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natashatash98
Francesca and lucas best friends but somethings gotta be up. Comedic and fun to read it really sinks in the humor if youre american of course like me.
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Leblanc2079
The way Lucas threw himself at her is like how me and my girlfriend used to date. It show just how comedic this scene is and much relatable to some of the audience
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AlistairMoody
The zone could be something that changes the ways of man if I may add hehe. sounds interesting to me. The prologue was spot on entertaining as it didn't have anything to do with the 1st chapter
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Lucas_Gregory_0403
Interestingly, interesting of these interesting lot of sci-fi novels going on now. The prologue is somewhat funny and chapter 1 also somehow funny but subtle comedy.
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calope_ramdev
Wow... its something to be waited for. It's interesting to me that the prologue has somehow something to do with this romance plot you gave in chapter one.
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DaoisttIpEU2
You are simply the best, Spiderweb and then this, man its so comic... i hope there are mind-bending scenes after this one. Im totally hooked by your stories. great job.
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Kirim_Filmfest
Please be good to your characters unlike the last one where you killed all off them over and over again. I like this Francesca her name seems like she's hot.
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WechangeMind1
It got me hooked... Now review mine, swap hehehe. Its funny in a way its also science fiction that prologue is spot on. Good luck at WPC, I thought Francesca could use some more lines too.
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RickterAndyRick
Can't wait for the next chapter, it was so funny hahaha. I hope he falls on the stairs and fall into her arms soon. If you can maybe post an update of dates it will get published.
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BIGBRO
Nice big bro, a comedy and scifi clumped up together. You really should redesign your cover. Make it more comic like how I felt reading your book.
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