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heidichristine
Another perfecto story. Okay, this is gonna be a long review. So here it goes..
The first question at the synopsis got me like ... SHOOKED. I, *coughs*, was kinda hoping *coughs* it happens to *coughs again* me *coughs* as well *coughs*.
Then I read it further and got me like, oohh interesting. Very relatable to my life lol. Not being insulted but, no one's interested or did I just being dense- Whoopsies.
Anyway, at the end of the synopsis left me smiling at how funny the story would be. It's a good opening to your story. You know how to capture the attention of your readers. This is good. You're very clever, Sir.
Then at the prologue and first chapters, I can imagine every scenes that you put it on your story, it's like somehow I was in it, joining the event as well. You have a good description on this, dear author, no doubt. It makes me smile throughout reading your chapters. Each ones have some funny scenes lmao. I really really enjoy reading stories like this, it's my type of story that I like actually. Non-cliche story, unique, and funny, made the readers not bored while reading it.
The name of your characters are normal too, I prefer normal names like these in every characters, but it depends on every creators of their own stories, this is just my wishful thinking. For me, normal names like these are the most easy to remember, and they sounded cool.
Abbie as the female lead is a relatable character to every girls (can be boys too), including me. Her personality, I felt that spiritually lol.
If your story would become an anime (somehow in the future *crossing my fingers*), this will be a good example of a good story.
This would go to my Recommended Books as well, I would like to read it further.
Good job author!
Don't forget to take care of yourself as well.
Please always be healthy, so you can produce more good chapters and stories ~♥~
Anyway, that is all from me.
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Supremely_Innocent
I haven't stayed up to date or anything, but since I first began reading the prologue, I can say this is a great novel. Author, please continue the way you have. I will be so happy!
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gleerose
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gleerose
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Brianna_Chase_2909
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Zoey_Mullins
Its a over all decent boook i like it alot dont get me wring buh it NeedS some more pizzaZz if u know what j mean nd it a hella good BOok
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rebecca_berry
I stumbled across this story as a recommendation. Im very glad that it was. the relationship between the two main characters is very believable. i hope to see an update soon!
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Ordinarystranger71
A good novel. Interesting plot, good character development and word choice is also good. The humor, the situation, well a novel that could make you giggle and still read happily. Strongly recommend to those people who wants to find a good slice of life, comedy novel. Need more chaps, author.
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Paripreity
The start of the story itself is a whopper. I am really enjoying the story very much. The FL is a normal human unlike other stories where she's the most beautiful girl. Keep it up dear. Great job done
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The_Procrastinator
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FST
Another one of my random reviews as suggested by Discord!
Today, I stumbled upon this story here and I'd like to share with you, what I thought while reading it, without spoiling anything for the new readers.
This review is gonna try and cover why all the categories got a five-star rating from me and I urge people to read this book no matter what my review says and make up your minds on your own.
That said let's begin!
The premise of this novel is super interesting because of how unique its setting and characters are.
The stories quality has a lot to do with that so let’s talk about that.
The humor in this story is a huge selling point in my opinion!
That is always a very good thing and here is why.
It is easy to say funny things.
It is another matter to say things in a funny way and this story does this consistently. This becomes especially obvious when the humor does not become stale.
As of the time of this review, the story has thirty-two chapters in total and I eagerly anticipate its upcoming releases.
The story development was done awesomely, nothing ever felt rushed or drawn out.
I like how the details and information were smoothly worked into the story without dumping too much of it.
The characters are hilarious!
I am excited to see how they and the world they live in continue to make me laugh!
I will continue to follow up on this story and I think you should too.
I want to thank the author for reaching out to me on discord!
Should you visit there, give a shout-out to the author or me!
I'd love to discuss this story and hear what you thought of it there!
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Killerbee
Let me tell you all the greatness of this book. It's been written by elyon - The saint of lolis and shotas. The book is a fun read and the first chapter Will definitely Hook you. The writing quality and grammar is great. Great job!!!!!!
Waiting for the bedroom scenes!
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Sisian
I'm really enjoying the characters! They're all unique in their own way. It shows that they've been well developed and I'm looking forward to seeing more! I don't do a whole lot of reading so I'll be taking my time with the story.
Great so far!
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Gourmet_DAO
I liked the title page, the story itself is so beautiful, I read only two chapters, but the novel is very cool. He included it in the library and gave one stone of advancement! Well-written dialogues with humor.
Cool romance! Thanks to the author for writing such a wonderful story !!!!
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AJZHEN
I was so tired after a long hard day today, thinking I still have certain things to do and I surely don’t have the motivation. I saw ‘kababayan’ author Elyon, posted that he has a new book and why not check it out. I’m glad I did, I had never laughed like this in a long time.😂😂😂
I don’t know about you, but I for one will continue reading this book. If not for anything else, but for a smile to my face that’s has faded long ago.
It’s fun, light hearted, and a good story. Come and join me and support this hard working author that only wants to put a smile on our face.
May god bless you! Dear Elyon.
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RedPandaChick
Although Alex is not Hubby material right now, just as is strength is not on par with other heros, he has the potential to be both. And both he shall become!
*buckles the seat belt and pulls down the lap bar. "Bring it on, Elyon! I am ready for the ride of my life."
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ObsidianOrbs
Okay first of all this story is way too funny!
The prologue got me!
The characters are well described and story has a nice flow to it.
Alice trying to snatch Alex is understandable. He sounds like a cutie!
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Sally112425
Hehehehe, I ended up laughing when the forever alone status was updated. She was so shocked....my goodness. Keep it up author. Waiting for more chapters....
Elyon