Reviews of Harry Potter: The Immortal Lycan by LegendaryChaos - Webnovel

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love it.................................

Good read. I wasn’t disappointed. Average development

great story I love reading it. I just want to ask what is The death angel John's full name just out of curiosity.

first uou nice job autor-san second, the story itself has some plot holes, but for what the author set out to do, I can say that he ended up reaching even more.plot: 8/10 Harem: 8/10I recommend reading

Good job with the story.

it was nice and well done hope he makes a second one

An excellent AU story! Not quite what I thought, for how was he given potions if Hogwarts (Dumbledore/elves) were not giving them to him. I loved the premise of the soulbonds and death(Reaper) with time travel.

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Excellent story, I like this harry potter, I hope that in the future you can write more about this story. ..........................................................................................................................................

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The story wasn't long but also wasn't short but overall great fanfiction with the Weasley being not evil but manipulative also great job portraying albus being kind but scheming but has purpose like in the film and nice ending

10/10 The story seems a little bit rushed at the end, give or take, but I'm not here to nitpick. Even though rushed, the ending was still fine. I finished it all within a span of 5-6 hours and it was pretty great. Definitely recommend this fanfic.

Wow! All those exaggerated powers from senses and strength to wandless magic but had difficulty fighting a stupid muggle and dies from a gunshot from a woman he would've smelled a mile away. What happened to the senses?? What happened to the strength?? Unless you want me to believe that a muggle fist can actually damage a body that can withstand supernatural speed?? Or you're stupid enough not to know Newton's 3rd law of motion??

Great story. The sentence structure is a bit screwed up, but it was still readable. The story line, character development, and plot were good if a little rushed at times. I feel like there was a lot left to be explained, but over all it was a good read,just wish it was a bit longer.

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A good story that makes it hard to stop when you start. There where a few spots that i felt could be expanded on such as the world outside of england you could have included others series such as supernatural or the originals. This is just to give a few ideas if you fell like expanding on the story or making a second of it.

Weird, i thought i had wrote a review long ago. Excellent Plot. Yes, Indeed, Excellent Plot.Excellent Plot. Yes, Indeed, Excellent Plot.Excellent Plot. Yes, Indeed, Excellent Plot.Excellent Plot. Yes, Indeed, Excellent Plot.

i thought i was reading a lycan harry potter not some horny useless incubus who only knows how to breed like rabbit, beside there's no tag that there's an incubus in here or i will not bother reading this

Hello there, LEGENDARYCHAOS . I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that you continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works to create this great novel and I hope you don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.

I originally liked the story but the further in the story you get the more random nonsense OP powers he gets and i woulDnt mind it if it If the reasons it happens Are so ridiculous

It's not a bad story, it has an interesting approach on some themes, and interaction between characters, the encounter of great problems is that the author over time started to make a common mistake among some authors, they take one of the elements of the story, and use it exaggeratedly. In the case of this story it is ***, one thing is that it is in the story, another thing is that it appears in practically all chapters and even in an unnecessary way, so much so that if you remove the scenes that appear it would not add or remove anything from the story in general . I can only hope that the author controls this impetus more in that part and knows how to balance everything that makes up his work, in order to avoid disharmony.

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What can i say... a lewd Harry Potter fanfic. I am liking this Dumbledore and the future prospect of the harem hehe, especially with wingman Dumbles. I am also enjoying the way the Weasley family is portrait because i never really liked Ron and i hope Hermione doesn’t end up in the harem, she is annoying.

Im loving the story so far!! i always thought Ron and Giny were a little off. i really hope you keep updateing, i cant wait to see where this gos.

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it's a great read definitely recommend it it's got everything you could want only bad thing is there's not more.............................

Está muy interesante, me ha gustado mucho sigue subiendo capítulos. Espero los próximos capítulos. ...............................................................