Reviews of The Chosen Messenger of the Gods by SnowPenguin - Webnovel

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4.3

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Roji_Nemuro
I've always been a fan of stories like this. Your writing is great! You update too! My problems are the characters in the story. I can't seem to grasp their personality at the moment. But I've also read novels where characters are like that, they become solid and powerful figures in the later parts. And I wish to see this novel grow like that. You just earned another reader ^^. I wish I was as good and consistent as you.
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prada_murthy
The author has a unique, but interesting style of portraying the story. The grammar and command over the language are absolutely flawless, no doubt in that and the story too has some gripping edges. The only problem is the ML's conflicting character and his actions which at times becomes quite confusing. Other than that, no complaints. Keep up the good work author.
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TheSeagull
If I'm going to be really honest, this story smells like personal regrets. Either that, or a lot of assuming and not enough research, because I can't remember the last time anyone was considered underage for at 20, especially in ancient or rural Asia. This is set in China, right? Because Wei Lee sounds an awful lot like Chinese, and if I'm assuming correctly, his sister's name is quite possibly Wei Mei, or he just never calls her by name. Anyway, there are a lot of stray commas that don't really belong in the middle of sentences, and more than a few instances of incorrect verbiage from what I could tell after reading the first 5 chapters. Also, not to shame anyone or anything, but Lee comes across as more than a bit ******uous and entitled. While I usually look forward to watching characters of his ilk develop, this story seems more like it was written for the writer than any potential readers, which is not to my taste. It could be for other people though. Just my personal opinion, which is entirely objective. Anyway, you might want to add an 's' to 'uniform' in the second sentence of the first chapter, and get rid of some of the 'every day' mentions because it gets a little redundant. Good luck in your endeavors, and I hope you do well moving forward. :)
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GraceCayford
Man, i do love your writing. keep it up. story line and description is great and i love it. The way your story gives of the same vibiness as Mortal instruments and PJO is almost hooking. Great Work author.[img=recommend]
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spicyscribbles
The author uses vivid descriptions to bring the setting of their story to life as well as to give personality to their characters. Where I am at in the story, the MC is a flawed and lacking individual, and the way the author illustrates this is a testament to their skill in writing. I'm looking forward to seeing how his character will be developed. The author has a pretty good command of language, which is evident in their grammar and word choice. Overall this story is worth checking out, and I will be following its updates :D
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IrisSky
The story is beautiful and the character development is just too engaging. I loved how well written this story is. It keeps you on a edge and makes you want to read more!! Looking forward for more chapters.!
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Mar_Urbano
I was looking for something to read... and when I start to read this story I was like "woooww" ... I love it, I'm reading this and I'm in the 10th chapter, but I need to make justice for this story and I need to tell this is incredibly so well written! The descriptions of the place, situation and character are so well done that it could show me the entire world from that aldea... You have a gift author, don't stop to writte cause your way to expres is wonderful ... I will continue reading!
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MikruZero
Well, to be honest, it was a good read actually. But the MC is pretty conflicting and it's really bland. I mean, I have trouble spotting his personality was and the events in the book are pretty annoying and not so good. I advise the author to make it more realistic so the readers could relate and understand the book more easily. So overall, continue doing your best!
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MidGard
So far so good! please keep releasing! I can't wait to read more
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SilentMild
The story's format still needs improvement, but the potential is good. Keep it up, author! Hoping you could also drop an initial review for my new novel. Its title is Isekai Institute. Thank you!
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GloriouslyFamous
It is a well-written story, The story is written wonderfully, and a lot of effort is put into making it flow smoothly. The description of the scenery, people and the village is done well. There is somewhat of a suspense about the village and its people that will pull you in. I personally dislike the MC, as his motive for leaving is just selfish and bad, his relationship with his mother and sister is weird and for some reason, he perceived their goodwill as some sort of evil. Plus, I am not sure about his relationship with his sister and her fiance. If he wanted to leave to create a better opportunity for his family, I would be on board. I understand that it was done on purpose and that he slowly understands their situation as he exits the village and he will improve more in that sense. Hopefully, he will increase his EQ over time, and it does show that he will, but can he forgive himself for leaving his family like that. I hope he returns and fixes everything back with his family. Anyway, overall I find the story is written well and everything is described well. It is an interesting read.
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Drakonous
How can I say it? This story is written incredibly well; the description, the world building, the feeling the author can invoke on readers ... it's all amazing ... but falls flat when it came to the MC, Lee. 5 chapters in and he's pretty ... bland and conflicted? He hates that his sister is engaged, hating and nursing the fact that he's alone, but when his mom comes up with a matchmaker, he goes bonkers. Dude, you can't lie in misery and expect things to work, go out and look for someone if you're lonely or just shrug and be apathetic to the normies. Don't be so ... wish-washy with you emotions. I mean, if you look at it from one perspective, I guess it makes sense if you consider his age - I'm assuming he's a young ****, I don't think it was told just how old he is, like specifically - but at the same time, he seems to have matured very quickly so he shouldn't be like this ... ya'know. And that comes to the other point on character designs: the other characters, including his mom, are only there to make his life insufferable. This really gets me cause - look, I'm not a parent, but I have several nephews, and more coming, and, just like how my parents worried (worry) over me, I worry over them. Their lives, their futures, even though the oldest is only 5. And here, I can tell the mom is worried. She's worried about what Lee will face if anything ever happens to her as he's way too dependent on her. But this is never shown from her perspective, it's always from Lee's, which is understandably more ... morose. I think adding little bits, like how Lees mom's eyes glaze with worry as she watches him run away to the fields - or something like that - will add more personality to what seems like one dimensional characters that are simply there just to antagonize how the MC feels. I get that this seems like a rather tragic story, the hints and underline are there ... but you can't just make it seem soo miserable that readers get overwhelmed. My own story is based on tragedy, I've been told it's too dark, but even then, I try to make it lighthearted by showing interactions between the characters. They're some who have a tragic past, but they're cheerful and joke around; this lightens the mood and serves to highlight the good stuff happening while still underscoring that tragedy has and will follow. It's a very delicate balance, one that I can't say I've mastered. But other than that, every thing else is incredible. Grammar is in impeccable, hardly any mistakes, and the description of the story is very vivid, if sometimes somewhat dry, and it's great to read, don't get me wrong. I just can't get behind the MC yet, but maybe time will tell and I'll change my mind.
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Shionokami
Alright, alright i just steped into something unexpected, and yet this unexpected revealed itself to be something interresting not gonna lie only a few chapters in and im alredy into it, theres just a little something that i have to point out that as already been said by another reader and that is the lack of dialogue but then again im not here to teach anyone how to do their story just go ahead keep up the good work!
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Nullinvoid
The Story is very solid. I read three chapters and found it quite entertaining. I will add this to my library and continue. The only thing I would recommend is there is a lack of dialogue to really pull me in and I think the author should go back to first 2 chapters and really add some more dialogue between characters to establish their relationships to give it more emotional punch. :)
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I am still 5th chapter but wanted to give a review... The MC character's development is so good and background world set up is also nice... Good luck author, I will try to read remaining chapters...
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Readoholic
I am only at chp 6 but I was already feeling like I was on my toes anticipating for the next... It's a really wonderful storyline with amazing descriptions. Also your grammar is good making it easier for readers to connect with the story.. It indeed was a good read. :)
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mona_keshwari
This a type of story, which makes one want to squint their eyes, and bite tyeir nails in anticipation... Great start... Good description...true dreaming is many people livelihood.[img=update]
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JustLikeWriting777
I love the twist you gave in the story. The MC character development is amazing. It just makes me more curios about him and everything. The plot is unique as well.
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Jay_Mhekzy
At first Lee Wei seems like a big pampered brat who is under the control of his mother. Later, when he ran off the story began to take a turn. I understand he seems unlikable at first but you'll definitely think otherwise as the story progresses. I would like to commend you on your writing style as not all author can manage the third-person point of view well.
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amaturewriter
7 chps in and its no doubt interesting,,,but gotta ask,,,does MC remain trashy, cause this dude is really unlikable cause of the **** he has done [or dosnt do]
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