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Mill_01
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Nathan_Golder
This is beyond cringy, the grammar is fine but the writing is muh. Everybody is vomit inducing in there speech and constantly verbally sucking each other off.
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Will5010
This book seems to have the foundations of a great book but is let down by poor writing. if you want to see what I mean I've left comments in the first chapter.
another thing is the way speech is handled, having the name after every speech is disjointing. try to build the speech into the sentences. the name after style could then be used for greater effect in confusing fight scenes or when lots of aside characters are talking. Also in general work on the way you express ideas. eg aghh its my alarm is both a unnatural thing to say and disjointing. instead he jolted awake, realizing the dragon roars were in fact his alarm clock.
This only an example, there's many ways to do it but this book has a lot of potential if you go back and rewrite it.
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SumGai
Okay. This is my honest review. This novel is... decent. There are very, very few grammar mistakes if you don't count the other constantly forgetting to end a paragraph with a period as a grammar mistake. and the stability of the uploads is very good, though do understand my criteria isn't frequent updates, but being sure that the author will give me a chapter at a designated time every time. and for this guy, it's once a week, not bad, but definitely not good. as for the story development, it's not bad. I've read 103 chapters, and the story is pretty average. character design is also not that bad. the frequently appearing characters aren't 2d, but they're also not 3d. kind of 2.5 d, if that makes any sense. the side characters tho, are 2d, which is a problem. as for world-building, it's going pretty slow. and there isn't any sign of that changing. it's good in the way that there aren't any info-dumps. bad in the way that the world-building is unsatisfying.
I can tell you what you can expect and not expect. (Might contain small, but relatively easy to guess spoilers)
1- the MC becoming strong very quickly.
2- the MC has a very OP bloodline and father
3- the MC keeps shocking everyone because he grows monstrously fast.
4- The story/novel itself is extremely idealistic. nobody is evil, nobody does any bullying, nobody is anything but friendly, which is extremely weird.
and that's it, really. Oh, also harem, definitely a plus.
If you have nothing to do, do give it a try. although I might seem like I'm roasting it, but it's definitely not bad, as far as my reading experience goes, there are much worse ones out there
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NaTaS_2951
It's actualy kinda good novel but MC is total not gonna kill anyone beta I hope his enemies will come back and viciously slaughter his friends and family why he screams I'm beta and won't kill anyone
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Nafsu_geass28
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
is this a huge harem?
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Ambroshus
In my professional consumer opinion the author did a great job in keeping the novel interesting considering that most other novels have cool training and getting stronger parts but the rest is just dry copy pasted comedy but this one has both interesting during training and none training parts so that you don’t get bored or question if it’s worth reading..... Now that said the novel does have some downsides and that can never be avoided BUT compared to other novels this shines in that it is a very minimal amount instead of you questioning why the mc only has two brain cells to rub together and is somehow smarter than everyone else. All in all I’d say that it is a good read and there were some parts where I couldn’t wait to continue reading
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Nafsu_geass28
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Is this a huge harem?
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Is this a huge harem?
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Is this a huge harem?
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Is this a huge harem?
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Raeven_Black
I just love love LOVE this story! I can't stop reading after a chapter and that is good! Every character ropes you in and I fricken love the humor! Great story!
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AJPaturde
You have got a kind of imagination that I can ever not imagine. it is good.'
to my thinking, you should work on your cover nothing else. I have started reading the novel by its synopsis will go ahead.
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Luna765
Very interesting I must say, it's not easy to write fiction. The author is very creative and imaginative. I look forward to reading more !!!
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skizrim_3
yeah I did what you said right now and now review time
this novel is really great for beginners and for people that read alot but to criticize to much because some people have said it's a bunch of cliches but if you add different cliches together you might just a really good book like how right now nova has a mysterious family and all he knows is he's related to the first king and he wants to get stronger to help reishnied (sorry if i got it wrong i did it off memory ) and help himself with other things don't know yet but we're going to see
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zd4zaaa
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skizrim_3
Amazing one of the best novels I ever read I hope he keeps going with this wonderful novel I mean
NOT HAREM YET??!!!!!!!!!!! but love the story
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Architman
This is honestly one of the best novels I read, the characters are well made, the world is interesting, I don't have to wait a year for an update ya know the stuff ya want in a web novel. Anyway, I recommend everyone to at least try out this novel cause ya won't regret it.
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FST
I love this story. It written with consistent quality and i am in love with the world and characters that the author put in it. I cannot wait for more!
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Glamouranj
This fantasy story is written nicely. I found myself thoroughly enjoying it. I was kinda bothered to the symbol you used for quoting instead of a quotation mark or maybe t'was my first time to encounter that. However, the plot is perfectly fit for the chapters. I'm adding it to my collection.
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mjayauthor
I am really liking this novel. How we can see the character's thoughts in a limited way. You did that very well. The back and forth between the characters really creates the ******* and builds the scenes for the training and dueling. I am adding this to my collection. Can't wait to read more
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mymysticworld
The story is interesting, and I love the way the author portrays the thoughts. The way the plot unfolds, is very exhilarating and full of suspense. This is a must read book, it's already one of my favorites. Good story, good plot good stuff.
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