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5

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Mill_01
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Molly_Sun
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heavicedcoffee
Pleasant start! I love it~ That was so exciting! Please write more author-nim :) Good start! I love it~ That was so exciting! Please write more author-nim :) Good start! I love it~ That was so exciting! Please write more author-nim :) Good start! I love it~ That was so exciting! Please write more author-nim :)
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Jwcwwd
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MonarchX
Amazing, though I haven't read all of it yet since I just started reading. If you like system novels, then give this a try. Gonna add it to my library cause I need to read more.
3yr
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Sly_Lyon
Shameless author review, this novel is fun to write, really fun to write. The mc is described as average but I don't know. I don't think he is that average
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IO22
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IO22

Found the novel to be Nice, fast paced with good grammar and a John doe MC............................. that's all I got........................... ............... ........ ...........................
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jordiMaverick_bW
The MC is an average joe and as for the plot I can't say because I have not read that far. So far nothing that happens in the chapters seems out of place, good flow. And the dialogue gives me an almost clear picture of what type of people he characters are. The action scenes were pretty solid and I could have said more if I wasn't such a slow reader. T_T
3yr
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Caine_Stark
I'm honestly at a loss for words as to why this novel is sitting at 7 power stones. It jumps right into a great action scene with good flow, dialogue, and pacing. It keeps that momentum for a dozen chapters so far with no signs of falling off the rails. The story is clean, following our MC and written VERY well in a crisp no nonsense style.
3yr
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Oniichan_Thickskin
I see system novel, I rate them 5... not just any system novel though, I kinda do like the development of where this is going, just not wanting to spoil it any further, but this is a great one to read, albeit just need to stock up on more chapters.
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The_Procrastinator
Litrpg = 5 stars! Thank you for writing this novel, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ Litrpg = 5 stars! Thank you for writing this novel, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ Litrpg = 5 stars! Thank you for writing this novel, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ Litrpg = 5 stars! Thank you for writing this novel, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ Litrpg = 5 stars! Thank you for writing this novel, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ Litrpg = 5 stars! Thank you for writing this novel, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ Litrpg = 5 stars! Thank you for writing this novel, Author! More chapters please! ^_^
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