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liyanpark1013
I'm not rating my story yet I'm announcing about this story.
for those who read my story, you can see that the chapters are deleted. the reason is this story is under revision. I'm working on revising my chapters but the end of the week so I could release the update chapters. please be patient with the new chapters that I'll release, hopefully on Sunday! I'll make it up to you guys! I love you all so much and peace out!
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lazylyn
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lazylyn
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4bidienkingdom
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CharLi3001
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Ami_Moro
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Regine91Pin
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Hao_Abao
Havent read it and probably wont read it, but since its based in Korea, why not use the proper way for names? Jeon Misoo and Kim Taehyung, I mean... its really weird since ur basing the novel on a country but names are reversed.
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Mayrhyy
You should really check this book out, you won't regret doing so. I'm in love with this book, got hooked since chapter one. Good job author with the story line and it's development. Keep those chapters Rollinππ
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MidGard
So far so good! Carry on releasing please! I can't wait to read more of it! 100% recommend!!
damn it word count!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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JustLikeWriting777
Soooo It's going great so far. Of course I still need to read more chapters but I an tell that your story has potential! The main character I feel has a lot to face in the future and she's in for it! Can't wait for updates!
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SSKV_R3D
Fantasy genre is my favorite in terms of books and movies, which means I have a high standard on reviewing this kind of stories. The story was very well thought of, the characters was well developed but still need some time in order to make the readers care for them, while the world which is the most important part of fantasy genre books and movies is kinda lacking. Yes theres some parts where you are able to tell us what it was but i suggest to make it more alive, let the characters spend more time with the world and try exploring it. Overall this was a great book! Good job for the author
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madskie00017
I really am intrigued by your story plot. The story is very interesting. The chapters plot development so far is good and I want to keep reading it.
Please Keep writing and keep it up!!
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Rankuza
This is a very interesting novel. The groundwork of the story has laid smoothly, and the writing style has brought out the persona of each character.
I hope the author keeps writing.
I highly recommend this story.
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Elise_Aigasaki
It is a good novel, but there is a bunch of grammatical errors that can confuse the readers for a while. The first chapter will quickly pique a reader's interest and the flow of the story is good. Other than the grammatical errors, all is good.
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JuicyFruitSnack
The story is very interesting and it is very catchy but one thing I notice is the grammatical errors and the form of sentence that should revised but its minimal. over all its great story! Keep it up. I hope you could update more chapter.
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Dawn_in_dark
Nice and very interesting novel. I liked it's story development and character design. Hope for regular updates.
Keep it up. And make sure to release new chapters regularly π
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MrE
great character development
characters feel alive
descriptions are great
writing quality is beyond good
updates regular
keeps you on the edge
love it keep it up
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bibiyenini
wonder what is her dream? The suspense is all over this book! Nobody can hear of it if you aren't read this. Truly a one of a kind! Good job with your imagination!
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The_Procrastinator
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Oemar_danoes
Nice story, cool development, Awesome character design. KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPP GOING
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Ceinor_Lu
You've got a good base for the story, I wonder how will it go? Gets me curious, really. I hope this story will be successful. Oh wonder what Jeon Minsoo's fate would be. Gotta see I guess.
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Telle_Sityar
The story was good, it really interesting and my kind of genre but what I notice is the complexity or the sentences and the grammar. The update was stable, it didn't missed a day which is good. Good job Author-nim! I hope to see another interesting story!
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keirou
Pace of the story is just right, portrayal of character and grammar can improve. There is balance between fantasy and reality. Update stability is good.
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