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R_F_T_S
Unique premise on which this story is built on The synopsis was a bit confusing , hopefully you could tweak it a bit fight description could use some work as well as dialogue ( dialogue is always getting split up making it difficult to follow who was talking) a few problems with punctuation as well as a few grammatical errors, try to fix those anyways enjoyable story all in all, good work author 😊
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MITCHIEWilliams
I love the author's concept of using African gods. it is very unique. It is not your typical Fantasy novel. I was intrigued by the plots and the characters. Wow You really did a good job keep it up.
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Zanyyy
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Zanyyy

There are a lot of words i could use to describe this book but i'll use the word 'UNIQUE' because that's exactly what this book is. It was like a breath of fresh air reading this novel. Please and please do give this a try. Try something different by reading this book.
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Samcrowned00
Black Angel or African Gods is such a nice captivating title to make a reader want to know the information in the book. The blurb is great as well. I really enjoyed reading it. I love the genre of the book, it's that of a historical fiction and a fantasy that tells us about conflict between gods. Great idea! I love the usage of diction, your choice of words are well developed. Your work is just a great art.
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nyype
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nyype

Well, action start! I liked! Overbearing and Black! I would prefer a bachelor black god, but ours already married. I advise this book to everyone, just give it a chance, you may love it
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Fearmongering
Well, first of all, my respect to the author who has managed to create a very interesting world. He uses ample descriptions and the worldbuilding is done in a decent manner. Characters are not very stereotypical and one-dimensional either. They are very intriguing and likeable. Also, I really liked the way the author portrayed his actions scenes. Should the spelling mistakes in the chapters be fixed, I am certain that the story will become something truly special. I am looking forward to the new chapters.
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fubbi_ape
Nice one author, I'm in love with your story, and it's theme. How best can I support your work? the review or financial's. let's talk through email.
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Rachael_Nana
This book is a masterpiece, and it is a martial art book that is totally different from the, now too popular cultivation books, the setting and story development is very good
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OrgasmsxanxBruises
From the get go, I really enjoyed the imagery and the way that the characters seemed so full of life. The emotions were real and I felt like I was there. Outside of a few minor grammatical errors, this story is super promising. Good work author!
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fubbi_ape
Nice one from the author, the book is exactly what I've been looking for. also nice pacing by the author. great work, I want to know how this story ends
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bayoeditor
Hello Author, I have read and reviewed your book and it is nice read. If you are interested in distributing your work or any future works/books on a platform that will pay you up to 400$ based on word count and publishing frequency, then mail bayoeditor@gmail.com A brief sample and link will be appreciated when reaching out.
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sae_boo
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sae_boo

Ignoring the Punctuation in the first few chapters. Working Review(Will Update as I follow this series in future) It's been a while since I've binge read something because it was genuinely interesting & fun to read. The Authors pacing and writing is really good. As well as the gods fights, am.excoted to see where the gods and the prince's journey goes and meets. Also explore the lore of this world the authors made... Te internal wife beef/Drama is also brewing which is really intriguing. As all baby mama drama is in actuality lol😂 The fluidity of the story is rlly good👍🏾... keep up the good work author. Am also really enjoying the African Mythology inspiration his drew from, I think from West africa(nigeria) I might be wrong...anyway it's really dope! P.S Just update the Punctuation in the first 5 chapters and your good. Also I hope the elder Returns I think he has a big role...
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Rachael_Nana
nice book. The mc Is not yet known but the book seems to have a good development and the author seems to pay attention to characters development. in all I think it'll be great read
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Rachael_Nana
nice novel it's de development suggest it'll be supercool. I'm still not sure about who will be the mc tho but the development suggest it'll be the baby prince.
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