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Kido_TO
One of the best 'Xianxia novel where mc is OP and holds great secrets and powers, able to shock the all 33rd heavenly layers." As far as I read, in all 170 chapter(upto where I read) The MC's personality has been as per the synopsis, smart. The story's start had been a bit amusing since the mc started at the age of 16. It was not like those typical information dump novels where the general view on cultivation ranks, MC and the world is already given at start of chapter. I had found it always interesting to read. The writting style of the author is much to my liking. I liked the way he illustrated world building, dialogues, characters' personality, etc. Overall, this novel is made by a top-notch expert of an author. I can still remember a dialogue said by MC in one chapter: "I like troubles as without them life would be boring." I don't know if this dialogue is exactly written like this but it really touched my heart. There are also some other dialogue which touched my heart as well. In the story the mc cultivated a cultivation art which he had been cultivating from the beginning of his 7 lives. The name of the cultivation art was 'Eternal suffering art.' I mean I was shocked by the name and in one of the chapter if I remember well, the mc said that he believed that only with more suffering would a cultivator reach the peak, hence he created this cultivation art. There is also that darkness ring, which holds many unknown secrets and amusing powers. It's said that the weakest of the characters in the ring is very strong. And you know what, the mc is selected to be the holder of the ring, the judge of the darkness or smh like that. With privilege given to him such as immense knowledge, the novel and its mc holds immense potential! Not only this, to make it more interesting there are suspenses at hold. Even I feel that there is a very interesting suspense holding. I like such suspense and here is such suspense. I love OP and here is OP. I love reincarnation novel where mc is a peak expert in previous lives but here is a mc with peak cultivation in all 7 previous lives!! He is also known as the strongest soul in the 33rd heaven. Throughout the history of 10 billion years old, he had hold 7 heavenly titles, all of them are heaven-shocking. Let me tell you one such title where mc is the best alchemist. Rest is for you to explore but let me tell you that it's not my fault that I gave you so much spoiler instead of a genuine review but they are just examples to make my review fit. Moreover you can't blame me since all of this is written in spoiler section. To make it more interesting this story also follows a typical anti hero mc and the funny thing is that this mc had a kindness to remove all hatred from the word at first, which is laughable. In the exam of being selected as the master of chaos blades, he was proven to be the most bloodthirsty man in the history of all holder of chaos blades and I honestly enjoyed that arc. These are my genuine feelings and events which I enjoyed. Moreover mc has lived for 10 billion years, he is starting a new life and beginning from there, who wouldn't like this novel? It's more like a novel which I once read called 'The demon lord's reincarnation.' However my opinion of this novel exceeds that one as its much better and pretty much flawless to me. Thanks for giving me such a wonderful read. Thou I finished all the chapters in the unprivileged stock, I'll be coming back often to check new chapters. I honestly suggest to.read this novel among people who like taste of this kinda novels. Harem is not a problem here either. As you will see that what he does is an action of a old fox, even when selecting and developing relationship with harem. It's not like your usual picking Pokemons in harem. There haven't been any r18 in past 170 chs which shows the skill of author in patience. So it's a favourable read for any person whether he likes harem or not. It's not like he had any women till now. Alice isn't certainly a women till now. Only two women had been chosen and one of them had already become his wife. By 'chosen' I don't mean choosing harem like Pokemons so please give a read and henceforth it's upon you to agree with me or not. I honestly said a lot but I know it's worth it since I have to express my gratitude for giving me such a wonderful novel to read.
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(As of chapter 58) Writing Quality (3) - there are may grammatical errors, wrong spelling and horrible sentence structure. The style of the author does not resonate with thus it always break my immersion with. You need to edit the early chapters author-nim. Story Development (4) - first time seeing a urban cultivation novel that I really like the progression of the story amaze me to this point. It is not slow in my opinion (I like slow novels with steady power ups) and it is not a fast paced story too. The plot and turning points is reasonable in my opinion for it has reasons on why did he do that? What would he get from doing that action? And many more. Character Design (4) - The character of the story at first is emotional but as that sin worm crawled out form his mouth(I think?) he regains his emotion. Its refreshing to see him ge frustrated about something and thinks about something not in a rational way. Update stability (5) - Well I'm just catching up and it has a 300+ chapters and I'm a slow reader because I read the novel in detail so it will be long way to go before I catch up. World building (5) - well the author has great ideas for his world and has introduce us a plenty of superpowers in the world that the MC is residing in. Thought- overall a great story. Had a bad writing but it can be fixed. One of the best urban novels that I read and I hope it will stay the same(the only novel that I read in urban genre is this hihi). The pace of the story is OK for me and the character development for me is a bit sudden but still bearable. And I think that's it. Good job Author a good novel this is(I know it's grammatically wrong).
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Kido_TO
Its one of the best novels I have encountered. This is my second review and the story just keeps getting better with each new chapter. If previous first few chapters were Golden Hidden Bosses then these new chapters that keep piling up the mysteries and fun when reading them are Diamond Hidden Bosses. 1.Story Development so far had been Super interesting And OP. There is heaven after heaven. And it seems that there are people much stronger than Sho Tu residing in the dark ring. Many new characters get introduced amidst this journey of Shi Tu that even 300 chapters ain't enough to properly introduce them all. Story Stability Doesn't much matter at this point as just yesterday I read chapter 303 which is a Treasure trove for people who didn't read this novel yet. I wish I could erase my memory bout this novel and read from beginning chapter. Chapters are released every day to which m really grateful to author. 3. Character Developement: What can I say about this? A billion year old mc developing himself? Find out about it yourself! 4. I think this is a hidden trove hidden at the deepest layer of Earth that even Earth and Heaven are afraid what would happen if it gets leaked outside. This is just that good novel in my eyes. No lies.
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AbysmalYandere
I read until 81 and I quit, this will only hurt my weak heart more. It makes me sad that Alice was killed by the MC, it makes me sad that Alice of everything by a person like the MC. Generally I don't like yuri but now I would have preferred that Alice fell in love with Sun jie and left the MC. Review of a weak heart.
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Lordmoonlight
imma be honest I'm lost I'm trying to understand the first chapters are confusing I'm trying to understand it I've reread it 5 times but I just get from it hes a powerful guy with a mysterious background in this life
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Somone explain to me whats going on. i have read about 26 chapters and i am confused. So he has memories for a billIon years? From the same world? Then he gains even more memories from multiple past lives from other worlds?
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Deezyman_360
I like the way you feel when I say it was the only one I could fly in a detection program that was the water I was in a detection system that I saw
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AllGoodNamesRGone
The story plot so far is actually quite interesting but the gammar and the writing skills of the author is not very good as most of the sentences are run off lines and do not match with the next making it quite hard to read if the author improves on his writing the novel will be way better.
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hajime_sama
Will this is a great novel to read, MC is my type that is ruthless and smart, the plot is good and I like it keep going auteur withe this great work
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Ancient_Egyptian
I feel like there is a lot of fog inside the chapters. I can not understand all the strange stuff and events. It doesn't feel like a mystery but more like a puzzle.
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Rtriste
The first chapter kind of give me a sudden curiousity. The words are simple and easy to understand, I can feel the gluttony in the setting just by reading the description of the greedy character. Will surely continue reading down to the last chapter. Good job, Author.
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ShadowPrincess96
Another legit reincarnation cultivation novel which really caught my attention! I am not a huge fan of cultivation novel, but this book is really good and readers should be hooked to it! I definitely recommend this novel to everyone! Give it a try and you won't be disappointed!
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hajime_sama
A traditional cultivation novel, the mc is born without feelings and considers everyone literally as tools. At first glance, it seems that he is acting with unjustified cruelty and doing some things without meaning, but it becomes clear later that everything is accurately calculated If you like cultivation novels with a strong mc and intricate plot, you'll love this one
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JP_TransLaLa
A solid cultivation novel where the protagonist begins with decent limitations due to Earth's limited energy compared to the other realms. The protagonist is born emotionless, and thus approaches inevitable betrayal with cool, calm, calculating action. You'll like this if you like cultivation stories with unstoppable heroes who value their wits.
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Oemar_danoes
This book is a hidden masterpiece! Although it's not satisfactory for short-readers that don't really. I like sophisticated much but for me, I do like it. If you want to have many readers then try to reduce your point. The characters might need some development since it's lackadaisical but I can handle it. I gave it 5 stars since I do like genres like this. If I were a normal reader then maybe I'll leave a 4-star rating! Anyways go on writing and upgrading. Your grammar, tenses, and vocabulary need to be something that everyone understands, That's for your book to be more engaging!
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n_ziom
the story might seem a little complicated at first and the mc seemed to do stuff out of nowhere, but things become very clear later on I really liked the plot twists,at the end good story and would recommend it.
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MikruZero
This book is a hidden gem! Although it's not suitable for ******* readers that don't really.like complicated novels that much but for me, I really do like it. If you want to have many readers then try to simplify your point. The characters might lack some development since its slow but I can handle it. I gave it a 5 star since I really do like genres like this. If I were a normal reader then maybe I'll leave a 4 to 3-star rating! Anyways continue writing and improving. Your grammars, tenses, and vocabulary that needed proofread for your book to be more appealing!
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nixrsr
this story is so goood! the author surely did a lot of work on this. im so hooked up with this story! i never thoight that i will like this kind of book. good job author!
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Aryna_Stan
It starts off in a way you know it'll be complex but it's a really good book, it's obvious that the Author put in a lot of work in it. Not to put out any spoilers I'll advice you to try a couple chapters and trust me when I say you'll be hooked.
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xiao_meng
Interesting beginning, the hero seems to be the type to do anything although his actions at first seem meaningless, finally I find the topic of the worm strange, but overall I find this a good book that I enjoy.
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