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sukses selalu buat autor ...
semoga lancar dan stabil updatenya
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Tancin
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Tancin
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Tancin
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Tancin
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Tancin
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Tancin
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skywalk3r
Cukup bagus bro alur cerita sama cara penyampaiannya. poles sedikit conversationnya biar terlihat ndak begitu monoton, Apalagi kalau sesekali diselipi kata-kata puitis, pasti lebih mantap.
saranku coba baca artikel punya Khrisna Pabicara 'Memperkaya diri dengan kosakata' (search aja)
Penjelasan dunia dan tingkatan kultivasi dan skill juga sepertinya perlu di tambah.
Sukses bro dengan novelnya, mampir juga ke novel ane :D
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Tancin
Ok π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»π΅π»
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