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anlaS0
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anlaS0

I just want to give myself a rating to somewhat start the review section. Anyway, this is my first work in web novel and I hope you enjoyed it. I wished to hear from you guys about this novel and so please leave a review! I will try my best to make the story more and more exciting and so please bear with me. Anyways that's all I want to say bye!
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PsyberRose
This is a really interesting story with a normal girl striving to not only get revenge, but also improve herself. There are a little twist here and there, which only serves to make the story interesting and will captivate your interest. Writing Quality: Very good with negligible mistakes. Heck, English isn't my first language either and I make even more mistakes than this in my writing. Stability of Updates: Well, just started reading so not sure about it. However, 5* based on good faith and the Author appears serious in keeping steady updates. Story Development: It's good. I like the fact that when she went back to the past, there are changes due to her actions. The butterfly effect is there so essentially, everything is new and different. That is what makes this all the more interesting. Character Design: If you can love and hate a character, then it means a good well done. World Background: I like the world that had been created. At first, I thought it was more of the medieval type, then some fantasy elements were put in. Only thing I was sad about was, instead of drop-dead beautiful and etheral immortal elves, we have the tiny version. No, not the Author's fault. It is this reader who just has an unhealthy obsession with elves. /heh All the best Author.
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Sweet_Cat_0994
story is good , character is excellentπŸ‘πŸ‘
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Diana_Jo_Osgood
Our heroine is awesome the love story is beautiful Friends are awesome The 11th list is an adorable little butt. My only problem with the book is that we don't get enough information on the count's wife we don't get to find out about Laura's parentsAnd we don't get to see the cute baby
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Joor_Moon
Hello writer, I just want to say this before I continue reading another novel. Thank you. I really enjoyed reading your novel. I wanted to write this because it was the only novel I read with enthusiasm and I didn't miss any part of it. I read as many as 100+ novels on the web, but it was the only romance novel that made me excited to read it. I look forward to more of your creations .πŸ’›πŸŒΉπŸ’‹
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Sheri_Golladay
grate story but skipped to different areas. end of story forgot to mention the parents that are still alive why she was left at the orphanage, what was in the diary. much emphasis was placed on these events and they were not revealed.
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Fanfangirl
I already read a few chapters and I like it! The synopsis attract me as I like isekai and revenge based genres with a a little bit of romance. I like the FL's character, gentle and kind yet not to the point of naive. Overall, like this story!
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xButtons
There are bit of errors in the spelling and story along the way, but it's still easy to understand. hopefully the author at some point goes back and corrects the errors in the story. The story moves at a pretty good pace I like that it wasn't dragged along, although it was a bit rushed at some parts in my opinion. overall I would recommend reading it, it was very enjoyable!
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Elena_shkz
Perfect book to read in mood the way it selct the scene and background was way enough for a person to get in the mood. Perfect blend of rhe characters and scene
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MrsSkellington
Our main character goes back in time with the blessing of a mysterious God after being falsely of murder and sentenced to death. Its clear that your supposed to feel bad for Laura and root for her as she gets her revenge on those who wronged her but I had no sympathy for her. She keeps going on and on about how strong, mature and wise she is since she went back in time but she only went back two years. And her big bad trauma was that her tutor and the maids abused her and she wasn't allowed to see her family(the other orphans). I'd originally felt bad until you start to get the details of it all and you realize that all those things happened to her because she allowed it to. She never told her adoptive father that the tutor was beating her, she never tried to speak up about the maids mistreating her and she never made any attempt to get to know anyone. She hid in her room made zero friends and then wanted to act surprised when no one was willing to stick there neck out and defend her. I'm not saying she deserved to be abused no one deserves that but even after going back she still acts as of the world owes her something because something. You are a stranger no one knows yet you still think people are just going to randomly side with you. Laura is a whiny girl who spends her time crying and shouting that the world is Unfair while doing nothing to change it
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Jhgffcddukbb6
Loved the story, an emotionally travel back in the past, and the rebirth. I'm so enthusiastic about those themes, and to not talk about how sweet were the couples! I'll make sure to check the other books too!
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Bobaholic_girl
Finally completed reading the novel. Its so interesting that every chapter keeps you on edge. The characters, setting, plot ..everything is just perfect. Keep up the good work Author. 😁
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blissxfull
Just finished this story! Loved the characters , story is good. But i didnt understand quite a few things here and there. Sometimes it confuses me. but good job author
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Erzie26
This was the first novel I read here. Its super interesting. The author has done a great job with character development too. [img=recommend]
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JELL_IO
I really loved this story. Seeing Laura focus on her revenge and accomplishing it was just the best. Not only focusing on her love story but Serena’s as well was really good. Overall it was a satisfactory reading experience.
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Ralina_Workshop
Nice story, very touching and beautiful. I love how it was written, how the character wa built, and the background. Good job authors [img=recommend]
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Maria_Martins_6782
Loved the story but not the end were she leave she should have stayed and built a new world and had should of helped the crown prince heal his hand and brought back his mana in the future but the rest was great
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Maria_Martins_6782
Love it it was a reeally good story with mice twists to it you did a great job in writing this storybu should be very proud of your self β€οΈπŸ‘πŸ»πŸ˜˜πŸŽ‰πŸ’
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Agrika
I loved the story development, the characters, the imagination, everythin about it. It was a simple, historical classic love and revenge novel and I simply adore it........
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phoenix_8888
I wanted a fairly light read and I got it with this story. Though it did have some of the standard cliches, being wronged by family, looks, wealth, some fantasy, royalty and preying mantis (white lotus) I am not bored with the story. Both leads are acceptable but I cannot say that I'm wowed but I'm fine with that because it still achieves its entertainment purpose. Since the story is already completed at less than 150 chapters, which is appreciated I will finish it. Wishing anlaS0 all the best in her endeavors.
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Meli96

its was a really awsome book ..!! the whole plot and the characters , every single things about the book was really amazing i am glad i read it ..!!
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Annalee_Moore
This book has been really fun for me to read. It has given me laughs when i really needed them and it jas been nearly impossible to put down! ❀️
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Sarah_Furch
Overall this was a good read. i read it in one day and it held my attention the whol time. i found cery few mistakes in the grammar and enjoyed the Plot. there were several plot holes and rushed writing. There were some parts that could be more detailed and better explained but overall it is one of my favorite reads so far. I highly tecommend reading it.
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TishKim
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TishKim

Enjoying the book so far. At least its different from the usual story line................................................................................................::.............
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Oni_Orisan_Modupe
I think the last chapter about princess Serena was referring to Prince Winston and not Prince Elijah. A short novel that balanced the characters with their roles. I believe the grammatical errors are not intentional.
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Savage_advice36
My favorite part was the romance with the duke. Thought their might end up being something between her and the first prince so that she could be in a high person in society, but I’m VERY happy to be wrong. What they have is so pure and sweet. Can already tell that this is going to be a favorite of mineπŸ˜­πŸ‘πŸΎπŸ‘πŸΎβ˜ΊοΈ
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TishKim
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TishKim

Looks like a nice short story.... so far the chapters I have read are interesting and looking forward to what will happen next.. a review said its authors first book, so far so good
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