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ClearSkySage
Me right now using the hidden forbidden Jutsu the famous glorified Thick Skin no Jutsu or more know as Shameless no Jutsu to give me 5 Stars.
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DanteSama
Nice take on the plot π
The progress on MC's power and character build up is as real as it can get without outright Op him in short time.
A must read Novel !! I totally recommend reading it wholeheartedly!!π―
Thanks for your hard work Author San π€
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Daoist078441
you should stop writing this bulls#it
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Mark_Mads
One of the worst fanfiction ever. (for me)
1. Diary style.
2. Without a protagonist, the world is dead.
And much more.
Plus, the novel for me is the principles of the chakra. By the way, this is the only plus of this novel.
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Manuel_Delgado_2626
Perfecto wn general una de las historias mejores elaboradas siendo ni muy larga ni muy corto , una explicaciΓ³n bastante detallada y a parte un buen fondo y comienzo
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DaoisttG3KuY
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Wind_1999
one of the best naruto ff i have ever read it has everything drama, comedy, character development, romance, power up. basically a well rounded story to read and enjoy
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ShuYme
Grammar is bad and ruins immersion with completely wrong or badly written words. Dialogue is also atrocious the format is βcharacter name: says somethingβ, totally ruins the flow. 1/5
With 200+ plus chapter the updating stability is good but since the story was dropped its 4/5
Story is basically just mc training and thinking about stuff, most other events are like 10% of the total word count and are very rushed. The third shinobi war took like 20 chapters. 1/5
Characters are one dimensional and none of the other characters have had any development yet. Mc is perhaps the worst of them all since its a fanfic and we are pretty familiar with traditional characters in the anime and can infer some of our own ideas of theIr characters. but the mc has no character development at all. 1/5
Its a fanfic so the world wasnt created by author so he gets no credit especially since mc is a wallflower and doesnt really interact in any meaningfull way with the story. 1/5
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Erick200
Gostei, espero que o autor volte
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Sleepeels
Meh.........................................................................................................................................
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Gilgamesh_Love_NTR
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not_david
idk why you would write such a long story without thinking it through, no sense of storyline no consistency in strength abilities or character I appreciate the effort of you writing 200+ chapters but if you don't read what you wrote there is no point
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Theadesy22
this is so hard to read I got 11 chapters in which In my mind was an achievement because of how boring this is it's like reading what the author planned but then he just got lazy and instead of making a final draft he just posted the plan instead you don't even know how the mc looks at chapter 11 and you don't know his name either until like 9 in which imo is just so stupid I can't read more than this because of how annoying it is the idea of haki in naruto is super cool and its a good idea but it's just poorly made imo
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Wind_1999
well deserved 5 stars keep updating.
Thanks you for the story. the character development, story development, world desine, and the characters love interest everything is extremely good.
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Theo_Gallentine
This is a great book but could you add more fight scenes and them exploring the omniverse. When are they going to go back to their daughter in douluo dalu? Where would aizen rank power wise to the omni god council?
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kobeblackmamba
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kobeblackmamba
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FOX_ZRS
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naraiz_ryhall
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LethanAlexander
Writing Quality 4
Stability of Updates 5
Story Development 4
Character Design 5
World Background 5
The total score
4.6
Not really care, this funny and like diary notes.
Have chinese and good humor.
try it till bleach world and hope u will happy
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kobeblackmamba
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Idealist
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CD 4
US 5
WB 3
Your writing quality is torture for me.
Everything except that is simply average and or slightly above average. I appreciate your effort in updating stability.
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FOX_ZRS
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Devil_Hex
Review till Chp 39
Okayish fanfic. Not terribly bad, but not very good either.
MC's character is inconsistent though. He decides to stay low-key, yet goes on a full on slaughter in a war (when he was only 8 years old).
MC's power is inconsistent too. He has peak Kage level chakra at a mere age of 8! And still almost dies in his 2nd fight by an unnamed cannon fodder. In a few months post that, his chakra level increases to that 6-tails level. So I hope u understand how ridiculous his power level is..
One good thing that I liked is that Danzo is shown to be in MC's favor (cause MC is a senju).
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Titan_Alpha
overall it's quite good but world that has been he lived are not up to my taste but i will recomend to read it its story and character are good mabye you even like it's worlds after all we have different taste buds
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