Reviews of New plan by Donitol - Webnovel

I love this novel ,it has a very nice story background and I also enjoyed the characters . I also enjoyed how the story is funny ,well keep it up author

The concept is great and i would definitely recommend this to all the readers out there. Keep up the good work author!!!

lovely book here. really had a lot of fun with such welly developed characters. good job making the story easy to follow and generally intriguing!

I'm speechless. I don't think I can do justice to your work by reviewing it but I'll give it a try. You can get published. You're that good. I would buy your book and love to have it!!! Easy English? ✔️ Original Content? ✔️ Mystery? ✔️ Romance? ✔️ Your novel holds the attention of the readers from the start. I love it so much. I'll surely read everytime you update. It's added to my library. I'll even vote from time to time. All the best!

To be honest i too want Magi-phone.... this novel has completely new concept.. Loving it so far. Very well written and stable updates. Keep up the good work...

The novel is really unique! Imagine the demon king having an app, haha the laughter I got! It's so good, gotta add this to my recommendations list💕

Nice story... Cool idea and story plot. Recommended to read and looking forward for more chapters ❤️❤️ please keep on writing Author-san 😊😍

It is a great novel about system that makes himself like a king of demons. The author has a fluent use of language and has a great story plot. Furthermore it is continuously updated regularly, added to my collection!

Nice story! The plot is very unique as i have never read anything like this before! It is a very well thought story. Keep going author! Best of luck.

Interesting. The concept is fairly novel, and it's clear that the author has a plan for the story. There's some grammatical hiccups here and there, but it doesn't take away from the story. Overall, a good read. Would recommend. Keep on writing👍

Cool concept! Using phones for magic is something I haven't seen before! Keep it up! There's some grammatical and pacing issues throughout the portion of the story that I read though. There were some issues with tenses in the prologue. And the fact that you switch between first and third person does not flow very well, even if you add the separators between when you switch them up. Overall, just keep experimenting and developing this concept. Your writing will grow as you grow and it will grow faster as you write. Keep it up! I'm excited to see what you can do in the future!

Well done! The story is written clearly and with a lot of descriptions and detailed writing, making it an immersive experience. The plot of the story is very interesting and the prologue help as a suspense builder, making me want to read more of the story. The concept is great, the characters are dynamic, and the grammar is good. It is a great read, Well done!

The world-building is well done and seems like it was well thought out. So far, it's been really interesting! I'd love to see more chapters! :) The only thing I noted is that present tense and past tense seem to be used at the same time, but other than that, it's great!