Reviews of He/Heroine and My Villainess by YIANUWANGXIAO - Webnovel

hey author-san are you alive? What a delay for the next chapter. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Terrible grammar. I don't think the author knows what past, present and future is. From the first chapter, first paragraphs there are already 2 instances of this. "Yerre utter fidgety." "Alda loud demand". It's just terrible, my first language is not english, but i think it should have been "Yerre uttered while fidgeting" and "Alda loudly demanded" Which sounds 999x better. Unreadable tbh. and thats from the first 2-3 paragraphs.

A very nice story with a solid plot. It has enough intrigue to pull you in from just reading the synopsis. There are little to no grammatical errors making this a very easy read. Amazing work author! [img=recommend]

I'm sad author. I wrote a review yesterday with all my heart and either it got bugged or you deleted it accidentally (I hope former). I don't have it in me to write it again but as thanks for reading your story all this time I'm leaving this 5 star rating again. Please let this be saved.

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Finally here's my review! Well although I only read until chapter 52 I will continue to read soon : ) The only reason this ain't getting a five star review is because of the writing quality and the world background that sometimes is unclear. That's all I have of complains but the rest is pretty good. Vendia x Mary

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Wow! This story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! The author has talent, skills, and a hard worker. This will fare well in the future! Kudos and Congrats! May your novel prosper in the future! ......from review swap.

The story is paced very well and the concept is very fresh and fun. The grammar needs a bit of improvement but I can't hate on that. So overall I'd give it a five. Can't wait for more chapters.

It is pretty good and it exudes a Yuri vibe to me as I read, not much too say since I'm used to reading similar writings but this novel is the first I've read with a vibe shouting Yuri at me, making me seemingly fanboy at it, good job author, the rate I gave is 4.8 the 0.2 is because I saw some words in their wrong forms but those won't ruin the novel and won't even be noticed by many unless they're spelling and grammar Nazis.

it is honestly bad. I didn't finish it but, its too fast, and confusing, it doesn't fully explain everything, and Alfa's character is in my opinion shit. all she does is complain. it's boring as ****. good idea but bad execution.

Have only read up to ch 13 but have already gotten the general gist of everything I need to know and tbh I don't think the characters are that great.... The Villainess is fine I actually like her character and all the anxietys they have.... Though they're a bit of an idiot.... The Heroine on the other hand is an insufferable asshole who on there first major scene basically attempts to rape two noble girls and from what I can tell we're supposed to find that funny.... What Makes it even more annoying is they nonstop complain and treat everyone like trash and their whole excuse for all of there behaviours is that they suffer from slight anger issues and is a lesbian.... Sure I read some ****ed up novels but the way this made itself out to be a normal-ish reincarnation romance with a best friends to partners theme and then does something like that really confuses me and pushes me away from reading anymore... Wtf is this trying to be.... tbh i hope the villainess cuts ties with the rapey heroine and it goes a different route with her starting to crush on someone else.... This parallel between the villainess gentle and fragile personality and the heroines rapey and unstable personality is probably on purpose to be ironic but still it's already becoming less of a romance and more of a smut with a tragedy tag...

There are some minor writing and grammar issues, but the story is very interesting and the setting and concept is unique. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes.

Grammar. pretty much said before. gotta work on that. I can tell you're a new writer, but grammar needs a lot of work. Minor mistakes are ok, but there are too many.

I have to say I did quite enjoy the plot of th first few chapters and the tone as well as pacing is really well done overall it is a really well written book keep it up author

I really enjoyed reading this novel! The characters and development of the story are both well written. There are some grammar and other things you need to fix, but otherwise, I loved reading it! I hope you can update soon author ☺️☺️☺️

I like the unique plot of two important characters being thrown into the world. The main character is quite entertaining to read, as their brutal honesty is pretty refreshing. Keep up the good work

Beautiful, very classy cover page! An interesting story (crazy mixture ;))! The plot is addictive, the characters are expressive. Everything is in place. You're doing a great job! I wish you constant inspiration and interesting ideas!

Great comedy on classic isekai story. Interesting how the two main character become their opposites in terms of personality. Some minor grammar mistakes but not too noticeable.

so far this newly written story is going nicely in a good pace...n yes nicely written, good description of chapters,good narration highly recommend

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Wow this is amazing. This book is not a fast pace, which i like the most. I love how u created the plot. Reading this book reminds me of Trash of Family count and omniscient point of view. They also transmigrated into novel. Keep it up.

Author, do you know the anime Fushigi Yuugi? It somehow has similarity to it. I think you are doing well so far. Characters are relatable and plot is quite interesting. I would suggest to proofread and do some line editting. Keep on writing and I wish you all the best. 🤗👍

Hey, great story so far. I enjoyed the story. I highly recommend this story. It grips my attention. Author keep up the good work, I love the descriptions.

Interesting premise, reminds me of a korean show called W, sort of similar to that. I like your emotional intricacies and wish you the best on your book author. Though there can be some improvements on your grammatical and punctuation errors. Otherwise, nice job!

Very well, this was quite the good read! Honestly, I was sucked in from the first chapter alone and that is always a plus, and before I knew it I was already at the latest chapter. The world , the setting and the characters are all really good, and as for the writting, its pretty good, no mistakes that I took notice off (perhaps because I was having to much fun to notice them) All in all this was a good read and I will be back for more!