Shameless author here! Hence 5 stars!
So this is the reboot version of Rebellious Path: Against the Law, and I rebooted it due to the reason, "It's too Fucking messy"
I hope you enjoy! And please do leave a review! I would much appreciate it!
Characters background are well thought out, but Mcs life experience doesn't match with his current cheerful personality... I mean sure, he got rid of his abusive father and lives happily with his Sisters/Lovers and Mother/soon-to-be-lover, also his Master and fellow female disciples, But Pessimism was his core personality which changed so quickly and he acts too childish and immature for his age.
And it irked me how quickly his 'Brotherly love' changed to 'Romantic love'. Sure his Sisters had a crush on him since before but he saw them as his beloved 'Sister' for his whole life, I don't see him being all lovey-dovey with them unless it's something to do with him being 'Demon' or whatnot....
And he sure is a disgrace to cultured men, doing nothing and burning money of his 'Suger Mommy'. At least try to start your own business? How long are you gonna rely on a woman for money? He really needs to grow up as a man and not think with his D like some 'Young Master'.
Overall it's a good story and keep writing!
the writing quality is great, and I like it very much. Your first-person point out of view is amazing, and I enjoy it very much.
the development so far is quite nice for me, as I like a fast harem, but this is not too fast not too slow.
the other characters are well thought out like what the other guy said here, and that's great for me, but the MC's attitude changed from revenge thirsty to being a happy guy is quite fast, no? but then, any man would feel happy if they ****ed a woman and the woman loves them back.
The stability of updating is quite... random, but now you have fixed that! and I'm okay no matter what, thank you fort he chaps as always.
the background of the world is not so clear, but now it seems that it's the background on the universe, since there are other worlds. I'm hooked and excited, can't wait for more!
Hoot! One of the best fucking series. I only want to do a review now cuz it seems that the author is slowing hsi updates down. I'm fine with it even if it takes a whole decade to finish because this novel is great.
This novel deserves more love than it is having right now. It's very good despite being filled with inconsistencies. There might be rushed relationships, but it a very interesting read. And the author probably planned it to be just wish fulfillment, lol. Anyway, back to the topic, things have got way more interesting in the second volume and the plot is diving deeper and deeper upon it, so for the plot readers, don't drop because there is plot.
Just a support from a reader. Hope you continue writing this good stuff. Don't mind the mean reviews cause if they write something, I'm sure it would be worse than I can even imagine it to be. Just mind the criticism and improve your novel to the best of your ability.
One of the best novels I've ever read on this site. Gladly recommended. The relationship might be quite rushed, but it's acceptable unlike the others. And by others, I meant gacha novels, just plain lazy writing sigh
Its just not the kind of story I like with the way of how they do the R-18 part because there is no deeper story to it and also I dropped this after other reason and some may like it but I don't and I don't what to put spoiler because people might look anyway
Literally worst novel I've read, writing quality is garbage and so is the plot and everything about this novel. Also things that happen in the novel are just stupid, way to stupid even for a R18 novel.
Excellent Mc who is op but not in an unbelievable way who can literally defeat anyone, nice and surprisingly unique world building and plot, very very Infinite good harem, different individual character traits and background, nice and readable sentences and grammar, awesome story development. Overall 6++++/5.
Please keep releasing more chapters and please do not drop it.
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So it was you. Read this novel on different site and was thinking that it feels like something that I already read. And that's actually from guy who write zombie exodus. BTW, rating is so low because of this weird start. Even his milk was chocolate, eh at least his girls side of family was milky enough....
Great Novel and I ain't gonna lie. I love it, 100 percent and I can't wait to read more. I love the sometimes mysterious and serious and funny scenes and the greatest s*x scene of he author appeared her (A little spoiler, it's chapter 10)
This novel really deserves love. Love the writing style and the add-ons and despite some typos, and some grammar mistakes, still a pretty good read, for the new readers, I recommend you to give it a try