Reviews of ___/// by NotUse - Webnovel

First of all, I am a DIE-HARD fan of mystery and thriller. Glad I come across to your novel! The mood of the story kind of reminisces me of the writings of an American author, Edgar Allan Poe whom I personally admire due to his gothic poetries and stories. (The Raven, The Tell-tale Heart, The Black Cat, and whatnot) The writing quality's transparent; Plot's utterly excellent. Point of view's quite interesting and refreshing. Character design's well written. Anyways, I'll just end it here 'cause l probably will proceed to compose a 1,000-word article to praise your work. Haha. Altogether, it's a must-read! Keep it up Author! :)

PLEASE DON'T TELL ME THAT I AM THE ONLY ONE THE THINKS ABOUT DETECTIVE CONAN WHILE READING THIS. Aight, I don't like the timeline but that's because of my taste, not your problem. But there is something about this that will make you continue reading. I'll try to use some the the info I got here on my novel since we're both in mystery genre. Please spoil me in discord.

Woah! Sherlock vibe SWOSH! SWOSH! HAHAHA.I MISS READING INTERESTING AND BREATHTAKING STORY OF DISCOVERY LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🙏

First and foremost, an amazing flow of imagination being focused in the right manner. I will be going by my rating order. Writing quality: The grammar and vocabulary are splendid. There are typos here and there but these are new chapters and the author had already warned that not all chapters were proofread. Therefore, I am not going to lower the score as there is nothing to sanction on this one. I have some suggestions on terminology being used as it can bring the story closer to a detective work. Per se, “crime scene, scene of investigation, scene of death, disposal site, primary and secondary crime scene, perpetrator, corpus delicti, modus operandi, prima facie etc.” Of course, these are criminology/law related terms but you can incorporate them if you want to bring the novel a step further. Also, this is a suggestion and not a critique. My score is nonetheless five out of five. Stability of updating: Given the fact that the story pace is smooth and it does require time to be puzzled together, I believe the stability is high enough for another five stars. I also like that the story does not have abrupt time-skips. I dislike time-skips when done wrong. There are times when you need them but there are times when you can smoothly fade in and out. You do the latter. Your transition is flawless. Bravo! Story Development: The story keeps the reader curious. It also offers enough of details that the reader can sit down and use to play it as a quiz. I like how the plot does offer piece by piece information and does not overwhelm the reader. Investigative works in real life are pretty similar. You get a lead and it turns out it is wrong, or you looked at it wrong. Witnesses lying or giving inaccurate information. It can be a real mess. There are some inconsistencies regarding interrogation parts. I say “inconsistency” because it does not really resemble a real-life interview on some parts. On other parts, it does. I also suggested that the investigator should always withhold some of the evidence as it can be useful only when known by the detective and the culprit. It is the practice in real life as well. That is done consciously and on purpose. Since the author follows relatively realistic approach, and not a parallel world, I give four out of five which can be later corrected depending on how the story unravels and ends. Character Development: I like it even these characters I found annoying lol. They are all unique and follow specific traits. I don’t think I have any suggestion or critique on the characters part. Of course, one can always try to polish further but as they are right now, I give full five stars. World Development: I am a world-builder maniac. I love world building. I believe the story as it is now does not allow much of it since it is crime-focused. The crime itself is the world building but it is still in process and I cannot rate it accurately for now. However, due to the uniqueness of it, I decided to give it five out of five. I would probably suggest to include some background to the history (literal history); that way the reader can realize that it follows actual events. Wars, trades, migration etc. As a conclusion, I enjoyed your story. It will stay in my library. ☝️