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flythewings
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miraclefuse
I dropped it early on (about 20 chapters in). ML's personality is so blank that I don't really connect with him, and typical Imperial palace-esque shenanigans are happening without much build-up (understandable, but frustratingly lacking any oomph). Basically a little bland. None of the characters have any dimension.
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Scumotaku
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Nocturnal_Dreamer
An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.
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LAjames
The story is unique! The idea is well thought out and original! I like the overall vibe that this story is giving as well. Besides the odd grammar mistake here and there, a great book! I look forward to reading more!
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Readoholic
Loved it! I really am enjoying it so far.
The synopsis alone hooked me into reading the first few chapters! The author is very creative and is really good at wordplay and description.
The characters feel so real. Super excited for more of the story! Thank you author for writing such a great story!
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AnairaG72
Although there are a few grammar errors, i believe the potential this story has a lot more weight. I love the transmigration theme which makes this story really interesting. Is it BL? Is it Hetero? I'm not really sure but I like this feeling of uniqueness and novelty
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uniqueanime2
This is a great story, I felt like I was in the middle of the action. The characters were well-written and the plot was interesting. I highly recommend this book.π
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KilDior
The story line was great. There were some confusion on who said the dialogue but if you will try to understand, you will get who it is. Keep it up!
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MokouFriedChicken
Fascinating.
This is the first Rule 63 story that I'd ever encountered on this site so pardon me for my lack of story critique.
Grammar-wise, there's nothing too egregious beyond some lacking commas or incorrect uses of punctuation. Easy fix. Dialogue-wise, it fits the time period it's in, fairly formal and stiff. Prose also flows naturally, complimenting the dialogue..
Good read. Keep on writingπ
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Candylollipops18
BL wasn't new to me but this story is completely interesting. I have always wanted to read about a man turned into a woman. Because it would be freaking hillarious. But if you're looking for an interesting story you might want to read this one.
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gmy
I don't know how to make this review decent, but I see most authors do this as well. I'll be giving myself a lie of 5 stars while below this are what seems to be my honest view of my novel.
Writing Quality. English is not my native language but I think the writing quality is on average.
Stability of Updates. I am updating the novel thrice a week, fulfilling the seven chapters I wanted to publish weekly. Additionally, my plan is to do a mass release every Monday.
Story Development. I'll be skipping these parts hence the readers should be the ones to make a comment to this.
Character Design & World Background. I am trying to be more descriptive when it comes to these two while I am writing the novel. The world background of the novel was all made up, I am still researching the things to enhance the world that I made here.
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Ibisen
The circumstances of the novel are very fascinating. The writing is really good as well. It's a bit unclear how blind exactly Hyeon-Ju is and sometimes the dialogue is confusing, but not to the point that it bothers me. I will keep reading and I hope the writer keeps it up!
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