Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter 1 - The Summoning of the book Conqueror

what happened to his wishes

This first chapter felt distant and progressed too fast. I would suggest rewriting

Mmm🤨

amazing pls like my comment

well.. he didn't even ask which kinda God it was.. also.. did truck-kun get a vacation?

At first glance at the cover it looks like a viking helmet

I dOnt know but this hapPened so Quick i think ah i dont know its Not bad but it just a lil rushed and so like in ur face

Inconsistent at the very start not to mention the bizarre naming sense. Ziegland reysh... what? Cringe. Dont forget his wish too.

dunno why a kingdom, his backstory doesnt say anything of that sort

nice

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

WOAH there, slow down

gross, kingdom building

woohh...there is something great to happen ahead of him ....👏👏👏👏👏👏

I wish I could reset my life

Yo

Black figure reminds me of Black Zetsu and Indra meeting from Naruto Shippuden

Thanks

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A different variation of truck-kun.