First thing first.. Give you a 5* rating cos I really enjoy this novel..
Pros : Story is Good.. Has lot of potential. Mc cheat and path to power seems interesting and it got me hooked right from the beginning.. Good job author.
Pros : * sigh * Even though I got so hooked up n immersed in the story I can't help but feel irritated by the simple mistakes?? Of the translator or the Author. For f sake.. Please.. Even if ur not that good in grammar at least write the spellings right.. Too many wrong spellings n misplaced words.. To point out a few.. Every time we saw Mc status update we see "Mentle" power that should be "Mental" power * Hmmm * Pls at least fix this..
The spellings n grammar mistakes are an eyesore for this unpolished Novel that has a lot of potential to rise up.. Pls fix.. Asap.
** : M rooting for you Author to make this story better than it already is..'
absolutely awesome story. ideal protagonist imo. doesn't go out of his way to find trouble but also doesn't go out of his way to leave trouble hanging. still early days (60ish chaps) but story development is good so far without spending too much time on any 1 part of the story. hopefully he continues to get stonger at the same pace π
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Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! Iβd love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
Really good story, makes me mad that I dont get more than 1 power stone a day to vote or I'd bore this a lot.
Pretty caught up with all current chapters, I hope this story continues!
SUPER , GENIALE , FABULEUX
Vivement la suite
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one of the best novels im reading, has everything im looking for in a novel: action, adventure, fantasy and r18. Hope it doesn't drop and the author gives us a great novel.
this novel has everything i look for, the character development and the overall story makes sense, the MC is not a retard. It has adventure, action, fantasy and r18, everything i ask for.
this novel has everything im looking for, the plot is really good and the story makes sense, hope it doesn't drop and author keeps giving us great chapters
this novel has everything im looking for, the plot is really good and the story makes sense, hope it doesn't drop and author keeps giving us great chapters
MC is a simp.
Grammar/spelling is terrible.
Novel is extreamly fast paced, It skips over a lot of details.
Nothing really unique about this novel, its pretty much the same, once the MC gets some power it becomes a power reset over and over.
Its pretty clear that the author doesnt have an outline of where to take his novel. its almost as if he wakes up in the morning and decides to go in a different direction everyday.
The book is basically about an MC who is a simp. The abandonment of his humanity to become something rlse.....trust me, itβs not that great. He is just a lovestruck simp
It looked like it might have been a bit interesting.
Until I actually started to read it.
The sentence formation, the grammar is all not up to par.
Needs a lot of improvement.
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Although this novel is a harem and I read it, romance is considered average, but I said that it is fine, but he is weak and poor, he buys a magic formula from the level of God for it and he is in dire need of points. I washed my hands from this novel. And why always the novels harem and he needs to protect them I need a novel and she's not a harem and the girl not weak and she don't need to protect all time
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A very basic story in every sense. There is nothing outstandingly bad but nothing stands out as really good either. it lacks depth(no character building or world building) and progresses from one cliche to the next. After 20 chapters, nothing really interested me enough to continue. Overall, above average for this site but lacked enough appeal for me to continue.
I discovered this novel recently and i found it interesting so far. Throughout the story loved the novel as its good and interesting. I recommend this novel to system fans as a new stories.
Yo Author San.. I am a fellow aspiring author and had some queries .. would you mind if you can brief me on this writing thing and how everything else?
Overall I'm only reading this because I'm bored. The writing itself is passable however the story lacks depth (Description of the surroundings/world and the character himself) its literally Ayaan does that and this theres no background what so ever.
Although I said the english is passable, would be nice to have the author or an editor to recheck the chapters and make it more smoothly.
Only read 30 chapters so far, but it's a brainless read for me.
it's an overall good book but the development if too fast. The world background is kind of lacking although it's still new I guess in the near future this would be fixed. Keep up the Good Work!
I read till chapter 24 and found the plot presented at first interesting and promising, with the characters that appeared with good construction.
The problem is when the story fell at the MC's hands and the 'oh-so' great intelligence started. Minor accidents really, stupidly revealing his identity (with the character not relating him to his race even after having just met one herself).
Then, as if having to nerf the whatever system of the MC so that he doesn't self-destruct, the author started 'correcting' many things like elements and even the Spirit of the system...
Sorry, but I will drop this as I'm already tired of forced development. thanks to the MC 'stupidity'.
Until now this is a good read. The story is well structured, the character/story development is also not too fast and it has constant updates. Not much is explained about the world until now and sometimes itβs hard to follow since the grammar is somehow lacking a bit. The most mistakes you will see in this book will be vocabulary ones where an article or a verb is wrongly used.
All in all it has great potential and the only thing which could make the story better is a editor/proofreader to reread and correct the spelling and grammar mistakes.
CeeBee_Aries