You write really well. I have read a few chapters, I couldn't stop reading. The plot is intriguing. I chose to read this book because of its synopsis. It's added to my library and I'll continue reading this book in my free time. Great job. All the best!
So good!
The fantasy elements blend perfectly with reality. The novel has the power to engage you and connect with the characters. A very bewildering story. Pretty easy to read yet the quality is super-mega remarkable. Our Mc is becoming one of my favs [Although, Nikolai is very interesting xd (Wink, Wink)]
Is nothing much to say when the novel is phenomenal!
I must say this is a decent fantasy-romance novel with elements of history and seems like a big world stage which I enjoyed, the author really did a good job in making a word and a piece of romance under his hands, added to collection, keep it up!
Wonderful cover. Concept is interesting. The way the story is written is nice and can keep the readers hooked up. There is not much for me to say but I have high expectations from such a good book. Can't wait to read this more, please don't drop it.
A well-written story with a great plot.
The story is very interesting and suspenseful. The world-building and the story progression are we paced and engaging. The characters are written well.
Although I felt that Allyria accepted her faith too easily.
All in all, a well-written story and enjoyable read!
The novel is written well and I love the writing quality of the author. The narration was great and the way the author conveys the emotions of every character is just astounding. Word choice is great too, and this is something I must compliment the author about. Aside from this, the whole plot is interesting. It is well done. Keep up the good work and I wish the author the very best!
Your writing quality is 5/5 for me as well as your world-building. I could really feel myself living in the old days with a fictional setting. Also, the genre is actually not my cup of tea but I enjoyed it so far.
I really love the plot of the story because it is so unique and underrated, I hope your story will be famous and I will support you sis. Love you sis, good job and good bye! Supportive sister here HHAHHAHAAHHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHA
The story was exciting since the very beginning. There were a lot of mystery that I'm actually curious about. I'm waiting for the revelation about the royals. I hope it gets better by time. So far, it was very exciting, full packed with adventure. I liked it. Good job!
I really liked the way author describes the background. It really made me feel as I'm living in the historical time! Keep writing. Would like to recommend it to other also!❤
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Thank you for taking the time to read my book. If you ever enjoyed it, please do click on that vote button or leave a comment, I would love to read your thoughts about the story. If you have any recommendations, do not be shy to comment as well. It would help me improve my writing and also the outcome of the story.
I will forever appreciate the time and support you've allotted to my work. I hope you'll stay with me until the end.
This is well written.
Among the sea of mediocrity, your writing is one of the few that displays flashes of brilliance, perhaps it can develop into something more given enough time. It reads like something that I can actually buy in a bookstore, and that's saying something, no? Might want to refrain on making the first few words of every chapter capitalized, however. Maybe do it on every start of an arc and nothing more? Your call.
Keep on writing 👍
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