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HappyReading
Hi! I've read your story and really liked it! But it is sad for me not to find any of your social medias to talk with you. As a reader, i hopw i can talk with you about the book. The plots, characters and settings all bring me such a fantastic reading experience. I can understand you are busy with your novel. But i hope we can have a chance to communicate with each other.
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micahdarock
Re: New Worl is a sci-fantasy book that I was literally LOOKING for. I love the conflicts between science and magic, and the world building is stependous (I dont know if thats a word so if not, AMAZING)! The world building needed for all the technology is a lot of work; I know as I am trying to make my own book like this. I highly recommend any and all of you read this book!
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RaedaX_1
This story is one of the better sci-fi adventure flicks to a new planet. it has original concept and ideas, the grammar is a little choppy, but if you can look past that, you'll find that it's fantastic read.
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Roji_Nemuro
Hello there.
Writing quality needs a bit more work especially on details ^^.
I hope you keep updating.
The story development is quite good if i do say so. So... when's the nuke coming? XD
Characters need more description and depth. :) Work hard!!
I love the world. Reminds me so much of Gate Jietai. Color it more and put more emphasis on its beauty.
Overall. I love it. Keep growing mah friend.
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DaoistDcSh9C
Your story has a big platform. It can grow /expand in seemingly interesting way - in short world building. The settings is good too. I like it
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User2487465
Review Re-write. Because it is terrible. This Novel is nice. Really. I don't really give the f**k about the errors though. As long as I understand the chapters.
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iLose
I like the concept that combines the advanced setting and medieval setting, I also love the way you describe the fight scenes (chapter 11) I just want maybe a good improvement in the culture of the Empire and Religion and their magic system. Then get little slower in pacing. Additional, try describing the characters one or twice per chapter. For readers to remember more, also their motivation. I'm looking forward to the exiled prince, his story. Since there are demi-humanoids in the empire, maybe you should also explore the discrimination on their part. The description is good especially for weapons, the pacing is really pretty fast.
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SailorSnow
Grammars can use some improvements. Overall good world building and interesting use of Science Fiction. Very much appreciated trying of English.
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DaoistDcSh9C
The story seems similar to the anime Gate, but the difference is that they were from a far away planet. The grammar is somewhat confusing sometimes. The story js interesting but you need to slow down a little, the story seem to be progressing too fast. Add something like description or character innrr monolouge or something use to fill the chapter.
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KenRingdomStory
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Flanda
This is actually a really great novel, the premise is actually interesting and not just copy and paste. Also the author actually has good grammar and overall the writing is good.
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Morikubo
First, the world you set up was good as far as the technicalities involved. Second, the different POV's from invaders/colonizers adds a unique depth to the plot of the story. Lastly, including politics can be a little bit tricky but depending on how you handle it, it'll add a lot more to the story itself.
Grammar, pacing, characters are the downsides for me although it can be easily fixed later down the road. Also try fleshing out the structures of the empire.
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SnowPenguin
I love the back and forth structure of the work and all the tiny, but really important details like the specific references to weapons and atmosphere compositions. This is also really clever in blensing fantasy and sci-fi, and sticks to the whole millotery and exploration structures.
Grammar could use some work, though.
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