I saw some minor grammatical mistakes, but as long as you keep writing, I believe that you will fix that eventually. I'm quite excited as to how Bri and Zac's relationship will progress, so please don't stop writing!
Better keep on writing, you have a potential to be a great writer. You're just starting. There'll be hardships but it will be easier with time and experience. Good luck on your path, beloved writer.
After reading, I realized that this book is something everyone can relate on. And you can feel the flowing emotions while reading, this is a fun 'ride' to read.
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