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Sindura
The story started great, but then his character devolved into something I completely detest. Maybe others will like it, but I'm dropping it here...
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givemeonedolla
it's really good until the fight with Ancient One. Nobody in MCU can react to a person faster than the speed of sound withour preparetion, and really? he got beat up by a mage in close combat?
writing quality and story develop6 - good until the ancient one like i said, and the all caps when expressing the mc's thoughts are kinda cringe tbh, Exclamation Mark exist lol.
character design - gave it 2 instead of 1 becoz i like the mc in the early volumes. kinda low becoz I've not seen anyone from the MCU shouting "scums from kree (or whatever race it is) die!"
updating stability - 3 coz i just read it today so i gave it the average rating
world background - well, it's the MCU not your own creation, be grateful i gave it 3.
overall good and recommendedfor newbie readers, not recommended to old readers
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NeonPLay250
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DaoisttG3KuY
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OSQ
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lazarus898
the story in the start was great and even the other marvel characters were getting introduced in the story smoothly but it started getting boring pretty quickly and with Zhang Wei it was totally annoying. The Mc has powers of 3 sannins but instead of do tensei and shadow clone jutsu he dosen't use anything. Just rasengan sometimes. The ancient one is mentioned a lot but she is shown as a complete idiot and is useless to the story. The Mc complicates things for no reason and acts all high and mighty
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Gerrix_Agopitac
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Nxgen_Snail_Kota
I honestly have to say I enjoyed reading it, and the only complaints I have are the Egotistical MC and his apparent need to involve himself in every little event as a result of his own changes to cannon.
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Serge_Popov_0634
Well, it was nice i the begining, but after timeskip to 2008 MC suddenly got so busy that lost all control on the situation. There is always a question in my head 'What is doing MC?' because with influx of POVs of minor characters it looks like he doesn't care anymore.
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Acsmaster007
over RATED truely.. ......some people rated 5 stars multiple times....firstxarc was good then it went ........ππππππππππππππππ
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Jashandeep_Sandhu
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KuzkinaMat
The whole life and meaning of the hero is in preparation for the battle against Thanos. Thanks to this idea, I guess I don't need to read this fanfic anymore. In addition, the main character is castrated and the rating can be set on page 13. It was sad to read about the romance between the black widow and the winter soldier at a time when the main character does nothing during the plot. Increase strength? Collect stones in advance? Not. We will be watching the plot in a mask. After the first volume, reading is not interesting.
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Phoenix1998
I know the villain has darkhold but the villain is still more powered than possible.
Please kill the villian fast.
I know the villain has darkhold but the villain is still more powered than possible.
Please kill the villian fast.
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Jashandeep_Sandhu
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yourmomforgotmynam
I really like, I'm still in in the early chapters so there might be changes in the later chapters but for now this is my review. Like I said I still haven't caught up to the latest chapters so I can't say anything about the update stability
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yaya_sota
Well its a pretty good story but way to much Politichs and way to lesss things about our main Charachter.
It is in our main character's point of vive but everything is abiut his Grandfather and father.
I know Orgin story is Importand as well as the devolpment, but this is, i dont know, its kinda pulled loong, to make the story loonger.
So all in all, its a good story just way to many side Charachter details, or something like that.
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User177785
Terrible story tbh he talked about saving the world and i finally thought we were gonna get a sensible hero mc instead he lets his grandfather die howard and martha die and turns into a bootleg orochimaru author is a legitimate dimwit and I wouldnt be surprised if the reason the mc took a turn for the worst was because of all the edgelords that think theyre the main character nagging him
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Phoenix1998
Author i love this story. But hope this arc ends soon. He should kill him fast.
Author i love this story. But hope this arc ends soon. He should kill him fast.Author i love this story. But hope this arc ends soon. He should kill him fast.
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Phoenix1998
Great chapter.
Need more. especially hela
hela. Kill them all. Also slap thor.hela. Kill them all. Also slap thor.hela. Kill them all. Also slap thor.
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JStyles
If you want to learn how to ruin a good story then please read this
if you wanna make the mc a mob character then read this
if you want to learn how to force stuff to happen due to coincidences in the story then read this
shit
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CafeconLeche
From the second volume the plot began being forced, the Mc made stupid decisions nothing to do with how Orochimaru would think, besides that I do not like a mc similar to Orochimaru that honestly did not deserve forgiveness in the anime
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paras_rai
This is good write more, I really like it a lot
This is good write more, I really like it a lot
This is good write more, I really like it a lot
This is good write more, I really like it a lot
This is good write more, I really like it a lot
This is good write more, I really like it a lot
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paras_rai
This is good read I want to read more
This is good read I want to read more
This is good read I want to read more
This is good read I want to read more
This is good read I want to read more
This is good read I want to read more
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paras_rai
This is a good read I want more chapter
This is a good read I want more chapter
This is a good read I want more chapter
This is a good read I want more chapter
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paras_rai
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This is good for meThis is good for me
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Jerry070
Not many thing to say its just that i don't like this fanfic anymore.
Too many p.o.v. that i hate it now.
At one point i even forgot the name of mc.
Its not a fanfic where you are going to read mc do things in his own p.o.v. In this you are going to read about mavel universe in parallel dimension where one of the main character is ethan named guy and now you have to read his story first and when he become powerful in like 70 to 90 chapters. This story will give you every person's p.o.v. that are present in marvel and not as aftermath or reaction but their side story kind of thing which is now nearly half of what this novel offers. So, good bye and good luck with your story author.
I liked it very much till now.
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Divine_rod
Fuckin mc he is like a child and his growth is just like shit and he has a dick personality **** itπππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Falaphel
So I'm in chapter 147 and I'm going to do a review on this fan fiction. I can understand that some people disagree with my opinion but as I said it is only my opinion.
Writing quality: For me the writing quality has only diminished for some time, Ethan (mc as a reminder) slowly became a secondary character, he is just there to introduce a plot or give orders.
Update stability: Nothing to say, the chapters are recurring.
Development of the Story: The story has been "far-fetched" for some time. Coincidences bring a bizarre plot, and Ethan's allies make questionable decisions.
Character Design: OCs / Apprentices are interesting although sometimes I don't quite understand their characters or choices. Ethan for me only has speech abilities it's been so long since I saw him fight or come out clearly that I don't remember his abilities.
Context of the world: Nothing to say this is fan fiction so the universe is not created.
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Phoenix1998
Monolihts nice.
Story is great.
Great mix of mcu and tv shows.
Monolihts nice.
Story is great.
Great mix of mcu and tv shows.
Monolihts nice.
Story is great.
Great mix of mcu and tv shows.
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