Chapter comments on the chapter Dead End of the book Secrets of How the World Changed

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RachelRuth
Thank you for the chapter! This works with or without the prologue on chapter 0 and despite the cliche end of Liu Kai via truck-kun, this chapter delves into an interesting start. He wakes up in an unfamiliar place (to him) all by himself and so he explores, ending at a good point to where, I, the reader want to check out the next part!
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I wish I was as good as you kuya Noc, this is really good T^T
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Quite interesting start 😊
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First chapter in. already a great start. [img=recommend]
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