tldr, great story, definitely worth the read, pace felt a bit rushed. wonderful story. 9/10. loved the implementation of toriko abilities/characters. great harem with character development. only criticism is that the pace was very fast for the whole fic and it would have been nice to see some more slice of life/slower, more detailed development chapters instead of so many timeskips. Also would have been nice to see more relationship development as most of it is mentioned in retrospect rather than dates or missions where characters overcome hardships and grow closer, etc.
I really like this book but I'm only giving a review now cuz I saw it in one of the recommended sections of one of my books cuz I lost a lot of my books cuz my app didn't save my books in my library and a lot of them disappeared but I had already been finished this book so it's been a while so I can't really point out what happened in it because I only remember some of it well not some I remember a lot but at the same time I don't remember details only some details I'm reading way too many books at the same time even if they're in the same world or genre like right now I'm currently reading like 30 different books and I'm still looking to add more like my read list has no correction my library is the 3,000 books limit I have three different read lists and two of them are over are at the 500 limit
I really hope that author-sensei completes this. I loved the crocodile in MHA fanfiction and this is up there with it. The plot is well developed and its different coz the mc isn't best friends with naruto like all the other naruto fanfics.
This needs an update, too good to be dropped.
Well written and funny.
Although the story starts to progress too fast and the relationships with the women in the harem could have been explored and developed more, felt too rushed sometimes, the story overall is great, funny and with well explained concepts and abilities.
continue writing, please finish this novel at least... with at least 200 chapters or more this is a very good fanfic i liked
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Serie recomendada si buscas algo "alternativo"
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Well its a good story. .. The bloodline are op if he eat the 10 tail. ...Please update more chapter[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
didn't read past chapter 2, mc is reincarnated with torikios powers, but no muscles, no murda murda murdas nerfed the gormet ability, I stoped at chapter 2 because this seems to be another generic fantasy fulfillment mc who wrecks the cannon has no character development and ends up in a bunch of situations that make no sense due to "plot"
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5 star review to boost rating. Its my idea, not author. Blame me!
5 star review to boost rating. Its my idea, not author. Blame me!
5 star review to boost rating. Its my idea, not author. Blame me!
5 star review to boost rating. Its my idea, not author. Blame me!
5 star review to boost rating. Its my idea, not author. Blame me!
5 star review to boost rating. Its my idea, not author. Blame me!
5 star review to boost rating. Its my idea, not author. Blame me!
5 star review to boost rating. Its my idea, not author. Blame me!
5 star review to boost rating. Its my idea, not author. Blame me!
5 star review to boost rating. Its my idea, not author. Blame me!
5 star review to boost rating. Its my idea, not author. Blame me!
5 star review to boost rating. Its my idea, not author. Blame me!
5 star review to boost rating. Its my idea, not author. Blame me!
5 star review to boost rating. Its my idea, not author. Blame me!
5 star review to boost rating. Its my idea, not author. Blame me!
5 star review to boost rating. Its my idea, not author. Blame me!
5 star review to boost rating. Its my idea, not author. Blame me!
The characters ruin the story as well as the alteration of the world background of naruto.
To be honest I felt like the author defiled Toriko with this story.
Not gonna explain anymore than this. Just read it and judge for yourself.
This story has been fantastic. Yes, there sre some things that are kinda dumb or whatever but thats every book/fanfic. Story blends a reincarnated mc with Toriko looks/abilities and its been great, if you hate harems with an absolute passion then dont read this but if you like harems then this is for you. Personally i hate harems but if it is written well or there is an actual reason for having multiple women then i have Zero problem with it.... Because of his toriko abilities and gettibg stronger by eating the mc and his sister(Kurenai) end up becoming a clan of their own because of their “bloodline” and their new jutsus so he has a reason to have multiple women like how sauske or naruto if they were in that Clan Restoration act then they would have a few more wives.... its just that the mc was placed in it earlier and isnt an emo like sauske.
cant be bothered to write a review but it was pretty good. personally i want more interactions with characters rather than just describing the events that are occurring, still entertaining tho.
i really like how smith-sensei convert gourmet cell to improve our mc chakra and physical to eating. now i'm looking for the future when our mc have a taste of eight tail beasts
Really good story so far I like how the character is progressing and the abilities he’s gaining along with the with development in his personality and relationships. Like the changes to the story too that differentiates it from canon a little for the better and the playful style of writing that you get from a character like Torino that’s wild and likes to hunt big game to eat.
I finally finished binge reading the entire story, and while a couple of my past comments might seem to speak negatively, i feel that as the story progressed, it started to get better and make more sense. It is nice that the MC isn't the only one improving, but others as well, however it seems that the MC only REALLY improves after eating. The 'power ups' so to speak make sense because he possesses Gourmet Cells, but with how much training he does, i feel he should already be more skilled and powerful, but that's just me. Still a good story regardless.
Lots of good ideas but it's not that well executed. Toriko just acheives all kinds of different techniques without any effort or challange in the story. It makes the whole grab-bag of powers he gets pretty bland.
Referencing things is good, but if the story included the application of the powers he trains up in a dangerous situation, or hitting a bottle-neck in training and the problem solving needed to resolve it, the story would be a lot more compelling.
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