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4.46

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quentin_lebbe
Très intéressant se concept, sachant qu'il s'agit d'un monde qui fusionne plusieurs série, que l'on a pas l'habitude de voir dans la fanfic, sachant aussi qu'il est dans une époque antérieure au série en question. Petit point négatif, sa c'est trop concentré sur la série Harry Potter et pas assez sur les autres, exemple : les séries "the witcher" "true blood" "teen Wolf" non été évoqué que en coup de vent, "the original" a été un peu plus évoqué mais pas tant que sa au final. Le personnage disais vouloir aider Nicklaus mikaelsons, mais il n'a toujours rien fais, il aurait pû faire quelque chose aussi pour la sorcière originel. Bref sinon une seul question, c'est pour quand la suite?
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Eli_Hallam
This story is really good and has potential to be even more great since it looks to be in the beginning stages but my problem is that it's so good that I can't wait for the next chapter
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CopyPaste1
good story i like how is slow paced hope some time we have more chapters ................................................................
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Mortem_Ouroboros
De lo mejor que e leído en mucho tiempo solo porque parece que lo abandonaron si es falta de ideas recomiendo la creación de un discord yo mismo le ofrezco para dar ideas y constatar datos de muchas cosas (en específico de mounstros y creaturas mágicas y normales)
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DarkSouls
I liked the story and all but if you lack imagination try to give yourself an idea about what happens in the novel and keep jumping back and forth in time to get to where you feel like writing.
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DaoistuEtpEO
This was definitely one of the best Harry Potter fanfic that I have ever read. The only thing bad about this is that it doesn´t have that many chapters. And, that the last update was 3 months ago.
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Ekmah
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updating stability: no update since two week. world background got 4 stars because it is fanfiction and the background is basically already here, added 1 star because of the starting year. character design & story developement both got 2 stars because of the woshes of the character. Any story with wishes is generally worthless anyway, simply because the wishes always ends up to be utterly broken, to the point of making the entire point of telling a story obsolete. Even more so when the author condense multiple wishes inside of a single one... There will therefor obviously not be any evolution of the MC, nor struggles or challenges ahead... And finally, but the most important point, the writing quality. -lack of ponctuation -lack of words/letters -repetition of the same word multiple time (will edit later with an exemple, if i can) -awkward and poorly built sentence (DO NOT underestimate the importance of this point.) a simple use of grammarly or an auto corrector would have solved most of those problems. This shows the investment of the author in his work...
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Bella_Mahon
Omg I love this fan fiction. I love how it is a mixture of the different universes. The MC is also a really likeable character in my opinion. I really want to see more of the potterverse though. I can’t wait to read about the MC in the founders time once they’ve created Hogwarts. And I absolutely love the mc x Clio right now, I hope he ends up protecting her family line or smth. Keep updating author!!!
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DaoistMatthew
Epic novel, love having all my favorite stories incorporated. The MC is a boss and not like a arrogant OP turd. Hats off to you mate.🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪😜😜😜🤭🤭🤭🤭😁😁😁🙏😳😳💯💯💯💯💯
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Tanaiste
Great story. Really enjoying it so far, especially the Norse aspects. Hope to see more about the Potterverse as time goes by. Founding of Hogwarts maybe?
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