First thing first.. Give you a 5* rating cos I really enjoy this novel..
Pros : Story is Good.. Has lot of potential. Mc cheat and path to power seems interesting and it got me hooked right from the beginning.. Good job author.
Pros : * sigh * Even though I got so hooked up n immersed in the story I can't help but feel irritated by the simple mistakes?? Of the translator or the Author. For f sake.. Please.. Even if ur not that good in grammar at least write the spellings right.. Too many wrong spellings n misplaced words.. To point out a few.. Every time we saw Mc status update we see "Mentle" power that should be "Mental" power * Hmmm * Pls at least fix this..
The spellings n grammar mistakes are an eyesore for this unpolished Novel that has a lot of potential to rise up.. Pls fix.. Asap.
** : M rooting for you Author to make this story better than it already is..'
absolutely awesome story. ideal protagonist imo. doesn't go out of his way to find trouble but also doesn't go out of his way to leave trouble hanging. still early days (60ish chaps) but story development is good so far without spending too much time on any 1 part of the story. hopefully he continues to get stonger at the same pace 😉
I decided to review because I finally saw the r-18 tag come to light after 130 chaps[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
descobri o ontem, é um livro bom no geral, mas o desenvolvimento é muito rápido.
O pano de fundo do mundo está um pouco ausente, embora ainda seja novo, acho que em um futuro próximo isso seria corrigido. Mantenha o bom trabalho!
A very basic story in every sense. There is nothing outstandingly bad but nothing stands out as really good either. it lacks depth(no character building or world building) and progresses from one cliche to the next. After 20 chapters, nothing really interested me enough to continue. Overall, above average for this site but lacked enough appeal for me to continue.
Overall I'm only reading this because I'm bored. The writing itself is passable however the story lacks depth (Description of the surroundings/world and the character himself) its literally Ayaan does that and this theres no background what so ever.
Although I said the english is passable, would be nice to have the author or an editor to recheck the chapters and make it more smoothly.
Only read 30 chapters so far, but it's a brainless read for me.
I read till chapter 24 and found the plot presented at first interesting and promising, with the characters that appeared with good construction.
The problem is when the story fell at the MC's hands and the 'oh-so' great intelligence started. Minor accidents really, stupidly revealing his identity (with the character not relating him to his race even after having just met one herself).
Then, as if having to nerf the whatever system of the MC so that he doesn't self-destruct, the author started 'correcting' many things like elements and even the Spirit of the system...
Sorry, but I will drop this as I'm already tired of forced development. thanks to the MC 'stupidity'.
Until now this is a good read. The story is well structured, the character/story development is also not too fast and it has constant updates. Not much is explained about the world until now and sometimes it‘s hard to follow since the grammar is somehow lacking a bit. The most mistakes you will see in this book will be vocabulary ones where an article or a verb is wrongly used.
All in all it has great potential and the only thing which could make the story better is a editor/proofreader to reread and correct the spelling and grammar mistakes.
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If you have had a bad day, are thoroughly annoyed with someone or something, or possibly just want to read a great book, then this is the novel for you. The book is great about murder gratification. Person bothers the mc? Not for long.
This book brings a fresh look in the 'new world' genre and I am very much looking forward to see where this novel leads, or at least how it gets there!
It's need more stronger enemies.. To give the Mc a purpose. Stories like this usually gone array without certain plot. I hope the author, creates more plot twist. More figures involves. Not just harem stories
The story is quite very interesting . Excellent development , good updating stability but for the character development , you can actually do better design and please check for writing errors before posting . Thanks.