The cover of the book is beautiful. It is good to see a strong female protagonist who works her way through a world marred by deceit and trickery. I have read only the initial chapters but I would be interested to see how Allyria shapes her future.
I am in love with your plot author. Hate-love story wowww. Your writing is so geat. The characters, chapters I loved it....The title cover is eally great. This story gonna be a mass hit in future. Keep updating. More power toyou
I love the name, the title is great really can capture wanted readers with this. And Allyria, I hope she meets her goals. The chapter was really scary and dark as I vision it. I felt her emotions while reading this. Kee up the good work author!
This story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! With skills and talent accompanied by hardwork, this will fare well in the future! Good luck in the future and may your novel be blessed someday! BTW, I am from review swap! Good luck reviewing!
Historical fantasy really attracts my attention and this book really does that. It has great pacing to it's paragraphs and also to the overall narrative. The dialogue is great at showing characters like the main character Allyria. My only problem is it can be so much better if it goes into description much more of the situation and lets it slow down more. But this is great right now.
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Interesting story line, well tailored characters, finely spiced up with drama, mystery, romance, humour, action, adventure and historical inputted concept! I personally like the mc who is so strong.
good work author!
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Words are lost on me.... So captivating... This story is taking me on a journey of medieval travels...
By the way, i hope the misunderstanding between the Princess and the rest of the kingdom becomes resolved.
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I loved the story a lot. It's very exciting, filled with adventure. You'd never want to put it down. If anyone reads this review, what are you waiting for? Stop hesitating and click on the read button!
This book is such an exhilarating read! The concept is fresh and interesting that once you pick it up you wouldn't want to stop reading . Its written in such great detail that you can picture every scene vividly and the thoughts and emotions of the characters really come through. The author really knows how to portray compelling characters that make you want to root for them.
This is one of the few book that does pov changes really well. Its not jumbled together, neither does it dump a whole lot of info on you in the first few chapters. Rather it's written in such a way that gradually eases you in to the plot. I love the ongoing political theme and its intricacies. Altogether this book is well written. I don't think I saw any major spelling mistake or misplaced word which is pretty amazing.
Well done author. Keep writing!
Simplistic and refined, not a lot of use for big words but this story doesn’t need it. It’s beautiful in its own right and cannot express how detailed the scenarios are.
Story is great and has a good pacing, at the start it doesn’t dump a lot of information to get the reader started—but instead captures you slowly by how intricately woven the it is.
Would love to keep reading, as I am a fan of fantasy myself but I’m nowhere near this author in terms of writing. Please don’t forget to honestly review mine author.
I recommend this story to everyone especially those in need of a great adventure. This story has a lot in store just for you. Good work for the author.
This book is very exhilarating. The descriptions of the scenes and characters superb. I love the tight-knit bond of the main character and her siblings, you really did a great job there. Also, you are very good at building words. Keep it up.
A fascinating read that is compelling and gripping. The author cleverly weaved a complex story of the disparity between commoners and nobles, and the complex intricacies of the latter's politics dashed with a fine drizzle of mystery and conspiracy. Topped altogether, this made a fine story, however it does occasionally lose the rhythm when it switches from one character's perspective to another; unfortunately, it doesn't seem to flow well.
However, the characters are well done and believable. What got me was how there were no good guys or bad guys; each side have done wrong with the royalty limiting the commoners, while the latter commit acts of terrorism ignorant or, worse, unapologetic of who gets caught in the crossfire. The middling gray line is always a good story aspect, and it was delivered brilliantly in this story (though a do find myself somewhat confused with the story every now and then. Like, for instance, what exactly is a Voloki? Or a Ikigai for that matter? Was it ever explained? Are they important? Why introduce them if we don't know what they are and if they're never explained?).
Other than that, the story is well done and intriguing. In fact, I read all the available chapters before reviewing, signifying just how hooked I was.
Have only read up to the tenth chapter but I can already tell that there's a lot of interesting twists ahead of there. A fascinating world-building and captivating descriptive. The characters are well-written and so is the plotline. A good work overall.
Exquisite storyline. The story really comes alive in this fantasy world that it makes you sometimes wonder if this is a real story about peasants and lords in the history books that we all study in school.
Definitely love how you word the story though ! Conveying words is such a great skill, whether in writing or real life
Kudos to you author for writing a pure gem !
Very well then i just read a few chapters and i got to say my hat is off to you, this really is a hidden gem loved everything about the story and characters, i will keep reading it as it is incredable and if you happen to go through the reviews and see my review i just have to say "what the hell are you doing just read it already!"
Ok, read the first few chapters and I'm all filled with these questions bout the MC and it's making me so curious that I gotta read what happens next! I also love how you write. The words mesmerize you.
This story is absolutely amazing! A ravishing gem amongst others. I love fantasy and this book is something I definitely would read over and over again without getting bored.
Story is well-paced and the characters are lovable. Author's english is superb and this gives a smooth and enjoyable experience when reading. Also, the author's skill at giving descriptions is excellent. Greatly interested to see where the story goes.
Definitely a must read! 💯 What are u still doing reading this review? Go read once. More updatess author. 👍 ✌️
This story was so well written, the protagonist is a relatable person many ways despite being a princess and you can’t help, but feel bad for her and her struggles. Every page I do read so far makes me want to read more, and the writing is impeccable. Will definitely stick around to see how this one unfolds!