plot, characters, and important friendship. The comedy is funny and one of my favorite parts. I hope you continue writing because your book is awesome and I can't wait to read more.

The romance of this book is incredible! The writing flowed really well, and the character's relationships are incredibly well written! Love this story so far! Can't wait to read more!

What a sweet, lovely story, 😭😭😭😭The author kept me engaged with the characters and plot twists throughout. I ma stil l reading this and is greatly enjoying it!