That story is so awesome!
The author must be a genius!
If I was a girl I would fall in love with him!
(It's definitely not the author speaking)
I'll just say that I won't drop this fanfic as I'm one of the die-hard fans of TDG.
I know that it's really annoying having dozens of fanfics about our favorite WN and nearly all of them dropped while still in the Tiny World.
There's three who managed to step in the Draconic Ruins Realm.
Two of them "ended" but in my point of view they were no longer fanfics of TDG by that time.
Anyway, I'll repeat myself, I won't drop this fanfic!
I read nearly all of the TDG fanfics and in my point of view, this one is at the very least in the top 3.
Pros:
- There is no copy-pasting
Finally an Author who when writing some events of the original (like Nie Li’s bet or the talk with Xiao Ning’er in the Training Grounds) didn’t simply copy-paste. Here he either made a summary or used his own words.
- There are Butterfly effects
The actions of the new MC do have some effects on his new world. I got tired of the fanfics who simply followed the original timeline as if they were clearing the stages of a game, not caring about how the past events should impact the new ones.
- Character development
Be it the MC or those close to him, they grow from the events and their personalities aren’t fixed.
- Original and fun
Be it the “face” of the God, the way the MC/his girlfriends deal with Shen Yue, or some of Xiao Yan’s shameless inner thoughts, I find all of it really refreshing.
- The MC’s mother, Chen Yin
You’ll understand when you read it :)
Cons:
- At the beginning, the MC gives cultivation techniques to some people (His parents, one uncle, Xiao Ning’er, her father, Ye Ziyun, 5 people from her family, 2 Elders of the Alchemist Association, Yang Xin and Gu Yan)
He gave some more later, but at that time he can already defend himself against Legend Ranks so I won’t talk about it.
I started reading this fanfic a few days after the start, and I can tell you that this was the most controversial choice of the author.
Some readers found that it was stupid of the MC, wanting to enslave the people before trusting them.
Personally, I don’t think that it’s a problem and I think that those who read “Library of Heaven’s Path” would think the same.
That artifact allows the MC to see through anyone, if they weren’t trustworthy and were going to betray him, he would know it.
And it’s not like some of those people were from the Dark Guild or the Sacred Family.
Anyway, that was the thing that most complaints were about.
- The relationships are rushed. The author said that it was a choice since he was writing for the first time, wanting to train his writing skills and didn’t want to put too much fillers.
There might be more negative points for other people, but hey, it’s just a fanfic and the quality is even better than some premium novels.
That’s enough for me to be a bit biased xD
this story is unrealistic and the author made all the characters stupid and far less intelligent all that so the mc can what he wants without repercussions due to his less than averge IQ.
I WAS ENJOYING IT SO MUCH EVEN THOUGH SOME WERE NOT SO DETAILED UNTIL THE AUTHOR JUST DROO THE BOMB ABOUT HIM MAKING CLONES TO COURT THE GIRLS THAT HE COULDN'T GET CAUSE HE PROMISED TO ONLY GET TWO. ITS PRETTY STUPID FOR IT AND IT RUINED EVERYTHING NOW IM DROPPING IT BYE
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It kinda irked me how naive and almost cartoony feeling the MC gives revealing secrets left and right giving cultivation techniques to people like delivering candy i mean obviously he didn't go through any life and death squabbles and never had any arrogant young masters looking to erase his existence because he courted death by existing in the vicinity of king kong clan also the romance feels a bit forced and the characters don't carry any weight to their words like "yeah i conquered the world" a word like this should be domineering and give the reader a reality check on how far our MC has came after arduous journey but there is nothing
While i really like the idea, Especially that The blond girl actually got someone That loves her back, i am kinda turned off by Mc copying the moves of nie li. he started doing the grass thingy Plan before nie li could and i was like ok fair enough, but then he went trying to seduce nie li’s girl (the purple girl), aNd thats where i lost about 70% interest and when he thought of helping the trator family and making nie li his enemy by doing That, i lost all of it and here i am writing a review
I decided to drop this story at chapter 70. I just can't find the pleasure to keep reading it anymore.
I liked the fact that the MC gave his family and friends resources so they could get stronger. I really dislike when only the MC keeps on getting stronger even when he clearly can help those he love/trust.
But... it really was a little too much. Reading this fanfic reminded me of when I play Tale of Immortal with Cheat Engine. I create a super overpowered sect by giving everyone cultivation items I duplicated. It's funny actually, when you're the one doing. Not so much when you're reading about someone else doing.
I don't mind the clone part, though I believe they were badly used. It really looked like they were only created for the sake of being with a girl the MC wanted to be with but wouldn't because he swore he wouldn't have more than two wives.
... However, with only the two points above, I could still try to finish the story and give about a 3.5~4 rating.
Now onto the real reason why I gave so low a rating.
I am a sucker for character interaction. 2.5D~3D characters, living people, interacting with the world. And unfortunately, all I found in this fanfic were NPCs that could only listen to what the MC wanted.
Seriously. There's hardly any dialogue, there're only orders from the MC towards someone else. Almost every interaction was like:
MC - "Hey, take this, do that."
Named NPC - "Ok"
MC goes to another NPC.
Repeat.
The whole universe revolved around the MC. It felt like he was playing with dolls. "Today I'm going to dress up this doll, and I'm going to throw that other one in the trash."
I can't say it was bad for a first story, though. Being a aspiring author myself, I understand the challenge of writing something good. One of the main reasons I never posted any story I wrote.
This is just not my style of narrative. It started really good, but it got caught up in a bad loop.
Nevertheless, thank you for the ride. It was good while it lasted, honestly.
Yep it’s a good fanfic for a beginner like author said it’s a beginner work but good at least better than most thank you for writing this book auther it’s a good one
Gimana yak, ya pokoknya baca aja dulu dah sampai sebelum dia mulai bikin banyak clone terkait dirinya, terus abis itu mungkin bisa skip aja ke volume 2, abis itu fast forward ke akhir, kebanyakan sih slice of life comedy romance adventure gitu dah, toh MC nya dah OP parah Krn punya adaptep LOHP dan non-limited teleportation
well actually I was expecting more than just giving cultivation technique left and right . The MC makes me feeling like he is dumb I don't understand why the author makes him like that. maybe My point of view narrow and can't understand.
i don't have nothing to say
thnx you
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writing ( 5 ) Stability ( 1 ) = well no update for 7 mths / Story ( 3 ) its same things as the original, just fast progress , nothing new / character ( 1 ) i still dont know how mc look like "Ps - read untill chap 70" / word background= nothing new just same as original
this fanfic its good for read to pass boredon, but if u want to imerse in this its a big "NO" , toooo much plotholes, noone question where mc get the skills and too fast paced, seriusly , too fast he resolved all problems of glory city , abyss prison , and heavenly plateau in 1 week
It's great and worth my time! I love how their are also back stories and Clones life... I love this I swear... I wanna see Xiao Yan have kids with the twin goddesses Damnnnnn
i like this story very much.
CAN SOMEONE TELL ME WHY THERE IS NO MORE THAN 2 LIKES IN MY COMMENT. IN MY LAST COMMENT IN ONE NOVEL MY 10 FRIENDS LIKED MY COMMENT BUT IT STILL ONLY SHOWS 2.
Overall I like the fic some parts feel forced like the beginning and in the end with the sage emperor, the ending feels like a massive cliffhanger and could have been done better like there could have been a time skip to show what his family is doing after so many years. Overall I really like the fic and this is my first review on some ones work so take it with that in mind. I can't wait for the next fic!!.
I read this a while ago and it was pretty good at first but I didn't like when he started making "clones". I found the ending a bit meh and thought that it should have been a more exciting ending
it is an interesting fanfic :-)
that is all i can say for this story. But this fanfic would be a good fanfic, not the greatest i have read but one of the top because what i read would be questionable. i am more inclined to read fanfics that has an omnipotent mc that trolls people or mc that is chaotic-nuetral because those mc is good. this story is intereting because it is unique in some way and i guess it is because there are only few fanfics of TDG and fewer decent ones. i would not really want horny mc but more of a mc that attracts girls and not because he is aming for them. if author would have written another fanfic then i would suggest a multiversal travel that the starting world would be TDG then the rest of the genric anime worlds that he would visit like one piece, Date a live, akame ga kill, ATG, and maybe Bleach.
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