Good writing, adequate character design and everything else simply fits together. The only problem is the updating stability. It this dropped already?.
Good writing. A plot which I would have used if I made a novel and a character which has control freak issues as MC. I am in. My only regret is that this has a very slow update rate.
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The story, in general, is not bad. Cruel and ambitious MC, a fine plot, and good character design. The problem is if the readers don't have additional information about the story, like in a fan-fiction, it gets less interesting, making it inferior to other works of the author.
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Honestly this novel is way too underrated, it should be ranked first in the ranking despite there only be 18 chapters(you should put more focus on this one), and i love this mc even more than yami, also i love how all you mcs are actually cool even in their last life(i hate it when authors make mcs with pathetic backstory when they can make cool backstory and give the story so much more potential).
Favorite author by the way, keep up the good work.
sooooooooo....is the mc like yami and gaw and the other one?
if yes then i will read it from my heart ...if not then i will read it anyway because i love your stories ππ
This may be the only story on webnovel.com other than sm and lotm that I truly enjoyed. Heβs controlling, logical, and realistic and that makes me even more invested in the story. Thank you Author and have a good day.
One of the few video game reincarnation storiea where the mc is a real mage abd not a close combat mage. The mc is smart and is willing to do almost anything to gaing more power. The other characters arenβt dumb and you donβt see the typical young master antagonist in this story. I highly recommend it.
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Since this book is from Holyjoker. I will give it a 5 stars because the other of his work that I have read. Like Naruto: dream to immortality was good. I am sure he would have improved more on this work. So read and enjoy guys. I'm sure his dark theme style of writing will not disappoint those of your villaneous heart.
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This episode was, of course, a key turning point in the narrative of the Crusader Dad canon. While up until this point the series had been mainly a slice-of-life drama involving the father struggling to turn his son to a righteous path of study, combat training, and the true faith, here we see the very real consequences of the conflict that has always been stewing in the background. The conflict the father was always preparing his son for - the day the weebs take the holy land. We finally learn that the father is not disgusted by his son's tendencies toward anime due to simple personal preference, but because affiliation with Japanese animation is a key characteristic of his mortal enemy. Knowing this, his extreme acts of aggression to discourage these tendencies can almost be understood.
However, the Father himself seems to recognize the fact that his repression of his son's tendencies may have done more harm than good. Notice at 0:12 how the son's initial hesitation about taking up his father's sword are not for the seemingly obvious reasons: that his combat skills are considerably worse than his father's, or even that he agrees with the weebs due to his own love of anime and "related media". No - his stated reason is "I'm a heretic", implying that the only reason he should not fight is because he is unworthy. This fact has been internalized within him over an unknown length of time as a result of his father's lectures and punishments.
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And then the father says three simple words - "It doesn't matter." These three words are the antithesis of all his teachings up to this point - that even a heretic can be worthy if his heart is pure. And the father knows that his son's heart is pure, despite his heresy, despite his consumption of anime, despite his lack of diligence in study and his lack of talent with blade and firearm alike. The son's further hesitation at 0:19 seems, on the surface, to be a moment where he is considering refusing his father out of cowardice, lack of belief in the cause of the Crusaders, or as revenge for how harshly his father has treated him in the past. But the truth is that he is still doubting himself, despite his father's words. The father understands this, and his final nod before collapsing is meant to break the last barrier in the son's mind, a barrier that the father no doubt sees himself as being responsible for building up - a lack of self-worth brought about by a vicious cycle of disappointing his role model. By nodding, the father is silently admitting that his son's heretical beliefs and degenerate actions are simply a part of who he is - and they do not make him any worse of a man, or of a son. Though the nod says nothing directly, it says many things implicitly:
"Despite our differences, you are still my son and I know you can do this."
"Believe in yourself, as I believe in you."
And with that barrier broken, the son can confidently pick up the sword - a European sword, mind, not the katana he had previously been seen wielding and is doubtless more comfortable with, turn off his anime, and like he has done so many times before, scream at the top of his lungs. But this is not, as so many times before, a scream of fear. This is a war cry, the roar of a righteous crusader.
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Wonderful, just keep it up and try to increase the frequency of chapter release while maintaining size and quality ideas, I feel a great potential in your story.
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