Chapter comments on the chapter Daily life in a Dungeon of the book The Rise Of A Porter

.... beginning of (solo leveling), cough "puff" almost a copy ... cough "puff".

You are worried about people quiting your story but the solution to this is imprisoning your audience in the first place. The main reason people quit a story is because it offers nothing to follow. Just the ending of this chapter is enough to make me want to follow the next because it was somewhat unexpected that he would steal.

lol is the first time that the novel mentions Brazil and a Brazilian and it’s not like a slave from the USA or something like kkk I’ll even send you a gift just because of that, as a Brazilian, it makes me happy

Hmm. I was expecting a solo levelish Raid Boss who wipes the party and leaves the mc with a cheat. If this porter actually works hard and legitimately succeeds without a system or cheat this will be one of my main stories.

Not smart He should have left a few things for the others to find. They’d be happy, and probably argue about the split. But I understand why he’d Snab it all,

A moderately good beginning and a little solo leveling vibe but hey I'm not gonna complain as I'm a solo leveling fan. Well anyway , let's see where this new journey will lead me to.

Great start for a novel... Just make the MC miserable and let him gain power lol

This gives me the vibe of "solo leveling". It has a great start. Good job author.

It seems weird how the society would change so drastically after only 5 years, that’s barely enough time to research how the dungeons and world changed like this.

the world building and character building was quite good good luck for you I am cheering on you[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

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I don't understand how it's basically solo leveling copy from the start I mean I can see similarities but If you read on its so different its not even funny.

It's impressive how many cliches the author stuffed in one chapter.

I do not think the US government would dissolve its army like that even if people became powerful. It would be highly unpopular among the general public and something both democrats and republican politicians would not want to happen (especially republicans since it is part of their ideology). Even if both sides argue about military budget allocation, maintaining the military would be a bipartisan agreement. Furthermore, a military would be important in deterring other countries from attacking. That is why they exist. I do not think the appearance of dungeons would change that. What I think would likely happen would be a massive conscription by the government to force those with abilities to enlist (which the public would support in a crisis like this). I don’t think guilds would exist at all but maybe something similar would exist within the military. After the chaos settled and conscription ended, plenty of people with abilities would still voluntarily enlist. A massive military reform would likely happen to accommodate adventurers while research funding would shift towards combining magic with technology to create powerful weapons. This all based on my knowledge of US politics, the military, and general public opinion. I am sure this could be applied to most countries as well. Even myself would be fearful of abolishing the military. This is the most pragmatic approach I can think of that makes sense.

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Still cant get over the Spit

predators can feel your desperation and exploit it. the bullying is your own doing . you some king of masochist?

Thanks for the chapter 😄 Keep up the good work 👍